discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ You Only Live Once (Yolo) [v0.1.5] [NekoFairys]

[Lurk-Shadow]

So far, the story is a bit nonsensical. But honestly, who gives a shit. It's pretty clear right off the bat that this isn't trying to replicate Shakespeare or something.
Too long have we been starved of more loli/hebe games, so I'm happy to get one that's not full on engrish or with renders from 2001, and it's also double-triple-fucking-fantastic that I don't think we'll see any sharing or cuckshit. Praying hard.

But like stated, the children all have massive issues. Some (like the developmental part) is caused by something out of anyone's control.
The bigger issues, that also explains the pacifier and diaper, has been caused by a massive asshole of a "dad". It might not make complete sense, but for a loliporn game, I think it fits the bill. No need to overthink it.

Have had a couple of scenes so far (with the DLC), and choices ofc. So I'm very happy for a 0.1.5 release like this.
It was great Friday gift to me lol

ETA: Ebony lolis, too rare. Big thumbs up (the butt)

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Now, to clarify I'm not done with all the content yet.
But there is a scene

Spoiler: Minor spoilers for harem

After you visit the neighbour, and you talk with Diana, and you can make a harem/non-harem choice. I chose harem, obviously. You get back and talk with Maria about it. Did anyone else have missing images here? 'ch4_094' to 098 were missing. I first downloaded from Go iirc, but that link is wrong, it's version 0.1(.0), so I redl from Megaup, which is 0.1.5. Tossed the DLC files in /game, and even did a ctrl-skip run to get back to where I was (there was some changed dialogue, since the skip stopped at several points, so I can confirm it's a newer version).
But both versions had these images missing.

I don't expect a porn game developer to have a degree in literature, but there comes a point where you should have some standards. The most important part of a game, movie, or book is the story. If the story sucks or makes no sense, everything else will suck too. I'm surprised that the games with the worst writing are the ones with loli/shota content, it's like the devs don't know how to make a game that makes sense. I don't know if I can say the name of another game, but I recently played "Little Green Hill" and man, the writing sucks. There are people in the comments saying that the game is great and has an amazing story. I can't enjoy a game if I see inconsistencies or things that make no sense because I lose immersion.

If you are familiar with the developer, you won't be surprised by anything in the game. If anything the content is consistent.

You will get:

1. Every female in the game is on the table as a love interest -- lolis included. They're also all fine with being in a harem of 50 bazillion females.
2. Every other male in the game will be a villain, or possibly a love interest if you pick that option (I know it's available but have never viewed the gay content).
3. The story will probably be nonsense with a good dose of poor English translations. The English isn't terrible, but you get a lot of euphemisms or idioms that are translated literally and don't really make sense in English.
4. There will be girls with disabilities. I assume this is a fetish of the developer. You will get girls in wheelchairs, developmental disabilities, speech impediments etc.
5. All the girls are hyper-sexual and will make advances toward the MC despite how much of a douche he may be. Yet, they all have no sexual experience and have never seen a penis, and don't know what cum is. Exception of course are the mothers in the game. They have to have just enough sexual experience to have children, but it was all bad, and the MC is way better and will be their savior.
6. All the girls will have similar personalities. They all do the shy "bite my lower lip" face. Also, is it just me, or do many of the older girls seem to still have baby teeth?
7. There will be exactly one black family of all girls. It's mandatory, but only one.
8. There will be a couple futa characters. You may get the option about the specifics of the private bits of these characters, but they will be present (not in this game yet, but I see the tag).

Anyway, consistency is nice. I know what I'm getting.

The worst thing you can do in games like this is make the story and dialogue poor, make all the characters hypersexualized, especially the lolis because it makes no sense, make them one-dimensional, make the MC almost like a saint without flaws, and here I find it annoying that they made Thorben an asshole over the smallest things. I get that you want to make it clear that he is an asshole, but making him mistreat the daughters because they didn't want to hug the MC? That's overly dramatic, and I feel like it's a wasted opportunity to give us the chance to decide how we want to act, whether we want to tell Thorben to stop being an asshole or do something like that. Instead, we have to put up with the spineless MC who just lets his "friend" mistreat his daughters...

Looks like I'll never be able to enjoy a good loli/shota game with a decent story.

 

[zesergeant]

I don't expect a porn game developer to have a degree in literature, but there comes a point where you should have some standards. The most important part of a game, movie, or book is the story. If the story sucks or makes no sense, everything else will suck too. I'm surprised that the games with the worst writing are the ones with loli/shota content, it's like the devs don't know how to make a game that makes sense. I don't know if I can say the name of another game, but I recently played "Little Green Hill" and man, the writing sucks. There are people in the comments saying that the game is great and has an amazing story. I can't enjoy a game if I see inconsistencies or things that make no sense because I lose immersion.

The worst thing you can do in games like this is make the story and dialogue poor, make all the characters hypersexualized, especially the lolis because it makes no sense, make them one-dimensional, make the MC almost like a saint without flaws, and here I find it annoying that they made Thorben an asshole over the smallest things. I get that you want to make it clear that he is an asshole, but making him mistreat the daughters because they didn't want to hug the MC? That's overly dramatic, and I feel like it's a wasted opportunity to give us the chance to decide how we want to act, whether we want to tell Thorben to stop being an asshole or do something like that. Instead, we have to put up with the spineless MC who just lets his "friend" mistreat his daughters...

Looks like I'll never be able to enjoy a good loli/shota game with a decent story.

I do like the ones with a good story too, don't get me wrong. Most of those however you'll find to be Japanese, and my untranslated too.
But sometimes I can take things for what they are. I laugh at the stupidity with some things in this game, but you also have to look at what it's trying to do.
Does it try to be deeper than it is? Nope. Try to tell a massively compelling story? Nope. Try to rapidly build a harem with a ton of sex? Hell yes.
For me it's worse when devs pretend that their AVNs are something they are clearly not.
There's no delusion here at all, and Neko is doing what she set out to do. I appreciate her approach here more, than if she just tried doing something that was supposed to be deep, when it's really not.

Ofc, this won't jive with everyone, and it's sad, because we get so few loli games (and even less straight shota games - not that this is one, but just saying) nowadays. But it is what it is.
I am mostly happy to get SOMETHING, especially when that something doesn't include disgusting shit like NTR or sharing.
I just want loli sex, and if they can get preggers, I'm even more happy.

 

[Bollagus]

Probably a stupid question, is this two different games, the DLC with loli, and the other without, or do I merge them to get the loli content?

 

[zesergeant]

Probably a stupid question, is this two different games, the DLC with loli, and the other without, or do I merge them to get the loli content?

You put the DLC files in the /game folder.
Then you will have options during some scenes that say "Talk with Elena" vs "Talk with Elena (DLC)" and things like that. They are clearly marked

 

[hrmm]

Does the game feature NTR or Sharing with other men?

Not so far, and I don't remember any NekoFairys games having it so I'd be surprised if it's there in the future. One of the main love interests (Maria) is married to your (former) best friend, but they apparently haven't had sex for quite a while. The other adult LIs so far are single/divorced, or haven't been with anyone other than you (your ex).

There's two potential boy LIs right now, and both of them are interested in (different) girls who are potential LIs. Whether that interest is just them being in the closet until you come along, and whether or not there might be any sharing with them in the future, is unknown at this point.

 

[Bollagus]

You put the DLC files in the /game folder.
Then you will have options during some scenes that say "Talk with Elena" vs "Talk with Elena (DLC)" and things like that. They are clearly marked

Ok, thanks!

 

[Hamsparty]

why are people making reviews as long as books?
damn just play and shut up

 

[MeHome]

A very promising game. It's simply about charming all females with your caring attitude and your enormous, seemingly hypnotizing dong. I like the playful and consensual way every relationship evolves effortlessly. from me.
I only wonder why the spoilers show some images from scenes, that doesn't exist in the current version. Or am I tripping?

 

[Yodasy]

Will ther in the futhure also watersport or peeing staff with the girls?

 

[zesergeant]

A very promising game. It's simply about charming all females with your caring attitude and your enormous, seemingly hypnotizing dong. I like the playful and consensual way every relationship evolves effortlessly. from me.
I only wonder why the spoilers show some images from scenes, that doesn't exist in the current version. Or am I tripping?

No, I was thinking about that too. Could be something that is upcoming Soon™, or something that was supposed to be added, but got scrapped.

Will ther in the futhure also watersport or peeing staff with the girls?

There is a chance, specifically with Lea (diaper + pacifier girl).
Most likely it will be optional, as forcing these kinks isn't a smart move, it's very niche.

 

[Isoclose]

Will there be a android version?

 

[highlrecommend]

Will there be a android version?

there is a request a port section (that not one single person knows about)
make sure you search first, make request here

https://lewdcorner.com/forums/ports.110/

 

[FrozenTomato]

Will there be a android version?

Try and make a port request on the dedicated thread (dont forget to link the game).

Or intall Joiplay, PC version works perfectly fine on android

 

[Lostandquiet73]

If you are familiar with the developer, you won't be surprised by anything in the game. If anything the content is consistent.

You will get:

1. Every female in the game is on the table as a love interest -- lolis included. They're also all fine with being in a harem of 50 bazillion females.
2. Every other male in the game will be a villain, or possibly a love interest if you pick that option (I know it's available but have never viewed the gay content).
3. The story will probably be nonsense with a good dose of poor English translations. The English isn't terrible, but you get a lot of euphemisms or idioms that are translated literally and don't really make sense in English.
4. There will be girls with disabilities. I assume this is a fetish of the developer. You will get girls in wheelchairs, developmental disabilities, speech impediments etc.
5. All the girls are hyper-sexual and will make advances toward the MC despite how much of a douche he may be. Yet, they all have no sexual experience and have never seen a penis, and don't know what cum is. Exception of course are the mothers in the game. They have to have just enough sexual experience to have children, but it was all bad, and the MC is way better and will be their savior.
6. All the girls will have similar personalities. They all do the shy "bite my lower lip" face. Also, is it just me, or do many of the older girls seem to still have baby teeth?
7. There will be exactly one black family of all girls. It's mandatory, but only one.
8. There will be a couple futa characters. You may get the option about the specifics of the private bits of these characters, but they will be present (not in this game yet, but I see the tag).

Anyway, consistency is nice. I know what I'm getting.

So regular power fantasy in AVNs

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I don't expect a porn game developer to have a degree in literature, but there comes a point where you should have some standards. The most important part of a game, movie, or book is the story. If the story sucks or makes no sense, everything else will suck too. I'm surprised that the games with the worst writing are the ones with loli/shota content, it's like the devs don't know how to make a game that makes sense. I don't know if I can say the name of another game, but I recently played "Little Green Hill" and man, the writing sucks. There are people in the comments saying that the game is great and has an amazing story. I can't enjoy a game if I see inconsistencies or things that make no sense because I lose immersion.

The worst thing you can do in games like this is make the story and dialogue poor, make all the characters hypersexualized, especially the lolis because it makes no sense, make them one-dimensional, make the MC almost like a saint without flaws, and here I find it annoying that they made Thorben an asshole over the smallest things. I get that you want to make it clear that he is an asshole, but making him mistreat the daughters because they didn't want to hug the MC? That's overly dramatic, and I feel like it's a wasted opportunity to give us the chance to decide how we want to act, whether we want to tell Thorben to stop being an asshole or do something like that. Instead, we have to put up with the spineless MC who just lets his "friend" mistreat his daughters...

Looks like I'll never be able to enjoy a good loli/shota game with a decent story.

I think it is somewhat expected. I don't want to diss the loli community, as I am a part of it, but how many of us with this kink actually have enough social skills to imagine what an actually decent plot with authentic people looks like? Most loli content out there is just power fantasy destined to quench the author's and the audience's desires, the plot being just a poor device to make sure the MC becomes the world and savior of a bunch of girls. They don't tell authentic stories, they don't engage with any topic like what it means to love in such age gap relationships or how the world may actually react, and how the characters may actually try to deal with the world's reactions. All they do is serve as an excuse for sex scenes.

That's why, plot-wise, vanilla or "Patreon-slop" content may actually be hundreds of times better. Eternum tells a really nice story about a 'virtual world' merging with reality. Wild Cats has a very moving story about a man who had to give up on his dream due to a lesion and is now being given a second chance in life. You don't see that kind of stuff in loli games. At best you'll get something like SSP, which is not even a good story, it's just another harem power fantasy, with the sole exception being that nobody knows what the family tree actually looks like.

 

[moncho]

Not Android?

 

[zesergeant]

So regular power fantasy in AVNs

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I think it is somewhat expected. I don't want to diss the loli community, as I am a part of it, but how many of us with this kink actually have enough social skills to imagine what an actually decent plot with authentic people looks like? Most loli content out there is just power fantasy destined to quench the author's and the audience's desires, the plot being just a poor device to make sure the MC becomes the world and savior of a bunch of girls. They don't tell authentic stories, they don't engage with any topic like what it means to love in such age gap relationships or how the world may actually react, and how the characters may actually try to deal with the world's reactions. All they do is serve as an excuse for sex scenes.

That's why, plot-wise, vanilla or "Patreon-slop" content may actually be hundreds of times better. Eternum tells a really nice story about a 'virtual world' merging with reality. Wild Cats has a very moving story about a man who had to give up on his dream due to a lesion and is now being given a second chance in life. You don't see that kind of stuff in loli games. At best you'll get something like SSP, which is not even a good story, it's just another harem power fantasy, with the sole exception being that nobody knows what the family tree actually looks like.

If we're going to go down the route of thinking in terms of reality, then loli games has to be tossed out as a whole, almost.
There would barely be any harem elements either.
Now if we translate lolis to real ones (don't touch real children), then the only way something like a loli game that's realistic would happen, would be grooming and/or rape (even if they're willing, it is statutory).
Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't mind a loli game with an insane story or something, but if we drag too much reality into it, it becomes creepy, and (even regular) harem becomes basically non-existent.

I don't want too much real, because then you'll start dragging in - non textbook blablabla - NTR - or at best, netori into it - and that shit is disgustang.
If I want a good story, I'll just watch the extended LotR trilogy again.
There might come a dev along that actually can balance making a good story with harem and/or loli, but I'd rather take over-the-top harem fests with a paper thin story, than get no loli at all, tbh.

 

[Mindy2000]

What is that song ?

 

[highlrecommend]

Not Android?

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Today at 8:39 AM

Will there be a android version?

there is a request a port section (that not one single person knows about)
make sure you search first, make request here

https://lewdcorner.com/forums/ports.110/

• highlrecommend

 

[AlBetGam]

I don't expect a porn game developer to have a degree in literature, but there comes a point where you should have some standards. The most important part of a game, movie, or book is the story. If the story sucks or makes no sense, everything else will suck too. I'm surprised that the games with the worst writing are the ones with loli/shota content, it's like the devs don't know how to make a game that makes sense. I don't know if I can say the name of another game, but I recently played "Little Green Hill" and man, the writing sucks. There are people in the comments saying that the game is great and has an amazing story. I can't enjoy a game if I see inconsistencies or things that make no sense because I lose immersion.

My working theory is that the smaller a fetish or kink, the lower the overall quality of the games catering to it. For two reasons- first, because most of any genre is crap (Sturgeon's Law) and with a very niche genre there just aren't enough games for there to be many gems amid the wave of crap. Compare incest- there are a metric crapton of very awful incest games, but the genre is popular enough that there's hundreds or thousands of games of incest games overall and thus quite a few very good ones. For every Desert Stalker there's 20 Bad Bobby clones that got abandoned before second update, but there's so many games overall that it's alright. Loli though? Tiny to begin with, if 19 of every 20 games suck you're left with very little.

Second reason is that when a genre is so small the people looking for it lower their standards. If you haven't eaten in a week you probably don't complain when someone hands you burnt oatmeal; same principle, if the game that just came out is the first new game catering to your fetish all year, you tend to praise the fact that it's there at all instead of being critical of its flaws. So the games in that genre don't get the same rigor of critique as other genres do, and devs can get away with a lower quality product and still maintain a playerbase. Which is what I see here, objectively speaking the writing here is very weak and yet it's fairly average for many of the loli games I see but it's getting pretty mild criticism here; I've seen e.g. college games with writing slightly better than this get roasted alive.

If we're going to go down the route of thinking in terms of reality, then loli games has to be tossed out as a whole, almost.
There would barely be any harem elements either.
Now if we translate lolis to real ones (don't touch real children), then the only way something like a loli game that's realistic would happen, would be grooming and/or rape (even if they're willing, it is statutory).
Don't get me wrong, I wouldn't mind a loli game with an insane story or something, but if we drag too much reality into it, it becomes creepy, and (even regular) harem becomes basically non-existent.

I don't want too much real, because then you'll start dragging in - non textbook blablabla - NTR - or at best, netori into it - and that shit is disgustang.
If I want a good story, I'll just watch the extended LotR trilogy again.
There might come a dev along that actually can balance making a good story with harem and/or loli, but I'd rather take over-the-top harem fests with a paper thin story, than get no loli at all, tbh.

I don't think there's any good reason it has to be either or. You can have a slightly more plausible story without going full creepy, and you can have a higher quality story that keeps the same fetishes. Just in this one for instance:

• Don't have the blonde girl start grinding on MC literally minutes after meeting him. Why rush? Just write in extra time for her to get to know and become attracted to him.
• Don't make Thorben such a caricature.
• Write a less cringy "MC saves friend's stepdaughter" scene.
• Give the MC observable qualities to attract women instead of them all magically knowing he's wonderful after ten seconds of conversation.
• etc.

I don't think those are unreasonable or excessive improvements, and I don't think including them would clash with the harem or the loli elements or make the game unwritable.