2 Years of Service
It would be so good if it was 100% POV
But the dude's face always have to ruins it...
But the dude's face always have to ruins it...
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3 Years of Service
She's 12, almost 13.
3 Years of Service
Sadly I have nothing nice to say, so I'll try to be constructive. You seem to have forgotten that these games are ultimately a masturbation aid, meant to help engage your fantasy, not try your patience.
The writing and pacing are a meandering mess, you felt the need to show the MC alone, naked in the bath 6 times before the main LI is introduced. After they are introduced, 10 more minutes of leaning on the skip button still didn't get to any content, and I uninstalled. The guys inner monologue is like a particularly self-absorbed woman, they cannot get to the point in three chapters, let alone a paragraph.
The kind of self-analyzing you're trying to show is only interesting if it is related to something noteworthy actually happening. And the one sex scene I have seen was extremely dated with the bad camera angles.
With all my problems with the game said, my guess is that you were misled into wanting to present some form of realism that either your writing is not good enough to show, or if this is what you intended, is so bad it would make Desert Stalker boring.
The writing and pacing are a meandering mess, you felt the need to show the MC alone, naked in the bath 6 times before the main LI is introduced. After they are introduced, 10 more minutes of leaning on the skip button still didn't get to any content, and I uninstalled. The guys inner monologue is like a particularly self-absorbed woman, they cannot get to the point in three chapters, let alone a paragraph.
The kind of self-analyzing you're trying to show is only interesting if it is related to something noteworthy actually happening. And the one sex scene I have seen was extremely dated with the bad camera angles.
With all my problems with the game said, my guess is that you were misled into wanting to present some form of realism that either your writing is not good enough to show, or if this is what you intended, is so bad it would make Desert Stalker boring.
1 Year of Service
honestly, im not sure how this game is even in this section let alone on this site. having been 2 chapters in now after a recent update and still nothing happens. just a boring dialogue. i wouldnt waste your time even downloading it guys sorry
2 Years of Service
Tags dont match the content unless you put the gay tag it seems dev like to show so much penis.
11 Months of Service
not worth it, already two chapters and not a single scene. you can't even count his "memory" scene because it wasn't even the full screen and just a small little cloud. this dev is soooo slow to the point. so much dialogue that doesn't need to be in here. I tried to give it a chance again since this was chapter two and hoping we'll get something worth playing for, but no. there's nothing in this game. you could hold the skip button down and not see a single tit just a bunch of penises. I don't like criticizing games but the one has to be done. the point of these games is for masturbation material, not going on a mental journey with the mc and reflecting on life to the point that it becomes boring.
1 Year of Service
wow, all this shit talk & its so new, not even a month old yet.
in 7 months are you going to be freaking out that there are no updates ?
i haven't played it yet, just wanted to let it get some content but there are enough spoilers that i'm probably never going to have to play it.
1 Year of Service
I don't get your point.
If you don't bother playing now or in the future why are you making a mockery of the reaction to the game by someone who actually did play and is obviously disappointed.
Why?
1 Year of Service
Thanks for the warning.
Saves me time and boredom.
In the + section i expect porn.
I've played 0.1 and was curious about an update.
0.2 doesn't deliver so .....
down the drain with it.
1 Year of Service
why dl & play, there are too many spoiler posts "telling everyone to not download it, including you"
now why should i dl it again ??
EDIT: if people used spoiler tags i'd have no idea & would have simply dl'd it
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3 Years of Service
People don't appreciate slow burners anymore, but I do agree that if you are going to post something there should be at least some sort of scene already, which may either mean hasting sex scenes or just delaying initial releases until there's enough content to at least appease the people who can't digest a slow burn. It is up to the developer but my recommendation would be to just cut the clutter. The first episode has a lot of content that feels more like filler. It could have been neatly summarized in less frames to avoid the annoying repetition of the MC's daily routine.
2 Years of Service
Damn so much hate. I really like this game, I don't mind slow burn, and I don't even know if it's really that slow, no scenes in like 20ish mins of gameplay, is that really that crazy? I will agree it could probably do with less bath tub / motorcycle scenes in the 1st chapter. I think it's setting stuff up nicely, and judging by the devs past work (at least Susan, and Sandra), the payoff will be good.
1 Year of Service
i am more into games / AVN's that are mostly story than are "
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"if i want to spend 30 seconds getting off on a story i don't need a game, i'll just close my eyes & use my imagination.
to any one that needs a quick porn fix there are plenty of porn tube sites with 10 second videos
3 Years of Service
Dont be fooled by the tags. Vaginal sex is 100% not in this game yet and the mods will not remove it.
There is a single frame of the MC having a thought bubble memory of his old GF on his lap that is "technically" sex even tho the image is like 1/5th the screen and literally a single render.
This game has one of the worst intro chapters I can remember playing, and zero content so far. This is not worth playing.
There is a single frame of the MC having a thought bubble memory of his old GF on his lap that is "technically" sex even tho the image is like 1/5th the screen and literally a single render.
This game has one of the worst intro chapters I can remember playing, and zero content so far. This is not worth playing.
3 Years of Service
I like a slow burn, but ultimately an adult VN is still meant to be an adult VN. What's the point of releasing an update to your subscribers (or potential subscribers) if there's no adult content? Just keep working on it until there's something to release. The amount of story involved isn't directly related to your releases unless you're just desperate for subscribers to get income without having any actual product to offer. A slow burn in the A-plot also does not preclude you from having adult content in a B-plot. He could produce actual flashback scenes with the other girl based on things in the present sparking his memory to keep the adult content flowing. So far this is just poor planning/pacing in delivering an engaging adult VN.
3 Years of Service
Right. I don't think the game will stay like this forever, it's just a matter of being patient.
I agree with you. If I just wanted to see sex scenes I'd just go watch porn. The reasons I end up reading doujinshis and visual novels is because I like context and plots behind the action.i am more into games / AVN's that are mostly story than are "You must be registered to see links"
if i want to spend 30 seconds getting off on a story i don't need a game, i'll just close my eyes & use my imagination.
to any one that needs a quick porn fix there are plenty of porn tube sites with 10 second videos
I agree with you too. I'd say that if a story is going to be a slow burn, it might be better to wait until you actually have some good content and action to at least allow the players to get some payoff. Most developers nowadays will still share their games even if they barely have 2 frames of content and 4 pieces of dialogue, but I kinda get where they are coming from. It's not really profitable to wait until you actually have a substantial amount of content and then release the game, specially with how hard it is to make a game when you are alone building everything from scratch. The market for games+ is getting worse everyday with so many limitations, and there are better and faster ways to make money. This is also why I try not to be mean with devs, ultimately they are the ones risking their freedom by posting content and charging even if it's just pixels.
3 Years of Service
I don't get all the hate.
Dev is clearly building a world for the story they want to tell. To be fair, I'm a fan of slow paced games with a good story and effort put into it. You can all have a quick fap in the image / animation section if that's what you need.
Hell, I just finished LawSchool Season 1 and that game was freakin long and it took some time to get the naughty scenes. But I never felt the scenes were missing because the game is that good and kept my interest the whole time.
The conversation between MC and Andrea was a scene you don't see often in games. I really liked the honesty even though we clearly know that MC is manipulating her. Good storybuilding there!
The renders are good as always!
The only critique: Please go shopping with the MC because the clothing choices are something else xD
Dev is clearly building a world for the story they want to tell. To be fair, I'm a fan of slow paced games with a good story and effort put into it. You can all have a quick fap in the image / animation section if that's what you need.
Hell, I just finished LawSchool Season 1 and that game was freakin long and it took some time to get the naughty scenes. But I never felt the scenes were missing because the game is that good and kept my interest the whole time.
The conversation between MC and Andrea was a scene you don't see often in games. I really liked the honesty even though we clearly know that MC is manipulating her. Good storybuilding there!
The renders are good as always!
The only critique: Please go shopping with the MC because the clothing choices are something else xD
3 Years of Service
To me the only mistake of the dev is the repetition of useless shit like him taking a shower and then riding his motorcycle. Do it one time, do it maybe another time but shorter, then just only use one frame for shower and one for bike and that's it.
But the rest is fine. I usually don't play VNs, with a few exceptions. I extract the pictures and fap. For some reason, extraction wouldn't work for this one, so I tried it because the art looked alright. And I think it's fine, character developement, good enough dialogues. I like games where it's go to the town, fuck everybody in an instant, but I don't mind more believable stuff like this. It's refreshing. And it's not like we have many good games in this section. To me there's SSP and It's not a World for Alyssa, then a few shorter ones that are above average and that's it.
So I like this one, I like what it's trying to do, and the art doesn't suck. So give it a chance, and come back 3 updates from now, hopefully there will be more sex.
But the rest is fine. I usually don't play VNs, with a few exceptions. I extract the pictures and fap. For some reason, extraction wouldn't work for this one, so I tried it because the art looked alright. And I think it's fine, character developement, good enough dialogues. I like games where it's go to the town, fuck everybody in an instant, but I don't mind more believable stuff like this. It's refreshing. And it's not like we have many good games in this section. To me there's SSP and It's not a World for Alyssa, then a few shorter ones that are above average and that's it.
So I like this one, I like what it's trying to do, and the art doesn't suck. So give it a chance, and come back 3 updates from now, hopefully there will be more sex.
2 Years of Service
Decent story but the facial expressions are like a cross between oh-face and constipation.
1 Year of Service
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