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8 Months of Service
Don’t just have paragraphs of text to read. If I have to scroll past several paragraphs to get to the next screen, on every screen, it gets annoying and I end up not reading it all and probably miss something important. If you need to give the player that much context, find a way to reduce the text or make it easier to consume. You’re making a porn game not a book. (That goes for visual novels too)