discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ SUCH A SHARP PAIN [V0.11.7R] [KETZAL]

[User_35004]

Awesome VN. Absolutely loved the pregnancy fantasy with Leana

 

[AzulaBestGirl]

@OP, I just saw your post on F95 about the removal. Sad to hear, but a bit of advice, if and only if you plan on doing this for years to come:

• People will support your game on Patreon even if you don't post the game there, nor any renders that could get you in trouble.
• F95 is absolutely amazing for advertisement, but it's also draconian on this kind of content. No way around it. If you plan on staying in this game making thing for a long long time, I'd do a teen game there for advertisment, link subscribestar in the game's description. People know what it means to be on subscribestar.
  • You can even call the game a "Demo". Where the user selects "prolog", "mid-game scene" and "endgame scene". Just to get a taste, if you don't wanna do a full game.
  • It's better to be abandoned on F95 rather than banned.
  • I would also abuse the system and outright say that this is a free sample of the kind of games you make, check out your subscribestar.
• If you want cross pollination, I'd try to get my name out there. Have a pixiv account, same exact name. Put some more risque content there. So people see your teen game on F95. In the description do an "about me" section mentioning you have multiple games.
  • This will get people thinking. Has been making games for (idk 4 years), but only one game. And a subscribestar. Google shows pixiv, risque content. Dots connect.

P.S. - Pixiv is also going to the shitter, so censure and don't go TOOO insane there either.

 

[ramvivat]

a question about Aunt Sophia - will she appear in the narrative in the form of a figure of the second, or maybe a third plan, or will she remain in the form of references and memories? maybe take a place in the family that previously belonged to the mother, that is, Mackie? MC seemed to love her a little less than Mackie. I hope for her to appear in the narrative in a more visible form.

appearing in narrative - i mean after the death of MC's mom...

 

[User_12]

I got this type error each time when the game show path and choose please help
'm sorry, but an uncaught exception occurred.

While running game code:
File "game/script.rpy", line 56, in script call
call prol_01 from call_prol_01
File "game/Story/Prologue/pro_01.rpy", line 100, in script
menu:
TypeError: unhashable type: 'RevertableList'

-- Full Traceback ------------------------------------------------------------

Full traceback:
File "game/script.rpy", line 56, in script call
call prol_01 from call_prol_01
File "game/Story/Prologue/pro_01.rpy", line 100, in script
menu:
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\ast.py", line 1628, in execute
choice = renpy.exports.menu(choices, self.set, args, kwargs, item_arguments)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\exports.py", line 990, in menu
rv = renpy.store.menu(new_items)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\exports.py", line 1226, in display_menu
rv = renpy.ui.interact(mouse='menu', type=type, roll_forward=roll_forward)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\ui.py", line 297, in interact
rv = renpy.game.interface.interact(roll_forward=roll_forward, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\core.py", line 2702, in interact
repeat, rv = self.interact_core(preloads=preloads, trans_pause=trans_pause, **kwargs)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\core.py", line 3518, in interact_core
rv = root_widget.event(ev, x, y, 0)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\layout.py", line 998, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\layout.py", line 998, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\layout.py", line 998, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\screen.py", line 714, in event
rv = self.child.event(ev, x, y, st)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\layout.py", line 998, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\layout.py", line 998, in event
rv = i.event(ev, x - xo, y - yo, cst)
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 918, in event
if map_event(ev, self.keysym):
File "C:\Users\User\Desktop\renpy-7.3.5-sdk\renpy\display\behavior.py", line 224, in map_event
check_code = event_cache.get(keysym, None)
TypeError: unhashable type: 'RevertableList'

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Such a Sharp Pain 0.6.32RP
Tue Apr 18 22:35:59 2023

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Such a Sharp Pain 0.6.32RP

The game has been built in Renpy 7.4.11. I don't understand. Do you have a modded version? Android release? The WT code for the menu choices had issues with that version of Renpy and older ones.

 

[User_12]

a question about Aunt Sophia - will she appear in the narrative in the form of a figure of the second, or maybe a third plan, or will she remain in the form of references and memories? maybe take a place in the family that previously belonged to the mother, that is, Mackie? MC seemed to love her a little less than Mackie. I hope for her to appear in the narrative in a more visible form.

appearing in narrative - i mean after the death of MC's mom...

You'll see her in the present really soon.

 

[dm1664]

You need to know about Alice's butt plug and then during the kitchen scene there will be a point where you can click on the plug.

1) Can you please help me here? This exactly the scene I just can't find the scene where the MC knows about the butt plug beforehand.

So the plug will not be found in the kitchen scene and there is no butt fuck either

2) There is one scene where Macy bends over the sleeping MC.
Here you can actually choose between "pretend to be asleep" and "Need to eavesdrop on the conversation".

I eavesdroped to the kitchen scene between Macy and Sophie in the flashback, but I still can't select the second option.

Thank you for any help.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

You can report the OP with a link to the latest game and we will look into it. When the dev is generous enough to participate we allow them to set the release schedule (and ketzal here is the dev).

On a personal note, you sponsored the artist for what - $5 and don't think it was worth that? I can understand if you paid $60 (going rate for completed games), but $5? I have sponsored this artist for over a year (so paid over $60) and think it is well worth the money to keep them working on it. Different strokes for different folks I guess.

Yeah for this one I pay $15/mo, because to me only room for improvement is the animations (Alice going for a ride in the hotel is still the best one, though my only complaint is the automated camera switces angle too often). A similar AVN (as far as loli incest) I found is Money Or Morals, but since it's rendered in Honey Select (that I'm not a big fan of) they only get $2. I've long since quit paying $60 for completed vanilla games that have nothing worth fapping to like most on Steam (more money for the things that are worth fapping to like SSP) . If I'm interested in one I just wait for a 50% off sale sooner or later and grab it then.

 

[User_12]

1) Can you please help me here? This exactly the scene I just can't find the scene where the MC knows about the butt plug beforehand.

So the plug will not be found in the kitchen scene and there is no butt fuck either

2) There is one scene where Macy bends over the sleeping MC.
Here you can actually choose between "pretend to be asleep" and "Need to eavesdrop on the conversation".

I eavesdroped to the kitchen scene between Macy and Sophie in the flashback, but I still can't select the second option.

Thank you for any help.

The scene where you have to eavesdrop is not the kitchen scene with Macy and Sophie, but the scene in the hospital. Click on the hospital doors when MC wakes up next to Cassey.
For the secret in the kitchen, you need to see the butt plug in Chapter 2 just after reading Nicole's phone.

 

[kcalel]

Windows-8-6.2.9200
Ren'Py 7.3.5.606
Such a Sharp Pain 0.6.32RP

The game has been built in Renpy 7.4.11. I don't understand. Do you have a modded version? Android release? The WT code for the menu choices had issues with that version of Renpy and older ones.

Im using renpy 7.3.5 SDK because my Integrated gpu. Higher sdk or game gives me transparent windowed mode
When you used previously renpy 8.0.3 i was able to play the game no error then reverted back to renpy 7.4.11 also worked no error.
Both version worked super prefectly, never one error . This is a brand new error never happend before, please help or fix in a future update
I dont want give up on your game.

 

[Nastastic]

I can't look at the game right now, but from what I remember:

Spoiler

You basically need to not fix things with Casey (so she's not the one showing up) and pick choices that will make Macy want to keep living. If you got it right with Macy, in the background, outside school before meeting the principal, you will see the doctor from the hospital flashback and on the back of her motorcycle there will be a helmet you can click on. Also, I'm not sure how, but the guy from the office can show up with a cop and that can also prevent the Macy scene. I got it by following the blood bond path and being friendly to that guy at the office.

There's some info about it here too in ketzal's post:
https://lewdcorner.com/threads/such-a-sharp-pain-v0-6-32rp-ketzal.35/post-15175

Macy being alive in any timeline makes little sense. She put a gun under her chin and pulled the trigger. At the very least if she survived SHE WOULD HAVE NO FACE! You can probably find images of people who have botched their suicide in similar ways on the internet, if you have the stomach for it. ?

 

[User_12]

Im using renpy 7.3.5 SDK because my Integrated gpu. Higher sdk or game gives me transparent windowed mode
When you used previously renpy 8.0.3 i was able to play the game no error then reverted back to renpy 7.4.11 also worked no error.
Both version worked super prefectly, never one error . This is a brand new error never happend before, please help or fix in a future update
I dont want give up on your game.

The coder of the game looking for a solution.

 

[AzulaBestGirl]

Going to say something mighty controversial here. I'm downright sad. Very sad. Ultra sad. That this is a loli centered game. Because the wife is ... yowza. She looks perfect. The sister ain't half bad. The past version of the mom is a step below but not bad. But the wife ... I can't get over how gorgeous she is.

 

[kcalel]

The coder of the game looking for a solution.

Thank you so much your the best

 

[UZTO]

This must be an oversight, right? Since the game doesn't ask you for Hailey's age in the beginning like it does for Alice and Leana.

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Macy being alive in any timeline makes little sense. She put a gun under her chin and pulled the trigger. At the very least if she survived SHE WOULD HAVE NO FACE! You can probably find images of people who have botched their suicide in similar ways on the internet, if you have the stomach for it. ?

I'm guessing in the route where Macy lives, she just didn't do that. It makes sense that if you put family first (Macy over Cassey) then she wouldn't be suicidal. Then again, I didn't know there was a route where she lives to begin with. Was this something added in the new version? Because IIRC, every route in the last version has Nicole and the MC talking about her like she's dead.

 

[superpuma]

There are so many technical terms that make me understand that I don't really know anything... but the important thing for me is the soap opera/story itself and the characters, the images themselves.
I didn't notice any changes between test versions 62 and final version 63, am I missing something? My bonus doesn't open, it must be because of the file type. My new version always ends with Hailey's appearance, is there another ending?

 

[Fefo]

So, i'm playing locked from Leana's path since the beggining, but either way the game automatically unlocks "first steps" scene in the gallery which features Leana. Which i don't think should happen since i'm not in Leana's path and i just get a notification when MC wake up. And i don't know if it is because of that, but after that MC sometimes act as he is in Leana's and Tiffany's (which i don't), he even ask if Tiff will dress just like Nicole and Alice in the kitchen for him even if her corruption is 0. He also says to Rebecca when he is fucking her about get Lisa too despite i have choose not do anything with Lisa.

 

[marcomemmey]

There's a Rebecca scene? Does it have to be on the domination path?

Also continuing what the above poster said, you get the Leana naked sleeping with you even if you done zero scenes with her (0 corruption), it should be skipped or rewritten.

Huh, during the loli Nicole x Sophie scene in the bathroom, after choosing the "stay" for the first choice and then "Leave", it throws me all the way back to the first flashback where you leave Mom and have the choice to jerk off or sleep with Nicole. Weird bug. (and yes, it's a new save)

 

[teenager]

The coder of the game looking for a solution.

What are the hidden scenes upto v0.6,, I found the hospital door hidden hint ,is there any other,, please help me

 

[ramvivat]

Macy being alive in any timeline makes little sense. She put a gun under her chin and pulled the trigger. At the very least if she survived SHE WOULD HAVE NO FACE! You can probably find images of people who have botched their suicide in similar ways on the internet, if you have the stomach for it. ?

you know, in the emergency room or in the anatomical pathology department you see enough of everything ...

although yes, if Mackie is really dead, then the developer made an unforgivable mistake, forcing the reader to doubt. if it was decided to bury Mackie, then it was necessary to first consult with specialized medical workers on the topic "what does the dead person look like who shot off his face" and then give the order for designing the dead person's face to a 3D modeler. although, perhaps, this was all done on purpose, since it was decided to lay a temporary mine ... so that sometime later ... then someday ... perhaps ...

... after all, no one saw Mackie in a coffin, no one saw how Mackie's coffin was buried or placed in a crematorium. that is, I don’t want to put vain hopes for a quick date in anyone’s heads, but let no one be especially surprised when they meet Mackie at an unexpected moment when they’ve already forgotten to think about her

... there is a slight suspicion that Mackie could arrange a hoax and she herself will move live with your youngest child. (lay low)

damn how many speculations just that Macka's face was complete and undamaged hehe... =)

 

[ramvivat]

I have one more question about Aunt Sophia. when during sex with her, MC ejaculates inside, aunt says strange words "thank you for the nice gift" - what is it? MC made his aunt pregnant in the same way (as he made his mother pregnant), and does he possibly have a child from his aunt? since the date of ovulation is not explicitly indicated anywhere, it can be assigned to any day, including the day of sex between an aunt and a nephew (that is, MC). I think it's pretty logical, isn't it?
oh yes, we will soon see aunt with our own eyes...
(perhaps she will come to us with someone *wink-wink*)