1/3
1 Year of Service
Besides a VN you like being abandoned, is there anything more disheartening than finding an interesting story with writing that is worse than a Lifetime movie. I don't mean grammar or how fast they get to lewd, but the dialogue itself. What and how the characters talk can kill the immersion. Sorry to vent, but found one that I love the premise and they are killing me in the dialogue.
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