for the first impression......... the art...... to keep myself around...... the story........ and to ensure i do not have a stroke the writing quality i try and holdon for some-time if the game has very poor writing to see if it does get better later in the visual novel or game but it is rare that it does...... i have been chased away from some game just because of how bad the writing is........ even when i could bring my self to look past the art and such
how ever if you are going by what i am saying then i am thinking the art would be the most important thank to it being the decider in my downloading
Dialog. Nothing will make me drop a game quicker than bad dialog. Whether it's a bad translation (engrish), poor grammar, or inappropriate word choice, if it's not well written I'll probably give up on it.