discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ SUCH A SHARP PAIN [V0.11.7R] [KETZAL]

[Nicest_Incest]

how do you know this and from what age is this possible? This is something I've been curious about.

The internet, where else? Other than maybe personal experience. Dunno about recently but back in the 1990's and before there was Usenet, that included text-only bulletin boards (and sometimes ASCII binaries that when decoded made a .jpg image) and forums for every topic imaginable, including ****philia (prior to when laws were changed that made ISP's and companies like Giganews remove it, and you can bet when those laws and crap like the Communication Decency Act of 1996 were being cooked up and debated literally everyone with a Usenet account was copy/pasting/downloading everything they could grab like mad, pretty much in the same fashion that Internet Archive is now getting server-hammered now that they lost some copyright lawsuit or the 10x usage increase of Napster the day after their case was lost back in 2000, gotta love the Streisand Effect and Black-Friday-Sale Effect). But yeah I have heard of 1st graders (6yo in US) rubbing one out or getting a friend to help tickle their sensitive spots. I have to dig up my old HDD's to be sure but irrc some of those Usenet stories and recollections included when posters first orgasmed (sometimes still in kindergarten/5yo, though memory starts to get hazy that far back, human memory being the way it is and all).

 

[Nicest_Incest]

so Cassey's mom's name is Leana, n Nicole's daughter's name is Leana...that's not a coincidence; what's the connection?

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so does this mean the MC will dominate Rebecca, or vice versa? ok, pretty clear MC dominates her, making her a submissive...so who's Lisa, n apparently choosing the Dom route forces players to lose a relationship with Lisa?

Lisa is Rebecca's daughter (the blonde loli hanging out with her friend Luna in an earlier scene in the office). She's locked out on the dom path presumably because if you treat Rebecca like a trashy cum dumpster sub she will keep her daughter away from you (as any mom with a lick of sense would). But build some trust first and make her fall in love with you to the point she would kill someone for you if asked and maybe you can talk her into letting you have some sexy time with her daughter and maybe even a threesome. I know of several guys (not just in the Lolita novel) dating middle-aged women around their own age with little actual interest in them, but just to get a chance to long-game groom (with the ultimate goal of fucking later when it's legal, but I wouldn't doubt it if they already done so and they are just keeping it a secret) their far hotter daughters, so that isn't as far-fetched as it may sound to some.

 

[iopq]

A good game but the balance between character engagement and meaningful choice needs to be looked at.
Also gating very good scenes behind 'hidden' triggers doesn't really serve much purpose, except to rob the unaware player of that experience.

The choice at the hospital holds so much weight it makes the constant path questions feel diluted and somewhat meaningless. Also the character conveying zero interest but still engaging in acts with different characters just makes for awkward gameplay. eg) you can be more or less fully committed to the Blood path, then be like "lol jk family path -> bang Casey -> jk btw lolcya." My first reaction was that this was just an oversight but similar occurrences happen regardless of the path. (albeit they are more acceptable from Nicole given her nymphomaniac behavior.)

Maybe stuff like this somehow get tied together later with things being planned or being more than they seem between the wife and sister, as there are hints and potential ways to segue into it.
The Clem introduction and part of the story is very jarring. Maybe before the introduction with Alice convey more about the MC's work/wife/acquaintances. Just a simple description while he's at the 'office' then he can think to himself "Wow, I can't wait till I get home today," and transition like that. Casey, Clem, and the MC's connection are way too shrouded to make a first playthrough coherent and fluid.

Player agency is generally a good thing, but I think some of the attempts have gone a bit overboard and more is actually turning into less

 

[GivLoli]

>thread has a discussion spanning multiple pages at what age little girls can orgasm
>thread talking about age of consent laws and child marriage
>one guy casually talking about fingering his real life 14yo sister

Extremely based thread. I am proud of you guys.

 

[whiteD_4_black_hoes]

Lisa is Rebecca's daughter (the blonde loli hanging out with her friend Luna in an earlier scene in the office). She's locked out on the dom path presumably because if you treat Rebecca like a trashy cum dumpster sub she will keep her daughter away from you (as any mom with a lick of sense would). But build some trust first and make her fall in love with you to the point she would kill someone for you if asked and maybe you can talk her into letting you have some sexy time with her daughter and maybe even a threesome. I know of several guys (not just in the Lolita novel) dating middle-aged women around their own age with little actual interest in them, but just to get a chance to long-game groom (with the ultimate goal of fucking later when it's legal, but I wouldn't doubt it if they already done so and they are just keeping it a secret) their far hotter daughters, so that isn't as far-fetched as it may sound to some.

thanks for the explanation...yeah, i post as i play, so no idea who Luna even is yet, or that whole thing about Macy shooting herself, n the question of whether she's actually dead or still alive (n that whole thing about the scene in front of the school where u can click on a motorcycle helmet, with Cassey n Hailey out front...yeah, idc about spoilers; i use walkthroughs on every game i play)

although it is a bit disappointing that the dev chose not to do a Dom route that included Lisa; if MC 'truly' converted Rebecca into being a sub, n asked her to present her daughter to him so he could groom n treat her the same way as her mom, not only is that logical n consistent with the storyline, but EXTREMELY hot!!

 

[User_12]

thanks for the explanation...yeah, i post as i play, so no idea who Luna even is yet, or that whole thing about Macy shooting herself, n the question of whether she's actually dead or still alive (n that whole thing about the scene in front of the school where u can click on a motorcycle helmet, with Cassey n Hailey out front...yeah, idc about spoilers; i use walkthroughs on every game i play)

although it is a bit disappointing that the dev chose not to do a Dom route that included Lisa; if MC 'truly' converted Rebecca into being a sub, n asked her to present her daughter to him so he could groom n treat her the same way as her mom, not only is that logical n consistent with the storyline, but EXTREMELY hot!!

Trust me what I have planned with Lisa is even better

 

[whiteD_4_black_hoes]

Trust me what I have planned with Lisa is even better

@ketzal !! heya mate! n i dunno, i'm a pretty sick-n-twisted fuck, n am really into HC bdsm...so seeing the MC treat Lisa tha same way as Rebecca, especially right in front of her, n making her help, including having Rebecca punish n dominate her own daughter, is REALLY fucking hawt n sexy AF to me. but hey, that's just the machinations of what goes on in my head on a daily basis

 

[superpuma]

KETZAL... when I get to the part where the MC is at the bar drinking, it quickly scrolls through some images of Nicole and Cassey... but I've already played the game in several ways and I can't get to these images.... TELL ME, what a surprise pleasant will we have with LISA? lol and don't forget LUNA.

 

[SavageHenry]

Is that all there was with Tiffany the scene in the school theatre? Shame about the story aspect of it, was way out there

 

[marcomemmey]

Very good and beautiful game. I love it! But it would be even better if the walkthrough was a little more informative about the consequences of the decisions made. Especially since the points can be changed. The warnings about important choices are cool, but it would be great to know exactly what they lead to. I couldn't figure out how to get to the ending where Macy is alive, also, for example, which decision causes the mc to get arrested at the end

to get arrested you have to make Cassey pissed at the office, choice is more or less "break your promise and say you love Alice". There's three outcomes to the interaction at the office, and you can see the result on how the call goes just before going shopping with the girls. If you call and Hailey picks up, that's the best outcome with Cassey, if Cassey picks up thats the "middle" outcome, and if nobody picks up then its the worst outcome and you will get the police at the end as long as you don't get the "Macy alive" flag

 

[Tico7533on]

Very good and beautiful game. I love it! But it would be even better if the walkthrough was a little more informative about the consequences of the decisions made. Especially since the points can be changed. The warnings about important choices are cool, but it would be great to know exactly what they lead to. I couldn't figure out how to get to the ending where Macy is alive, also, for example, which decision causes the mc to get arrested at the end

What you said there, reminded me of the biggest highlight for me in The Guardian as of late, where the player had the option to kill his mother. And I hated that bitch, so I did kill her, but after I had done it, I rolled back, and let her live, because I would prefer to reconcile with her, but time will tell if she really will redeem herself, or go back to her old bitchy ways. But I gotta say, that short period after I had killed her, was soooo satisfying, as you finally took your revenge and anger out on her. But I'm a little confused about the part you said about Macy being alive or not, as I'm not quite up to speed on SASP for about two updates, I think. But let's leave it at that, as spoilers suck, am I right?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

>thread has a discussion spanning multiple pages at what age little girls can orgasm
>thread talking about age of consent laws and child marriage
>one guy casually talking about fingering his real life 14yo sister

Extremely based thread. I am proud of you guys.

I didn't just finger her, had 6 kids with her too and we're still together. Even working on an AVN based on us (unlike every other AVN with that this-is-fictional and everyone-is-18 disclaimers, so will be quite unique). I just never put too much stock in other haters' opinions, I've always been that way, so I'm pretty open about it. Sis is mostly the same way as long as it doesn't get the kids bullied at school and what not. She won't let me post a pic of her on the internet (31 and still hot) but if you had a sister that looked like her you'd prob fuck her too if she told you she wanted to ride you (she wasn't exactly THAT forward but same idea), but just keep it in the closet due to peer pressure and fear of what other people will think.

 

[whiteD_4_black_hoes]

WARNING...MAJOR SPOILER ALERT!!!

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so does this mean Macy only survives if u choose the 'bonds of blood' path, n dies if u choose the 'family' path? if so, that sucks, b/c i want her in my harem to groom Hailey, Brittany, Lisa, Luna, etc. n how much longer before u get to the scene in front of the school with the motorcycle helmet clue?

P.S. i have no idea why the 1st image won't load; did the exact same process for all 3 ?‍

 

[Nicest_Incest]

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so does this mean Macy only survives if u choose the 'bonds of blood' path, n dies if u choose the 'family' path? if so, that sucks, b/c i want her in my harem to groom Hailey, Brittany, Lisa, Luna, etc. n how much longer before u get to the scene in front of the school with the motorcycle helmet clue?

P.S. i have no idea why the 1st image won't load; did the exact same process for all 3 ?‍

Yup, so can't get Cassey and Macy both in the same playthrough (makes sense, they can't stand each other and certainly don't want to be Eskimo sisters, and I'm kinda surprised that Cassey and Nicole kissed and made up come to think of it). BoB = family members only (Nicole/Alice/Leana/Tiffany/any future relatives added). Family = Harem that is the 3 families (Nicole's, Cassey's. Rebecca's) and everyone else (with Macy dead). So if you want the path with the most pussies then you are stuck with Family/Rebecca romance.

 

[whiteD_4_black_hoes]

Yup, so can't get Cassey and Macy both in the same playthrough (makes sense, they can't stand each other and certainly don't want to be Eskimo sisters, and I'm kinda surprised that Cassey and Nicole kissed and made up come to think of it). BoB = family members only (Nicole/Alice/Leana/Tiffany/any future relatives added). Family = Harem that is the 3 families (Nicole's, Cassey's. Rebecca's) and everyone else (with Macy dead). So if you want the path with the most pussies then you are stuck with Family/Rebecca romance.

i'm really surprised that this far into the game, n with as many potential options as the MC has, he's only actually dicked 2 girls so far?? (present day timeline that is) gotta be honest, kinda disappointing; feel like MC is getting cockblocked, n being forced to do yet another 'slow burn' storyline

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

I'm not interested in the mommy thing and the only Milf that's hot is MC's sister. Macy is a Gilf (yikes). I'm fine with her out of the story.
There's enough of big titted women causing MC trouble.
Macy showed up at the door in my play-through but next update I'll probably change that as one of the daughters may show up at the end.
Preferred path is the bond of blood. The wife can take a hike.

 

[hrmm]

Yup, so can't get Cassey and Macy both in the same playthrough (makes sense, they can't stand each other and certainly don't want to be Eskimo sisters, and I'm kinda surprised that Cassey and Nicole kissed and made up come to think of it). BoB = family members only (Nicole/Alice/Leana/Tiffany/any future relatives added). Family = Harem that is the 3 families (Nicole's, Cassey's. Rebecca's) and everyone else (with Macy dead). So if you want the path with the most pussies then you are stuck with Family/Rebecca romance.

From what Ketzal and others have said, it seems like you can have Macy alive in the Family/Harem path. She won't show up at the end of the update, but if you picked the right choices she's alive and presumably will show up later.

Went looking for the post to make sure I wasn't just imagining things: https://lewdcorner.com/threads/such-a-sharp-pain-v0-6-32rp-ketzal.35/page-52#post-15177

 

[Deleted member 9689]

@ketzal !! heya mate! n i dunno, i'm a pretty sick-n-twisted fuck, n am really into HC bdsm...so seeing the MC treat Lisa tha same way as Rebecca, especially right in front of her, n making her help, including having Rebecca punish n dominate her own daughter, is REALLY fucking hawt n sexy AF to me. but hey, that's just the machinations of what goes on in my head on a daily basis

I gotta admit, that was also going through my mind. I also had imagined Lisa a biiiit younger. She's hot, but I was hoping for a bit like a submissive ditz like her mom is.

i'm really surprised that this far into the game, n with as many potential options as the MC has, he's only actually dicked 2 girls so far?? (present day timeline that is) gotta be honest, kinda disappointing; feel like MC is getting cockblocked, n being forced to do yet another 'slow burn' storyline

only 2? Leana, Nicole, Rebeca and Alice makes four. and with the way the storyline is developing he might add Cassey, Hailley, Luna, Lisa, Tifanny and Eve to that mix (and Clem who came kinda out of the blue).

 

[Deleted member 9689]

I done now a couple of playthrough, and what sets this game also a bit apart from other games is that you kinda have these aliances, or groups of people, and I wonder what will happen to them , and interaction:
The Blood Alliance - Alice, Leana and Nicole: Much as Nicole described, I'm guessing here the primarily hope is to have a incestious household. am I wrong to remember that Nicole even alluded that the MC could also have fun with the children born?
The Family Alliance - Cassey, Hailley (and Alice?): As Cassey says, she wants to go back to how thing were but allow the MC to bed Hailley and Alice
The Professionals - Rebecca, Luna and Lisa: dominate all of them
The Past - Tifanny and Eve: This is a bit of a blind spot. I don't really understand the Eve character from the flashbacks. She was pushing the MC to kiss Nicole, to go with Cassey, but then has a super romantic moment with the MC before she leaves? Also, Eve has the highest corruption in the game, so I'm wondering if there might be another character that enters here.
The French Connection: Clem, Sister??, Niece??: Alors, ici je pense that our MC might have a daughter/sister somewhere in France that will turn up, and that this is what Clem was researching. and I wouldn't be surprised if this daughter/sister has a smol daughter as well.

and then there is Sophie, I'm not sure what will happen there. MC can cum in her in the flashbacks and the game very clearly indicates that your choice there has a big impact on the game. So... Imagine that you have impregnated both your mom and your aunt and that both will have children that you fathered, and both... with daughters.

 

[Nastastic]

I done now a couple of playthrough, and what sets this game also a bit apart from other games is that you kinda have these aliances, or groups of people, and I wonder what will happen to them , and interaction:
The Blood Alliance - Alice, Leana and Nicole: Much as Nicole described, I'm guessing here the primarily hope is to have a incestious household. am I wrong to remember that Nicole even alluded that the MC could also have fun with the children born?
The Family Alliance - Cassey, Hailley (and Alice?): As Cassey says, she wants to go back to how thing were but allow the MC to bed Hailley and Alice
The Professionals - Rebecca, Luna and Lisa: dominate all of them
The Past - Tifanny and Eve: This is a bit of a blind spot. I don't really understand the Eve character from the flashbacks. She was pushing the MC to kiss Nicole, to go with Cassey, but then has a super romantic moment with the MC before she leaves? Also, Eve has the highest corruption in the game, so I'm wondering if there might be another character that enters here.
The French Connection: Clem, Sister??, Niece??: Alors, ici je pense that our MC might have a daughter/sister somewhere in France that will turn up, and that this is what Clem was researching. and I wouldn't be surprised if this daughter/sister has a smol daughter as well.

and then there is Sophie, I'm not sure what will happen there. MC can cum in her in the flashbacks and the game very clearly indicates that your choice there has a big impact on the game. So... Imagine that you have impregnated both your mom and your aunt and that both will have children that you fathered, and both... with daughters.

Regarding Eve, her and Nicole have been as thick as thieves since they were kids. Whatever shitty thing Nicole did to Cassey at that party to make her want to kill herself, I'm sure Eve was part of it. And they apparently set it up so the MC would also seem complicit, thus causing him to feel somewhat responsible for Cassey later on. It may also be that once the MC went "off the reservation" and started comforting Cassey, it could have been Eve who tipped off Cassey's dad (who may also be MC's dad) to have him come down and beat the MC badly enough to put him in the hospital. It is very possible with human nature for guilt to manifest as resentment and misplaced anger, and that may be at the root of Eve's unreasoning rage and hatred toward the MC 25 years later.