discussion Complete VN Ren'Py VAM Sparkling Duplicity [Complete] [Goosenards]

[Silwith]

@Goosenards
So, since I had time to play, I gotta give you my very first thought: I think you would do yourself some good using LESS renders in conversations :x I am not saying to do it like some Devs and use one Render for a 5 minute conversation, but it fells like you are doing one for every single sentence and it kinda makes the conversations feel a bit wonky.

With the "bad" out of the way, this feels like a all around upgrade to your first game in terms of writing and renderquality so far, cute girls, well made animations ect, hell, the Son makes my bi ass sad that we will not be able to take him too... The MC is again meh... but most MCs are somehow... but his looks do kinda fit the person he is depicted to be, so it isn't as glaring for me as the MC in the other game was
So... yeah, very nice, thumbs up! Obviousy more focused on the teen aspect instead of proper smol in the mix, but thats fun too, so I won't complain about it

 

[oceanblvd]

What was the dev's last game? This seems promising

 

[Nastastic]

What was the dev's last game? This seems promising

Rational Chaos, a game he rushed the ending to (actually most of the game but especially the ending) so he could get to developing this one. Hopefully that means he'll put more effort into it, but if he gets another idea he's likely to rush this one too.

 

[oceanblvd]

Thank you! Unfortunate to hear :/

 

[Petrov]

What was the dev's last game? This seems promising

Rational Chaos, a game he rushed the ending to (actually most of the game but especially the ending) so he could get to developing this one. Hopefully that means he'll put more effort into it, but if he gets another idea he's likely to rush this one too.

Thank you! Unfortunate to hear :/

Rational Chaos still was pretty good.
It gives a nice insight of what this developer can do.
So I still reccomend it.

 

[klingpop]

Amazing game! Can't wait for the next update!

 

[ukwhro]

Didn't know what VAM was, had to look it up - damn that looks like a deep rabbit hole

 

[chazam]

OK, so I played this after playing the previous game. This was definitely a good show of what the dev is capable of. I loved the animation and the quality of it, I hope this wasn't a one and done thing. The style of the girls is really pleasant, they look pretty, I'm more of a petite enjoyer and the inclusion of the fat girl was something I didn't like, but, to each their own.
Overall, I think the game shows potential and I hope that the story won't be rushed like the previous game. My suggestion would be to keep things grounded to the world you set up at the start, do not go on a tangent of including weird things such as aliens, cults, criminal organization and such outta nowhere just for the sake of driving the story towards some useless conflict. Keep up the good work!

 

[User_54866]

Looks so much like dumbkoala's stuff

 

[elfieeven]

Looks so much like dumbkoala's stuff

Thats because dumbkoala uses VAM for everything..

 

[Marya]

Looks so much like dumbkoala's stuff

That's a good thing

 

[gera392]

Will there be additional content in the game?

 

[gera392]

Will there be additional content in the game?

like in the last game?

 

[incognito49]

Fatty is not up alley, sorry

 

[lonewolf67]

Like others have said, the ending to the other game was rushed, so hopefully the dev takes his time with this one and fleshes it out more. Looking forward to seeing how this one develops.

 

[nerddawg]

hope this continues, animations are fire.

 

[johny2222]

yo this looks good, going to keep my eye on this. Looking forward to the next update

 

[fallfallen]

love the renders. grabbing this one

 

[Petrov]

Goosenards usually works pretty fast. I guess it won't be that long before the next update.
Of course it's also holiday season...

 

[fallfallen]

why the hell is snookie in this game