A little on the sappy side for me (a lot actually, lol), but I'm a non-con enjoyer so I have to put my biases aside when looking at romantically-oriented stuff. Also not a fan of the whole reaffirming consent thing constantly, it's unnatural IRL and it comes across that way in writing as well. I guess it's useful if you're new partners, one party is nervous/extremely inexperienced, or lack the ability to read social cues, but it stilts the writing a ton, on top of the copious amount of sap. The mega-eyeballs don't help with that either. I'm not really a loli-enjoyer, I'm more here for the incest, so I guess if you want to do "ethical" loli fiction that could be central to the premise as I do tend to see that sort of excessive confirmation more in romantically-oriented loli stuff.
The premise is decent, apart from the "one decent guy in a world full of shitty men harem" trope. Harem enjoyers/writers need to come up with better tropes for "ethical" harems if that's what you want to call it. It can work, but it needs to be really well done for me not to roll my eyes at this point. Although again, I could see myself liking this a lot more if it was more in my wheelhouse, I've certainly consumed a lot of pretty tropey non-con/dub-con content. The characters are pretty good, most of my critiques of them would probably line up with my gripes with the writing. Each one has a clearly defined personality without leaning too heavily on explication, although it can be a tad heavy-handed, especially toward the beginning. Also, some of the nipple renders are blurry/low-res, especially for the wife and during animations. Best of luck
@elfieeven . Not entirely my wheelhouse, but I'll probably stick around for the redheads and the incest. Good first effort, and godspeed going forward.
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