discussion Complete VN Ren'Py VAM All the Wrong Things [1.0] [Goosenards]

[Mmushy]

Another Goosenards special.
All start good but ends on a whimper. It's like he loses interest and just goes with the simplest no thought required endings

 

[whiterussian]

1Gb? Any chance of getting this Compressed?

 

[Corpse]

In the end my heart chose the niece but my dick chose the loli cam girl since she's cuter.
I'm hoping the dev slightly changes her model and then adds her as a different character in another game because she's way too cute for how few scenes she was given.

 

[Beduin123]

my dick chose the loli cam girl since she's cuter.

The loli is cute but her mom is a whore. The girl needs to be saved from that slut and adopted by the MC instead of him falling in this honey trap.

 

[johndoea123]

I enjoyed this but I feel like it ended way too suddenly. I loved the last few animations though, really well done. Good VN in my book.

 

[Jay994]

Is there a version with textbox occupancy? I don't know why devs spend so much time rendering when they just cover half the screen in a black box anyway

 

[pgm_01]

Is there a version with textbox occupancy? I don't know why devs spend so much time rendering when they just cover half the screen in a black box anyway

You can try using URM

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. I use it to modify text boxes so that I can see it on the crappy screen I often use while playing games.

 

[MasterWatts]

The story started out pretty good but after the beach, i felt like things were rushed. I was hoping for much more out of it. Felt like it was going to go somewhere and then it just ended. I hope you revisit it and what not.

Regardless, I really enjoyed the models and animations. They where well done. The final animated scene with Emma is one of my favorite scenes of all time.

Keep up the amazing work.

 

[ramvivat]

To say I'm disappointed is to remain silent. Although this story does contain a lesson: when you have more than one girl "on your hands," you have to be fucking persistent to bring the elephants to light. If he had been persistent enough back then, on the beach, it's quite possible his family would have consisted of four girls. I'm damn sure of that. When you remain silent, you push the problem deeper, turning it into an insoluble one, which is what happened.

If the author's goal is to convey this very idea to the reader, then yes, I damn well agree with the author. The situation was potentially worthless, but MC escalated it to the point of explosives and a lit fuse. MC is an idiot!

Men, be fucking careful with your ladies. Attention is often cheap, but it can prevent explosions that will cost us dearly, even leading to lifelong regret over a missed opportunity we'll remember for the rest of our lives.

 

[GettinOlder]

To say I'm disappointed is to remain silent. Although this story does contain a lesson: when you have more than one girl "on your hands," you have to be fucking persistent to bring the elephants to light. If he had been persistent enough back then, on the beach, it's quite possible his family would have consisted of four girls. I'm damn sure of that. When you remain silent, you push the problem deeper, turning it into an insoluble one, which is what happened.

If the author's goal is to convey this very idea to the reader, then yes, I damn well agree with the author. The situation was potentially worthless, but MC escalated it to the point of explosives and a lit fuse. MC is an idiot!

Men, be fucking careful with your ladies. Attention is often cheap, but it can prevent explosions that will cost us dearly, even leading to lifelong regret over a missed opportunity we'll remember for the rest of our lives.

Well, now you have piqued my curiosity and I'll have to read this one. You are correct, however, with your comment regarding "Attention" towards female companions. A little attention doesn't cost anything and prevent the loss of someone in your life from walking away.

 

[ramvivat]

Well, now you have piqued my curiosity and I'll have to read this one. You are correct, however, with your comment regarding "Attention" towards female companions. A little attention doesn't cost anything and prevent the loss of someone in your life from walking away.

I'll add - in a fit of anger from overcompensation, I would even have left him alone. But that would probably be unfair of me; it would be nothing more than choosing a scapegoat, making him suffer for my mistakes – and precisely because I myself wasn't attentive enough to the women who left me and for whom I deeply regret. What hurts the most is our own disappointment in ourselves, right? *bitter chuckle*
But damn, it's a shame the author didn't make a fourth, "happy" "love for five" scenario...
But I understand, the play is over, the curtain has fallen, the audience has left, and in my heart there's only bitterness, like in the final episode of "Moonlighting."

 

[lewlew]

Good to see it [Completed] instead of the cursed [A....]

 

[lewlew]

In the end my heart chose the niece but my dick chose the loli cam girl since she's cuter.
I'm hoping the dev slightly changes her model and then adds her as a different character in another game because she's way too cute for how few scenes she was given.

Will we ever have cameo long multiple chapter games?

 

[Charmingone]

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Overview:
After losing her parents in a car accident, Emi's uncle took her in. A year after the accident, the two of them decide to move to a new town to start fresh. Emi begins having strong feelings towards her uncle, Raphael, while he tries to suppress his taboo feelings towards his niece. Everyone has secrets.

DEV NOTE:
There are 3 endings, check the spoiler below for details on how to get each.

Spoiler: Endings

Emi and Emma ending: Keep watching Emma in the shower, choose to stay with the girls.
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Emi only ending: Don't watch Emma in the shower, choose to stay with the girls.
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Nari and Yuria ending: Shower choice doesn't matter, choose to go see Nari.

Spoiler: Genre

anal sex animated vaginal sex

Spoiler: Installation

Extract and run

Spoiler: Change-Log

01.1 - Fixed grammatical errors, added a separate sound slider for animations.
0.2 - New chapter
1.0 - Completed

Spoiler: PASSWORD

everafter

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GOOSE you're the best. As always a great piece of ART! Thank you

 

[Fap-e-Nator]

Just started it, a few minutes in and already a fun story. Your work is always interesting.

 

[canis54]

Ya definitely good until it just kind of dies off at the end. I hope it eventually becomes a chapter one instead of an end but oh well...

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

Ya definitely good until it just kind of dies off at the end. I hope it eventually becomes a chapter one instead of an end but oh well...

It was meant to be just a short story. The dev is now working on Uncanny which is a bit longer, at 8 chapters now.