discussion VN Ren'Py [HS] Little Green Hill [v0.13] [Director Games]

[User_22393]

OH HELL NO those eyes if Mana tells me to open a door i'm uninstalling immediatly

 

[Perverticus]

... yup, i hate her now. don't care what you say to try and brush this off @Marche95 , you made her a character to hate. This makes it clear she has no respect for her own son, on top of everything else this update and how you made her act. Seriously, you only got yourself to blame for all the flak you got this update, you wrote it, and you rendered it. hell it should have been clear this was a bad idea by just thinking a little about it after reading it over.

just gonna add in here, no i will not join your discord to read your excuses. she is shit now, and regardless of what you do for future updates to try and make her look better or to improve her, because of this she will stay shit.

i also do not know why you are trying to make every character lesbian/bi, but it is getting a little annoying, and it IS making the mc seem like he is just there to be a dildo, and this IS giving serious future full ntr vibes due to that complete lack of respect, and her now sudden fixation on the daughter.

if you do not like the criticism, than honestly, stop making games, or at the very least be upfront and honest in the development. i am still going to play the next few updates to see what happens, but this, this right here, does not inspire confidence when they are the parent of the mc, and a li.

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[Uthuriel]

man... this game had so much potential... and now it's fucked... kinda sad...

 

[SeveredRealms]

man... this game had so much potential... and now it's fucked... kinda sad...

Yea I know what you mean. I dont mind a little girl on girl action WITH the MC involved but off on their own... nah not interested in that stuff in my harem games.

 

[Simulacrum29]

Pictures and most of the tags looked good but, NTR, a story that sucks, and a Family that hates the MC, just sad.

 

[JoeTheMc84]

Most of the problems would be very easy fixes, wouldn’t even alter the characters or plots, either. I went back and forth about writing all this, but did it and decided to just put it in a spoiler tab.

Spoiler: Relatively Simple Fix Ideas

Instead of the mom insulting her son, have her find it cute. Instead of calling him a beta have her say, “I’m glad he still likes spending time with his little sister.” That alone would make the following scene seem a little less antagonistic and bad faith. You could change the dialog while she masturbates too, commenting on how cute both her children are.

Instead of the twins having a *public* make out session as soon as the MC isn’t around have it be the MC over hearing a conversation of them talking about the MC and maybe their thoughts about him, hopefully turning out to be good director. Maybe how they find him cute and the shy one wishes she was brave enough to talk to him. And the other one encouraging her.

Instead of Celes saying the MC has to “earn it” while she gives it away to everyone else, have her say, “I’ve never been with a guy so I hope we can take our time.” Then you could even give a choice, take it slower or make her do something. Then another choice, tell Celes your cool with her still doing stuff with the girls even when you aren’t around, or tell her to stop being sexual with the other girls without the MC around. Or to not have to change anything visually just have her say something like I suggested and have the MC agree to not rush anything. Because him agreeing to earn what others are given freely is dumb, but agreeing not to rush a girl who’s never been with a guy is at least not terrible. But the player really should have a choice in if the MC is cool with her doing lesbian stuff, especially when he isn’t around.

Finally, for Jack, just have her ask for both their numbers because she find them both cute. Then even if she focuses on the sister for now or even later it may not come across as so much of an antagonist because she is clearly also into the MC. Because it’s already been stated the MC will be able to have sex with everyone it seems like at best Jack might bang MC as a reward for sharing the sister or if she turns Jack done then Jack will bang MC because MC and the sister look enough alike that Jack can pretend or something, either one of which just seems odd.

I also put it under a tab because some of it has been suggest before, even by me, but this at least puts them all in one place. Of course these are just suggestions and I won’t be watching the thread moving forward though I still won’t set it to ignore just yet. The game has, or had depending on future development, so much promise.

 

[illiono]

Most of the problems would be very easy fixes, wouldn’t even alter the characters or plots, either. I went back and forth about writing all this, but did it and decided to just put it in a spoiler tab.

Spoiler: Relatively Simple Fix Ideas

Instead of the mom insulting her son, have her find it cute. Instead of calling him a beta have her say, “I’m glad he still likes spending time with his little sister.” That alone would make the following scene seem a little less antagonistic and bad faith. You could change the dialog while she masturbates too, commenting on how cute both her children are.

Instead of the twins having a *public* make out session as soon as the MC isn’t around have it be the MC over hearing a conversation of them talking about the MC and maybe their thoughts about him, hopefully turning out to be good director. Maybe how they find him cute and the shy one wishes she was brave enough to talk to him. And the other one encouraging her.

Instead of Celes saying the MC has to “earn it” while she gives it away to everyone else, have her say, “I’ve never been with a guy so I hope we can take our time.” Then you could even give a choice, take it slower or make her do something. Then another choice, tell Celes your cool with her still doing stuff with the girls even when you aren’t around, or tell her to stop being sexual with the other girls without the MC around. Or to not have to change anything visually just have her say something like I suggested and have the MC agree to not rush anything. Because him agreeing to earn what others are given freely is dumb, but agreeing not to rush a girl who’s never been with a guy is at least not terrible. But the player really should have a choice in if the MC is cool with her doing lesbian stuff, especially when he isn’t around.

Finally, for Jack, just have her ask for both their numbers because she find them both cute. Then even if she focuses on the sister for now or even later it may not come across as so much of an antagonist because she is clearly also into the MC. Because it’s already been stated the MC will be able to have sex with everyone it seems like at best Jack might bang MC as a reward for sharing the sister or if she turns Jack done then Jack will bang MC because MC and the sister look enough alike that Jack can pretend or something, either one of which just seems odd.

I also put it under a tab because some of it has been suggest before, even by me, but this at least puts them all in one place. Of course these are just suggestions and I won’t be watching the thread moving forward though I still won’t set it to ignore just yet. The game has, or had depending on future development, so much promise.

I'll buy the idea of the mom finding it cute instead of beta (although it could steal some interesting femdom/brat taming scenes down the line), but I find how the game is now much more hot than the things you are suggesting. I see it as a reasonably perverted but shy MC is "thrown" into an already perverted context, and the story pivots around the MC process of depravation and the mistery of the orphanage. Those tings you propose are not "fixes", but a change in tone and in the direction of the story. If ntr, even with girl, is something you can't stand, then probably setting the thread to ignore is your best option indeed. You likely aready know it, but but Ecchi Sensei feels like an advanced version of this game with your "fixes" applied if you are intrested.

 

[Perverticus]

I'll buy the idea of the mom finding it cute instead of beta (although it could steal some interesting femdom/brat taming scenes down the line), but I find how the game is now much more hot than the things you are suggesting. I see it as a reasonably perverted but shy MC is "thrown" into an already perverted context, and the story pivots around the MC process of depravation and the mistery of the orphanage. Those tings you propose are not "fixes", but a change in tone and in the direction of the story. If ntr, even with girl, is something you can't stand, then probably setting the thread to ignore is your best option indeed. You likely aready know it, but but Ecchi Sensei feels like an advanced version of this game with your "fixes" applied if you are intrested.

"perverted but shy mc"

"and the story pivots around the MC process of depravation"

are we playing the same game? my mc is already depraved and is obviously and conciously trying to corrupt and fuck anything and everything around him regardless of morals, and is anything but shy.

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[JoeTheMc84]

I'll buy the idea of the mom finding it cute instead of beta (although it could steal some interesting femdom/brat taming scenes down the line), but I find how the game is now much more hot than the things you are suggesting. I see it as a reasonably perverted but shy MC is "thrown" into an already perverted context, and the story pivots around the MC process of depravation and the mistery of the orphanage. Those tings you propose are not "fixes", but a change in tone and in the direction of the story. If ntr, even with girl, is something you can't stand, then probably setting the thread to ignore is your best option indeed. You likely aready know it, but but Ecchi Sensei feels like an advanced version of this game with your "fixes" applied if you are intrested.

I think this comes down to promises and expectation perhaps. I called them fixes because the game set promises and expectations. And what I suggest is in line with those promises and expectations. I even directly asked some questions and was given direct answers that gave me those expectations. While you may feel the story direction, as it seems, is good, it is different from what was sold, so to speak.

Spoiler: More Words for Anyone Who Likes to Read:

Also, it is interesting you think the MC comes across as shy and that might fit with some of what we see. *If* he was shy then him being corrupted in this hyper sexual environment would make sense, but that isn’t what is happening. (Edit: interesting enough, One Summer in Loliwood has this as its premise and I actually don’t mind that game. The innocent MC discovering he is into lolis). The environment and characters were not originally presented as hyper sexual, the opposite in fact. It appeared like an innocent place he was being sent to in order to corrupt. He actively pursues the nun and the girls. I never got a shy vibe from him at all. And with a bit of spoilers I have learned he is certainly not shy or innocent in need of being brought to a place to be sexual… all the more reason why his mother calling him a beta seemed so out of place and hurtful towards some one from a character we were promised would be in a “high emotional relationship” with the MC.

And I suppose that, lastly, as a matter of tastes I don’t find used up girls and girls who don’t care about the MC hot. Two chicks in a relationship letting the MC be a third wheel isn’t interesting to me. Let alone a girl who might only bang the MC if the person she really want turns her down. I find it much hotter to corrupt, seduce, or romance the girls myself as the MC and the girls to actually care about him. Him being a true main character of his own story. The sex scenes are secondary to me, porn is free and there are so many games out there. I need more than just sex scenes without context. Even more so are voyeurism scenes of girls who don’t care at all about the MC of no interest to me.

I want to see the mystery of Little Green Hill revealed, why the MC was chosen, who is running this place, and see the MC develop relationships with the girls. Only the sister, and maybe a few others, seem to be set to care about the MC as more than just an available dick. There seems to be many relationships here that have nothing to do with the MC and he is, in fact, infringing on. Which makes me wonder why the cast is so large.

I’m not a voyeur, or into NTR, there is nothing wrong with those fetishes they just aren’t mine. Watching other people have sex in a game with a main character doesn’t turn me on. The dev made it seems like the lesbian and bisexual stuff would be a minor part of the game, but now almost half of the girls we have met so far have that in their story as a key feature. He claimed not to be a fan of third wheel MCs but then seems to be setting up a game build around it.

 

[Perverticus]

I think this comes down to promises and expectation perhaps. I called them fixes because the game set promises and expectations. And what I suggest is in line with those promises and expectations. I even directly asked some questions and was given direct answers that gave me those expectations. While you may feel the story direction, as it seems, is good, it is different from what was sold, so to speak.

Spoiler: More Words for Anyone Who Likes to Read:

Also, it is interesting you think the MC comes across as shy and that might fit with some of what we see. *If* he was shy then him being corrupted in this hyper sexual environment would make sense, but that isn’t what is happening. The environment and characters were not originally presented as hyper sexual, the opposite in fact. It appeared like an innocent place he was being sent to in order to corrupt. He actively pursues the nun and the girls. I never got a shy vibe from him at all. And with a bit of spoilers I have learned he is certainly not shy or innocent in need of being brought to a place to be sexual… all the more reason why his mother calling him a beta seemed so out of place and hurtful towards some one from a character we were promised would be in a “high emotional relationship” with the MC.

And I suppose that, lastly, as a matter of tastes I don’t find used up girls and girls who don’t care about the MC hot. Two chicks in a relationship letting the MC be a third wheel isn’t interesting to me. Let alone a girl who might only bang the MC if the person she really want turns her down. I find it much hotter to corrupt, seduce, or romance the girls myself as the MC and the girls to actually care about him. Him being a true main character of his own story. The sex scenes are secondary to me, porn is free and there are so many games out there. I need more than just sex scenes without context. Even more so are voyeurism scenes of girls who don’t care at all about the MC of no interest to me.

I want to see the mystery of Little Green Hill revealed, why the MC was chosen, who is running this place, and see the MC develop relationships with the girls. Only the sister, and maybe a few others, seem to be set to care about the MC as more than just an available dick. There seems to be many relationships here that have nothing to do with the MC and he is, in fact, infringing on. Which makes me wonder why the cast is so large.

I’m not a voyeur, or into NTR, there is nothing wrong with those fetishes they just aren’t mine. Watching other people have sex in a game with a main character doesn’t turn me on. The dev made it seems like the lesbian and bisexual stuff would be a minor part of the game, but now almost half of the girls we have met so far have that in their story as a key feature. He claimed not to be a fan of third wheel MCs but then seems to be setting up a game build around it.

precisely this, the entire build up and what was even told to the mc before he left the office of crazy eye lady, was that we are being sent there to essentially corrupt and fuck everyone, and the mc was completely on board... but everyone is already fucking someone, even in pink house. there are like only 2 or 3 out of the total of everyone who are not already corrupt or fucking so far, and the mc had nothing to do with any of it. practically everyone else is already corrupt or fucking. why else would the mc be there, other than to be a dildo since the entire premise is already done?

speaking of the mom, when i first started playing this, i thought that the mom had a massive incest crush on her son, given how she acted and reacted to everything he did initially, and how she is comfortable wearing what she does around him as if trying to seduce him. Speaking of that, she was also extremely jealous over how the sister pretty much made out with the mc in front of her, but now suddenly she is lesbian/bi and wants to fuck her daughter, and thinks negatively of her son? all i can think is wtf is going on with this story?

 

[knv]

Guess I'll just be signing off of this comment section then if people are allowed to be freely shitting on things that nobody is allowed to disagree with. Rules to stop back and forth complaining should stop both sides of the back and forth, not just silence one side. Seems like a good way to get devs to stop caring about a community/community's feedback.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Guess I'll just be signing off of this comment section then if people are allowed to be freely shitting on things that nobody is allowed to disagree with. Rules to stop back and forth complaining should stop both sides of the back and forth, not just silence one side. Seems like a good way to get devs to stop caring about a community/community's feedback.

They are actively discussing the game like adults. This is what devs want to see. Not sure what your going off about but if you want drama and fighting this isn't the place for it and that's the stuff devs DO NOT like to deal with.

 

[Trakinas]

i'm sry for my noobness...but how do you guys use the android uncensored patch for the windows version?
i see this on other games as well..did i miss a tutorial or something? T_T

 

[Myuhinny]

android uncensored patch for

Patch if for android you can't use it for windows and it's not needed for windows anyway because it's not censored.

 

[knv]

They are actively discussing the game like adults. This is what devs want to see. Not sure what your going off about but if you want drama and fighting this isn't the place for it and that's the stuff devs DO NOT like to deal with.

If you see #121 and #123 as adult discussion or constructive feedback I'm not sure there's anything I can say to convince you, but the entire point is you've now outlawed anyone to speak against that sort of blind hate, but allow the hate to stay. Truly though, I'm not here to start drama, so I'll just check out of discussions from here on.

 

[SeveredRealms]

If you see #121 and #123 as adult discussion or constructive feedback I'm not sure there's anything I can say to convince you, but the entire point is you've now outlawed anyone to speak against that sort of blind hate, but allow the hate to stay. Truly though, I'm not here to start drama, so I'll just check out of discussions from here on.

I noticed you skipped my own comment? They are giving their thoughts and opinions without bashing. they liked the game until this last update and questionable content ruined it for those people. they are not going back and forth on what's right and what's wrong or starting fights in the thread. You yourself are welcome to state you own opinion just like they are. I have not outlawed opinions. I have only stopped the constant war that always ends up starting over said content that was added.

 

[Trakinas]

Patch if for android you can't use it for windows and it's not needed for windows anyway because it's not censored.

but you see...the windows version has the loli content blocked.

 

[Uthuriel]

Yea I know what you mean. I dont mind a little girl on girl action WITH the MC involved but off on their own... nah not interested in that stuff in my harem games.

It was me who first warned him in the OG F95 thread... I told him that lesbian NTR is a thing but obviously I got ignored... but he went even further and ruined the mom... to me one of the most important characters in an incest game.

Now he is just another cuck dev that squandered the potential of his game.

 

[Myuhinny]

but you see...the windows version has the loli content blocked.

It is NOT censored the C in the file name is for what VERSION it is the DEV even stated this X pages back in the thread.

 

[SeveredRealms]

It is NOT censored the C in the file name is for what VERSION it is the DEV even stated this X pages back in the thread.

I just put a note in the OP to stop people from asking or saying anything about it being censored. IT is not censored folks. For everyone else that doesnt like to read posts and jump to conclusions learn to read. Yes folks I can be a ass when I get annoyed by people that just randomly post without first checking for answers.