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1 Year of Service
Reminds me of my buddy who wanted to do almost like a podcast thing but not liveHe got me to interview him about a project for advertising, but it sounded so forced. Told him to explain things to me instead of to a audience. Works much better, wonder if that can apply to VN, just treat it as if there is no player watching?Such a common problem with a lot of stories, where you can just feel that the author is trying to talk to you directly, rather than having two characters talk to one another.
Dunno I'm not a professional writer.