discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ SUCH A SHARP PAIN [V0.11.7R] [KETZAL]

[kbakon]

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? Can you help me choose which scene to scene : Backdoor MC, Nicole and Alice? Thanks

I still cannot unlock this scene, despite finding the 'plug' twice. I'm on the harem path. TBH there are so many decision paths that save points between branches are too cumbersome and unmanageable. I'm a huge fan of this game but that specific problem will only get worse over time.

 

[User_12]

I still cannot unlock this scene, despite finding the 'plug' twice. I'm on the harem path. TBH there are so many decision paths that save points between branches are too cumbersome and unmanageable. I'm a huge fan of this game but that specific problem will only get worse over time.

You can click on WT and Hints in the settings screen, you'll see "MC's Corruption needs to be above 50" and "Alice's Corruption needs to be above 60 and MC's domination needs to be above 50"

 

[kbakon]

Thank you as always, Ketzal.

 

[Jkrollin]

Spoiler: Questions can't figure out

SO Macy has incest relationship with her father. mc is not his son with macy. nicole is mc's half sister? cassy is mc's half sister? where does the clem fit to the story? why macy dont like to include nicole to the INCEST THING between macy and MC? alice is nicole's daughter(due to the egg donor)where and how does the HAILEY happend?

we need entire chapter to figure this questions out to Enjoy THE VN and be happy in future without concerns

 

[Nastastic]

Spoiler: Questions can't figure out

SO Macy has incest relationship with her father. mc is not his son with macy. nicole is mc's half sister? cassy is mc's half sister? where does the clem fit to the story? why macy dont like to include nicole to the INCEST THING between macy and MC? alice is nicole's daughter(due to the egg donor)where and how does the HAILEY happend?

we need entire chapter to figure this questions out to Enjoy THE VN and be happy in future without concerns

My theory is that Hailey is Cassey's natural daughter (they managed to conceive when they weren't stressed out about it).

 

[Paslicivi]

Such A Sharp Pain [v0.7.1R]​

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Nice update. Have Fun.

 

[UZTO]

Well that was disappointing. This update didn't even meet my lowest expectations.

 

[Hellster]

Well that was disappointing. This update didn't even meet my lowest expectations.

Doesn't help when people leak it when it's not complete.
There would be Alice Path content too if people bothered to wait for public release, which is today or tomorrow, but people are impatient.

 

[Freshenstein]

Doesn't help when people leak it when it's not complete.
There would be Alice Path content too if people bothered to wait for public release, which is today or tomorrow, but people are impatient.

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[HuelB]

Doesn't help when people leak it when it's not complete.
There would be Alice Path content too if people bothered to wait for public release, which is today or tomorrow, but people are impatient.

I extracted the images and there is actually Alice content. Don't know if it's the complete Alice content, but there certainly is a folder with new images of her.

 

[User_12]

So you've got the game developer promising to publish the game on the 16th or 17th, either today or tomorrow, and you leak the game, the very day I'm going to publish the game? Really? Are we there yet? Have I given you a single reason to doubt the promises I've made here? All right, I get the message. Enjoy the game.

 

[Turit]

This situation also happens in the F95 forum with Project Myriam. Even there the developer asked to wait two weeks and then he posts the update himself but sometimes there is someone who doesn't wait and leaks the new version. You have to be patient

 

[Unsmile]

A day faster than official release and destroy the motivation of developer. Not good at all dude.

 

[BadJM]

There must be a way of letting only the thread owners post links. The dev is active on the forum and does public releases, there is no reason to leak the update here, other than being an asshole.

 

[GivLoli]

So overall very happy with the update. The scene between Hailey, MC, Leana was super hot. The reunion with the wife was great. The flashback with the sister was also super sweet and hot. Great stuff!
Some criticisms though:
- I dont like how the girls tend to tie up their hair into a bun for sex. Please let their hair down for the sex scenes! It looks much better!
- I am not a fan of voyeurism and I dont want to see another guy get blown by his mom while I bang the shop keeper. If this happens on the monitor on the corner of the screen I dont mind, but I had to watch this stuff full screen when I really just wanted to focus on the shopkeeper girl. If you have to show that stuff, please do it before the sex scene, then once sex scene starts focus on the girl MC is with.
- I would have liked to see Hailey get corrupted by Leana a little like Tiffany did before her scene with MC, it felt a bit too straight forward to me, would have preferred for her to have a girl talk with Leana first where she talks about the things she did with MC, then Hailey gets curious and says "Oh I want to try that too with daddy!"

But overall, very happy, great to see Cassey and Hailey being back in the family and their reunification scene and Nicole's jealousy were really cute! Thank you for your work Ketzal, love you, please keep it up!

 

[User_12]

So overall very happy with the update. The scene between Hailey, MC, Leana was super hot. The reunion with the wife was great. The flashback with the sister was also super sweet and hot. Great stuff!
Some criticisms though:
- I dont like how the girls tend to tie up their hair into a bun for sex. Please let their hair down for the sex scenes! It looks much better!
- I am not a fan of voyeurism and I dont want to see another guy get blown by his mom while I bang the shop keeper. If this happens on the monitor on the corner of the screen I dont mind, but I had to watch this stuff full screen when I really just wanted to focus on the shopkeeper girl. If you have to show that stuff, please do it before the sex scene, then once sex scene starts focus on the girl MC is with.
- I would have liked to see Hailey get corrupted by Leana a little like Tiffany did before her scene with MC, it felt a bit too straight forward to me, would have preferred for her to have a girl talk with Leana first where she talks about the things she did with MC, then Hailey gets curious and says "Oh I want to try that too with daddy!"

But overall, very happy, great to see Cassey and Hailey being back in the family and their reunification scene and Nicole's jealousy were really cute! Thank you for your work Ketzal, love you, please keep it up!

Thank you very much for your review, which means a lot to me. You're right about the shop scene. I'm going to rework it. Thank you so much.

 

[Erran]

Thank you very much for your review, which means a lot to me. You're right about the shop scene. I'm going to rework it. Thank you so much.

I instead really enjoyed your original intent.
The simultaneous interchange of renders between the two scenes happening at the same time felt really exciting and conductive to the parallel of no moral barriers being in the way fueling the moment they were having there aswell.

its understandable we all each have our personal likes and dislikes as there will always be both people enjoying your decisions or not, so I recommend keeping scenes as you originally envisioned them and enjoy them the most (unless you happen to personally hate it too and wish to spend time reworking it).

 

[User_12]

I instead really enjoyed your original intent.
The simultaneous interchange of renders between the two scenes happening at the same time felt really exciting and conductive to the parallel of no moral barriers being in the way fueling the moment they were having there aswell.

its understandable we all each have our personal likes and dislikes as there will always be both people enjoying your decisions or not, so I recommend keeping scenes as you originally envisioned them and enjoy them the most (unless you happen to personally hate it too and wish to spend time reworking it).

I'm going to slip in a kind of choice so that people can see or not see this scene.

 

[BadJM]

Just out of curiosity is there any difference in terms of content between the version that was leaked here and the public version the dev will release?

 

[Paslicivi]

So you've got the game developer promising to publish the game on the 16th or 17th, either today or tomorrow, and you leak the game, the very day I'm going to publish the game? Really? Are we there yet? Have I given you a single reason to doubt the promises I've made here? All right, I get the message. Enjoy the game.

What is the message you understand, because there is no message at all. There is a difference between pirate forums and channels where you share official posts. Leaks do not follow the developer's schedule. Developers can make their own official posts as they wish. Pirate forums allow developers to reach a wider range of players. If your game is good enough, then you can find more support. You can't rule against a pirate. If such a thing existed, companies wouldn't allocate such large budgets for DRM for AAA games today.

I played your game and update and I also stated that I liked it. Frankly, I couldn't understand the reason for this reaction. I hope you get more support because frankly, you're doing a job that deserves it.