discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ SUCH A SHARP PAIN [V0.11.7R] [KETZAL]

[cenros]

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It would have been a perfect angle for animation! Too bad the generic angle of the actual animation after this left much to be desired...

In my opinion, the best animation of the novel was at the beginning of chapter 1 with Alice in that multi angle ride scene.

 

[Deleted member 28264]

It would have been a perfect angle for animation!

I agree. But I still like the animation after that:

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[Galanegosatros]

Hailey is 18 on the character info, Alice is 15. Is this a mistake? Hailey looks so much younger than Alice. Is Nicole's daughter named after Cassey's mother?

 

[Nastastic]

Hailey is 18 on the character info, Alice is 15. Is this a mistake? Hailey looks so much younger than Alice. Is Nicole's daughter named after Cassey's mother?

Hailey's age will be changed in the next release. She is around the same age as Leana.

Personally, I would have preferred if she were 12-14 like she looked like she was going to be in the very first release where Cassey catches the MC and Alice fooling around and there is a shorter dark-haired smol behind her, but then the dev decided to make her a blonde loli instead of a brunette smol, presumably to complete the blonde/brunette/redhead trifecta with Leana and Tiffany. So now we have only lolis and milfs, no smols. Except for the secretary's daughter, I guess. But no incest smols (yet).

We do not yet know why Nicole's daughter has the same name as Cassey's mother. I wouldn't put it past Nicole taking it out of spite to prevent Cassey from naming her own daughter after her own mother.

 

[Telgar]

Hailey's age will be changed in the next release. She is around the same age as Leana.

Personally, I would have preferred if she were 12-14 like she looked like she was going to be in the very first release where Cassey catches the MC and Alice fooling around and there is a shorter dark-haired smol behind her, but then the dev decided to make her a blonde loli instead of a brunette smol, presumably to complete the blonde/brunette/redhead trifecta with Leana and Tiffany. So now we have only lolis and milfs, no smols. Except for the secretary's daughter, I guess. But no incest smols (yet).

We do not yet know why Nicole's daughter has the same name as Cassey's mother. I wouldn't put it past Nicole taking it out of spite to prevent Cassey from naming her own daughter after her own mother.

A loli is a Smol, but a Smol is not nessiarially a loli. All characters presumed to be under the age of 18, regardless of actual age in game are Smols. The term was created to replace Loli and Shota, primarially in Discord. Also we don't know who the person behind Cassey in the beginning, is. It has never been confirmed to have been Hailey. Hailies age has always been the same as Leana. Hailiey being listed as 18 is an error.

 

[Nastastic]

I thought she was a little older? But then we have seen very little of her. But then again...who is the girl with Cassey in the picture below, if not Hailey? She seems too tall to be 9 or 10...not to mention her hair looks darker?

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2 Theories. Either the dev hadn't made the model yet when he made this scene, or it is another character. It would be necessary to ask the dev... Shit, I'm the dev

So which is it?

I had not yet made the model at that time. But I wanted to finish the prologue and since she only appears in chapter 1, I decided to do the model later.

@Telgar said: A loli is a Smol, but a Smol is not nessiarially a loli. All characters presumed to be under the age of 18, regardless of actual age in game are Smols. The term was created to replace Loli and Shota, primarially in Discord. Also we don't know who the person behind Cassey in the beginning, is. It has never been confirmed to have been Hailey. Hailies age has always been the same as Leana. Hailiey being listed as 18 is an error. (I couldn't quote normally because he embedded his reply in my prior quote and the quote system wouldn't quote it )

Thanks for that bit of "history" about smols vs. lolis. It seems logical to split young girl LIs into groups as follows: 1) lolis (which I believe were more or less defined by the Japanese as pre-pubescent or appearing as such even if they are 4000 year old goddesses), 2) smols (puberty to early teens, roughly equivalent to the term "tween") and then 3) teens for girls from about 15-19 years old. That's basically the way I've seen the terms deployed on this site, it's the way I use them, and I would even advocate for the creation of a "smol" or "tween" tag because of the fact that "loli" usually means very, very young and "teens" more often than not indicates legally adult teens of 18-19, leaving literally nothing to describe girls between about 10-17 years old. Other than that, you kinda missed the actual point I was making in that we jump straight from pre-pubescent. 9-10 year old Leana and Hailey (and 7 year old Tiffany) to (fully or nearly-fully-developed) 15 year old Alice with no puberty aged girls in between, which I feel is a slight lack. No big deal though and I'm not the dev.

As for who the dark-haired girl was...ketzal's own words prove she WAS supposed to be Hailey, but he changed his mind and made her younger and blonder.

 

[MattShizzle]

I set Alice at 15 and according to what it said before that should make Hailey 13. But she's 18, due to an error. Obviously when it says the older daughter is 15 and the younger is 18 something is out of whack.

 

[king02]

So is the new update around the corner or i am just excited for nothing ?

 

[superpuma]

any ART LOVER subscribers? I didn't like it very much, I didn't think it was worth it, I would like to hear other opinions.

 

[GivLoli]

Thanks for that bit of "history" about smols vs. lolis. It seems logical to split young girl LIs into groups as follows: 1) lolis (which I believe were more or less defined by the Japanese as pre-pubescent or appearing as such even if they are 4000 year old goddesses), 2) smols (puberty to early teens, roughly equivalent to the term "tween") and then 3) teens for girls from about 15-19 years old. That's basically the way I've seen the terms deployed on this site, it's the way I use them, and I would even advocate for the creation of a "smol" or "tween" tag because of the fact that "loli" usually means very, very young and "teens" more often than not indicates legally adult teens of 18-19, leaving literally nothing to describe girls between about 10-17 years old. Other than that, you kinda missed the actual point I was making in that we jump straight from pre-pubescent. 9-10 year old Leana and Hailey (and 7 year old Tiffany) to (fully or nearly-fully-developed) 15 year old Alice with no puberty aged girls in between, which I feel is a slight lack. No big deal though and I'm not the dev.

As for who the dark-haired girl was...ketzal's own words prove she WAS supposed to be Hailey, but he changed his mind and made her younger and blonder.

"smol" literally just means loli though. You can make up distinctions yourself if you wish, and nobody here can stop you, but the term is just something we came up with so we could talk about lolis on Discord without immediately getting the servers nuked or Patreon canning devs (yes they also get involved if your server is pro loli and someone reports you and the Discord server is officially associated with your Patreon project). On a non-cucked site like Lewdcorner where we dont have to self censor, there is not much reason to ever use the term "smol".

 

[SeveredRealms]

"smol" literally just means loli though. You can make up distinctions yourself if you wish, and nobody here can stop you, but the term is just something we came up with so we could talk about lolis on Discord without immediately getting the servers nuked or Patreon canning devs (yes they also get involved if your server is pro loli and someone reports you and the Discord server is officially associated with your Patreon project). On a non-cucked site like Lewdcorner where we dont have to self censor, there is not much reason to ever use the term "smol".

I never really understood wtf the difference was either but I must ask you all to move this kind of discussion to a off topic thread before you derail this games thread with this stuff please.

 

[Schubi791]

Hello, here is the German translation.

 

[4r33lh4rd]

Any news?

 

[JAW1986baby]

Any news?

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[Moss]

Any news?

No

 

[User_12]

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[dickness all around]

I don't see any need for the story to get so complicated, nor for Macy's return, I think that most are more interested in the renders than in the story itself, which after all is nothing more than a fiction, why do they take it so seriously????!! !!! For me, the lolita walk is enough, it starts in Tffany and ends in Alice... it's great.

if it was up to me we would have gangbangs every day, just let the Dev do his thing. unless you wanna open your wallet with a larger sum, nothing is gonna change.

 

[superpuma]

I don't understand... will there be THREE NEW VERSIONS? Which will be played/followed separately? and everyone will be able to download all three versions?

 

[marcomemmey]

As I understood, first he'll release the harem route (Cassey returning), so you'll only be able to continue the story if you got that ending, then the cops route (when you make Cassey pissed), then the Macy route.

 

[RG80100]

98% of the players are in harem route so who cares