discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py EGBE [Prologue v0.3.3b] [Ketzal]

[internate]

Agree, I was trying to get the eyes to improve, but at least AI just gets better and better each day. I hope it helps devs get releases out faster without sacrificing quality. Here are the other outputs. She is a bit clutzy on the spin -

Love them! Can you do sasha?

 

[Dario]

Love them! Can you do sasha?

Yeah, Grok is super slow right now, but will try later.

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

I hope you didn't take what I said as criticism, especially when there isn't much to criticize as of now. I just listed specific details I like about K's work, and hope you mirror them to the extent that you can. Not necessarily exactly the same; your preview image you posted was well done, but the focus was pretty different than K would usually do. I compared it to similar scenes in K's original release, and despite the differences in emphasis and focus, your preview image had solid attention to technical details and conveys what you think is important.

Of course it would be difficult to emulate K's voice exactly. I think it would be difficult for most to do that. I did point out it would be noticeable to anyone looking--but as far as expectations, I just hope for a similar level of attention to detail, and following the broad strokes of the outline and level of quality. Unless you're literally ghostwriting for someone, I'd expect any writer to imbue their work with their own style. Again, hopefully you don't take expectations as critique, especially since as you said you haven't released even a demo yet.

Obviously what you've shown us so far is very high quality work, and I think most of us here appreciate you picking this up and seeing it through at the level of fidelity we've seen already.

Let us let the man work in peace shall we.

Regarding your first point, I also saw that the Dark Games picture has everything in focus and the original picture I posted has MC out of focus.
(here: https://lewdcorner.com/threads/egbe-prologue-v0-3-3b-ketzal.18387/post-969944)
I was very pleased by this, because I feel differently than you do; I want to decide as a "player" what to focus on.
I'm not at all fond of those out of focus pics some developers use.

 

[Dario]

Love them! Can you do sasha?

Four Sasha outputs here. I wanna do something with Marie too (Don't we all!)

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[Republican Bear]

Like I've said before I'm ecstatic it's being continued by another developer.

Just remember to keep your enthusiasm in check, and not put to much pressure on the developer.

Having said that I hope it's better then a recent game I played in the same situation.

 

[bombmaster]

Like I've said before I'm ecstatic it's being continued by another developer.

Just remember to keep your enthusiasm in check, and not put to much pressure on the developer.

Having said that I hope it's better then a recent game I played in the same situation.

the deadpool meme and cringe dialogue, I felt that too.

 

[Dario]

Grok, was cool with Marie outputs, but killed the nip slip!

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[highlrecommend]

Grok, was cool with Marie outputs, but killed the nip slip!

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would it be possible to make a game "fan video" thread?
this is a game thread after all

thx

 

[Tripod70]

would it be possible to make a game "fan video" thread?
this is a game thread after all

thx

Yepp! All they have to do is make it...

 

[internate]

Grok, was cool with Marie outputs, but killed the nip slip!

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Love em!

 

[LoveAVN4ever]

@Dark Games just wanted to say the same thing I say to Aldor every now and then. Don't overwhelm yourself trying to get something done for a release. Don't feel like you have to have something just for the sake of it. Make sure you do your best to get it how you want it

 

[internate]

Are you gonna keep those twins the same?

 

[LoveAVN4ever]

Are you gonna keep those twins the same?

I hope he does. They were perfect

 

[Dario]

The photo shoot with the Finn Twins was awesome and had a nice cliffhanger. I definitely hope that path continues.

 

[LoveAVN4ever]

The photo shoot with the Finn Twins was awesome and had a nice cliffhanger. I definitely hope that path continues.

Your profile pic is 10/10 btw. Great way to honor them!

 

[Dario]

Your profile pic is 10/10 btw. Great way to honor them!

I really like how good gingers look with this modeling. Another favorite is Norah from Radiant. And he really nailed the hebe bodies.

 

[HardDaddyTimes]

Are you gonna keep those twins the same?

Most likely the same (same assets are used) but a bit different.
I would speculate, judging by the other previews, maybe a little younger, which I'm all for, and a bit better looking.

 

[Dark Games]

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[Dario]

Elera was so much fun and could easily loosen up Nera.

 

[lillelyn]

Looking forward to experiencing the twins again