4 Years of Service
Ok, well maybe I will get half of my wish.
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4 Years of Service
Exceptionally promising start. Usually I'm not all that into Kinetic Novels but this one was surprisingly decent. The story is a little contrived but overall a much better start than 99% of VNs out there. Looking forward to seeing where this goes.
The 2 youngest daughters are my favorite so far. They're both so cute (with that little buck-toothed smile). Please keep the cute aspects (even as things get naughtier).
The 2 youngest daughters are my favorite so far. They're both so cute (with that little buck-toothed smile). Please keep the cute aspects (even as things get naughtier).
2 Years of Service
Anyone else thinks this game feels like an acid trip? lol
Everything looks so... weird '-'
Everything looks so... weird '-'
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Finally got around to playing this one. So far I am really enjoying the story. I am very curious to see where it goes from here. Best of Luck to you man, keep up the great work.
2 Years of Service
I'm liking the game so far. Interesting concept. I just went through it once and was a little confused with the Tracy thing coming back in his brain making him feel strange, but it all came together. I hope this is completed and not abandoned in the future. Good luck ElfieEven!!!!
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Is it though? There are choices present. Or are they just to see or not see content, without future effects?
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So... that's where things get a little interesting. I haven't announced this yet, but the 'canon' way the story occurs is via the top option at every choice menu. Even when it makes it seem like you will be missing out on content.Is it though? There are choices present. Or are they just to see or not see content, without future effects?
I strongly recommend not reading the following until you have played through the game as it contains major spoilers.
I say 'makes it seem' because you're not going to miss anything. At the start of the story, you can make choices but these are false choices. There is something inside of the MC that will override any choice that is made which it disagrees with. As time goes on, this influence will wane as the MC learns to better resist the voice, at which point choices will start to matter.
So then we have to look at what choices are typically given to players. A huge one is which LIs to persue, but PGI has completely taken that choice away from the MC. I am never going to write a monster who would abandon innocents to die, so it's basically pokemon at this point and there are other infected out there that will need the MCs... medicine
Based on those facts, this AVN has to be tagged as KN according to the rules of the site. At least until the MC gets to start making choices that will have a lasting impact. When that changes and the MC can start making choices, then I will be able to remove that tag.
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Interesting! So this will probably go in a different direction from what I expectedFirst off thanks for your comments! And yes... exposition definitely goes overboard which is something I'm working on improving in Episode 2. That said, this is planned out to be a very long series (currently planning 3 seasons) and there are things being setup now that won't pay off until season 3, but I have to start slowly feeding information to the players.
Funny enough, the first version that my reviewers received had even more information that was removed to clarify things a bit. I'm working on a way to provide more details on the world, in a way that is easily accessible for those who are interested, but just as easy to ignore for those who don't. This additional information would be limited to things that the MC would actually know, so there won't be any spoilers.
As for the models.. I cannot take credit for those as they are the work of the amazing ND3D. As mentioned in another response, most of the characters are within their statistical height. I say most, as there are two that aren't for reasons that will be explained in the future.
Heh... there is definitely no plot hole but there ARE unanswered questions. I think it's easy enough to figure out how the trio (nice phrasing btw!) were infected, but the other two are a definite mystery in this episode. Episode 2 will start to explore these questions, but don't expect quick or easy answers to everything
First off, the trio + MC were always going to happen, even without PGI. We'll start seeing more about the family's backstory via additional flashbacks in the future, but even in this episode you can see that Tracy has spent a LOT of time preparing (some would say grooming?) the girls.
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As for PGI-257... all I can say is that nobody has said that Frank and his daughters have PGI-257. All we know so far is that it acts VERY different from PGI-255.
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Another thing to point out is this line which in hindsight I could have made a little more obvious.
MC Thinking
I can't tell her the whole truth.. not until I know more about what's going on, but a little bit of the truth goes a long way.
When he says the whole truth, he means the the mind-control/psychological aspects. After she reveals the 'family' phrase, he's willing to reveal a bit more, but for the most part he keeps things close to his chest. His only goal in life is to protect his family and while Jasmine may eventually be family, she hasn't gotten to that point yet. Even with the 'family' code phrase that Tracy gave her.
I'm glad to hear you're planning for this to be very long, as am I definitely in for the ride
3 Years of Service
(Just being playfully pedantic here) So does that mean that canonically the MC is stuck in a loop of looking at Lily's panties for all eternity?
3 Years of Service
Outstanding. 
One of my favourites. 
Waiting eagerly for more.
Note to those who tend to skip: Some of the text is important if you want to follow the story. Eg. the conversation with Jasmine in the mall. There's a lot of text which, sadly, interferes with fapping, but if you skip it, you'll be lost. Perhaps the dev could provide a CliffsNotes version.
One of my favourites. Waiting eagerly for more.Note to those who tend to skip: Some of the text is important if you want to follow the story. Eg. the conversation with Jasmine in the mall. There's a lot of text which, sadly, interferes with fapping, but if you skip it, you'll be lost. Perhaps the dev could provide a CliffsNotes version.
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Bwahahaha I LOVE being pedantic myself
So yes.. there is a universe where MC is stuck in a loop looking at Lily's panties because how could he stop looking?This gives me an idea for a fun little change for the patched version
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Outstanding.
Note to those who tend to skip: Some of the text is important if you want to follow the story. Eg. the conversation with Jasmine in the mall. There's a lot of text which, sadly, interferes with fapping, but if you skip it, you'll be lost. Perhaps the dev could provide a CliffsNotes version.
Cliff Notes? Uhm... you've read my writing and you think I'm capable of that? That IS the Cliff Notes version.
You missed the part where Jasmine said she was going to send him a report with MORE information
3 Years of Service
The Episode 2 update has been posted on the Development Discussion/Update thread @ https://lewdcorner.com/threads/pgi-257-dev-updates-discussion.11707/post-688701
Overall things are going well with most initial writing for Episode 2 completed and work started on renders. In fact, I'm almost finished the final scene which might be small, but it's important so I'm happy to nearly have it out of the way.
This weeks teasers that I've posted over there include the first in game reveal of the newest member of the family and Jasmine and MC sitting around having a chat.
Overall things are going well with most initial writing for Episode 2 completed and work started on renders. In fact, I'm almost finished the final scene which might be small, but it's important so I'm happy to nearly have it out of the way.
This weeks teasers that I've posted over there include the first in game reveal of the newest member of the family and Jasmine and MC sitting around having a chat.
4 Years of Service
Liking the story so far. Would have preferred the mom to stay alive, but only because so many stories go that route. I'm all about creator's intent and will look forward to future updates.
3 Years of Service
Agreed, but in this case she really did have to go. Her loss has already had a huge impact on the story, and there are other planned story lines which depend on her not being there. And that's before we consider how powerful her manipulation skill was. Consider what we see in just Episode 1:
- Somehow managed to get into a very important private party, and helped steal the package without any signs of violence/bloodshed on her or MC after.
- From what we're told, MC has, at the very least lightly pushed back on the idea of being with his daughters. Yet somehow all three of them still manage to fall in love with him? That sounds a bit sus to me.
- Has Hailey, Jasmine and Yuna all lined up for her 'club'.
I, for one, would actually enjoy reading the story of Tracy going through life on 'easy mode', but it's not the story I wanted to write.
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That's actually an extremely great point. Good character progression is important to get you more invested in a story. I definitely don't like overly stupid characters either.
2 Years of Service
I dunno, I played a bit last night and it looked pretty norm...?
..though I was actually microdosing on acid then, so maybe not best metric
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what do you mean acid?
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