discussion Complete KN Ren'Py DAZ It's Not a World for Alyssa [v1.9] [Partedes]

[Gotenga]

Very extensive your comment, but your ideas are worthless. Alyssa becoming a slut? No way!


Alyssa drunk and drug addict!!! What the fuck???


Definitely, if I need more ideas I wouldn't ask you.

Greetings!

Such an awesome take down of someone trying to 180 your awesome design of the character Alyssa. Her innate innocence coupled with the situations is what makes it interesting. You actually have to be creative to write scenarios that are at least somewhat believe able from her perspective while maintaining increasing action.

I wish more writers took your approach. You know, if you ever feel that the Alyssa character needs a pause (because she's so far down the kink rabbit hole you can't find her) you can always introduce a surprise smol that is even just a bit more Alyssa (a bit smaller, younger, slightly more innocent) to see how Alyssa reacts to her "friend" getting into similar situations.

Great job writing and keeping tempo in your VN!

 

[SpikeA1]

I hope it Has no Virus?

 

[gigan]

hey guys,
i fixed the replay mod with the missing scenes at least i hope i don´t oversee something.And a big thanks for @korochan48 to pointing that out

 

[Wankdorf]

So many missed opportunities.

Daddy scene with the redhead you get blueballed by Alyssa.

Grand-Daddy scene with the blonde girl stops before there is the real good action as well.

Instead we get a another forgettable gangbang scene with a bunch of retards.

I like this game but in my opinion this update was a bit disappointing.

 

[superpuma]

This update was great. Alyssa is still beautiful and hot, Caroline is excellent, there were no hyper-group sex scenes in the cinema... everything was almost perfect LOL. Bonnie and Sophie deserved my full attention. Let's wait for Molly to show us what she is capable of.... NO VIOLENCE, animals, drugs... HOT and free SEX. The game has been a success so far, so we need to change what's working.

 

[Milfybutt]

I also just love this game. Regular updates are great and they're big, it's a lot of content we're getting in each update. Keep it up pls @Partedes !
Too bad Grandpa and Caroline didn't get it on, hope they get another scene in the next update. I really liked the build up from the cam show to grandpa spanking and groping her.
Also I was hoping for a scene with that Molly kid or the big titted cashier Romina. I was already imagining Molly got some dick to suck from the dude in the cinema (because they left the hallway going somewhere).

 

[medo]

I also just love this game. Regular updates are great and they're big, it's a lot of content we're getting in each update. Keep it up pls @Partedes !
Too bad Grandpa and Caroline didn't get it on, hope they get another scene in the next update. I really liked the build up from the cam show to grandpa spanking and groping her.
Also I was hoping for a scene with that Molly kid or the big titted cashier Romina. I was already imagining Molly got some dick to suck from the dude in the cinema (because they left the hallway going somewhere).

I hope that Molly will appear in the next updates

 

[sourpuss]

She was also in the park a few updates ago. If her appearances stay as they are, then fine. I have less than no interest in any sexual content with her.

 

[skred]

Proof readers were out of town I guess.

 

[Deleted member 36437]

I thought this was completed...

 

[korochan48]

I thought this was completed...

Still far from complete I think maybe it is half way the story already.

 

[alphawhiskey220]

Cant. Stop. Fappin. Keep it fucking going man.

 

[Gotenga]

This VN does a very good job of incrementalism when it comes to the erotic scenes. Bit by bit drop by drop things happen and the mental tension is maintained well with clever writing of justifications. His recent scenes have had great models (like the gym scene) although the gang bang kink is getting a bit over played at this point.

Introduce another innocent character to corrupt or wrap it up I think. Great VN all around.

 

[_F_]

WDYM? Corruption is far from complete. She's not addicted to dick, doesn't have any tattoos or piercings, not pregnant, no plastic surgery, etc...

 

[Coteaz]

Android port please.

 

[strazaq]

WDYM? Corruption is far from complete. She's not addicted to dick, doesn't have any tattoos or piercings, not pregnant, no plastic surgery, etc...

No, please no piercings, tatoos or plastic surgeries... You can corrupt her in many ways, use and abuse her but don't change her into a bimbo. I hope it's not gonna happen. She's too pretty for that.

 

[cippssss]

yeah its pretty boring with tato.

 

[korochan48]

Yep agree with this you can still do corruption without making her a bimbo

 

[Bokkobokko]

I was sort of on the fence at first when I started playing this, thinking there's too many threats of violence involving guys that are either old, ugly, or homeless. But I've got to say, the dev does a really good job of juxtaposing the morbid situations with humor and finding ways for the women to usually enjoy the experiences despite how nasty the guys are. (The female models being very attractive also help!) I'm still pretty early in the game but, but I'm happy I gave it a chance.

 

[bandit32]

Love this game... Its a masterpiece...