discussion VN AI Ren'Py The Seven Seas [v1.3-Preview] [Zeruel]

[burnaman]

Unless I'm missing something, the content is very light for a 1.0 release (more like a .1). The ship driving minigame is not for me; I understand the controls and did several of the levels but the ship's hitbox seems inconsistent or the maps are not reliable.

The art is definitely AI and therefore there's some inconsistency in character depiction between scenes. However, I absolutely loved the animation.

Overall great start but given all the positive comments I thought there'd be more.

 

[Tenebreaux]

This is pretty good. Artwork works well. Will definitely keep an eye on this one.

 

[Moss]

How to stop the ship

Click to go in reverse

 

[skybreaker1780]

Looks good so far

 

[vogrin]

Seriously, why no android??

 

[Belnick]

no sex animations?

 

[superpuma]

Interesting... but what's the point of maneuvering the ship? I completed the mission and nothing happened, Maria appeared and that was it. NOTHING, just blah blah blah blah. There are two more options for ports to maneuver, do they lead to something different? I suggest you skip that part LOL
My favorite character was Helene receiving the award at the nudist camp.

 

[Belnick]

ship only goes left and right, so how to go down to the green boX?=

 

[zesergeant]

Is this like one of those "lolis are sluts and have fucked around/fucks around" type, or are you the cherry popper for them?

 

[Deleted member 112555]

ship only goes left and right, so how to go down to the green boX?=

Up and down on the keyboard.
It is indeed set up wierd.

Is this like one of those "lolis are sluts and have fucked around/fucks around" type, or are you the cherry popper for them?

It is the rich men in the world are all ****files and have an entire orginization set up to get them loli sluts.
The loli are all selected based on exploitablity.
Bad parents, orphans, victems of ****files with stockholm syndrom.

Currently they are all happy little sluts but the story does mention some will need to be punished(So i assume rape and mind break will be added)

The only virgins are in your characters background.
You character is a ****file who raped atleast 4 girls before he got caught and is given a: Serve us or die in prison deal.

 

[sk112211]

Nice for a first version, maybe a bit too much tempo in the story.
And yeah, the harbor minigame is odd and needs finetuning.
Inertia of a giant ship is one thing, but seemed like it kept accelerating after I stopped pressing the key for some reason.
Look forward to more

 

[RushdiaAhmad74]

can somebody teach me how to play this , I hit with game over once I left harbour

 

[Moss]

ship only goes left and right, so how to go down to the green boX?=

You can maneuver the ship forward and back and turn it left and right. You can also click on a distant point and the ship will head there.

Nice for a first version, maybe a bit too much tempo in the story.
And yeah, the harbor minigame is odd and needs finetuning.
Inertia of a giant ship is one thing, but seemed like it kept accelerating after I stopped pressing the key for some reason.
Look forward to more

You can hit reverse to slow down. I managed it by just not letting the ship ever get to full speed.

 

[asdfg-79t]

ship part would be nice with buttons for controls like



like that so it makes sense how it moves

 

[danzerino]

Will there be an android port?

 

[Pasiphae124]

Keep at it, this is awesome!

 

[Davidtoxy]

i take a seat here and wait for the future, i need much more

 

[LewisCarroll]

Good art & concept, poor story structure & pacing. There's a lot of potential here, but I was laughing at the pacing and plot too much to fully enjoy it.

Spoiler: To the Dev (Spoilers)

The story has an OK beginning, but the fact that everyone is so complicit in the MC's background just throws out realism. Perhaps make his background secret, or something the ship owner knows about. I thin the characters would benefit from more innocent (but revealing) clothing. Having all the female characters looking like 30yo hookers and porn stars is an eye roll for me. Take a look a "Such a Sharp Pain" for a balance between sexy and innocent. "Sexy" should be the money shot, not the default. The purpose is to keep them coming back for more, but you're already giving it all away in the first five minutes. The art, animations and mechanics were fine to pretty good though. You have all the ingredients for a fantastic game though. Good luck!

 

[zark]

Interesting... but what's the point of maneuvering the ship? I completed the mission and nothing happened, Maria appeared and that was it. NOTHING, just blah blah blah blah. There are two more options for ports to maneuver, do they lead to something different? I suggest you skip that part LOL
My favorite character was Helene receiving the award at the nudist camp.

I think the art changes if you do it faster. I have not tried but there is art with more and less on.

 

[zesergeant]

Up and down on the keyboard.
It is indeed set up wierd.


It is the rich men in the world are all ****files and have an entire orginization set up to get them loli sluts.
The loli are all selected based on exploitablity.
Bad parents, orphans, victems of ****files with stockholm syndrom.

Currently they are all happy little sluts but the story does mention some will need to be punished(So i assume rape and mind break will be added)

The only virgins are in your characters background.
You character is a ****file who raped atleast 4 girls before he got caught and is given a: Serve us or die in prison deal.

Ah, I guess that makes sense in the story/universe then.
I won't be touching this, I hate the "loli slut" (as in non virgin before MC/fucking around etc) thing, but yeah, gl to the dev.