discussion Complete VN Ren'Py VAM All the Wrong Things [1.0] [Goosenards]

[Tigerdiamonds]

Is an abrupt and unsatisfying end better than the worst ending since acting lessons. In Sparkling Duplicity. I'll leave that up to you. I felt like I wasted my time.

Dev knows how to create cute girls and decent renders at least, and I'm not going to caterwaul because I'm not a paying supporter and this for free. But horrible with endings. Maybe they want it to be their mystique. But we already have Daniels K you'll never compete with Daniels. And the worst endings imaginable from other creators end up with the main character getting shot so I guess yeah you did a halfway okay ending.

I felt like this one at least had good endings, even if they did come too quick, which I'd say is an improvement.
I genuinely hope they eventually get the confidence to make a longer game.
I think it would do really well.

 

[JenMistress]

Well, the game itself was good, but the ending, it felt like someone told Sulu to hit Warp Speed to get to the ending as quickly as possible. Idk what happened there, but whatever, thank you for this none the less.

 

[Beduin123]

Well, I consider the ending with two hebes as the good ending.
Not so much with the camwhore, she is a creep, I detested her from the moment the MC met her for the first time.

IMO, the second one is not much better than the one in SD where the MC contracts an STD and gets his dick cut off

 

[VForValhalla]

I felt like this one at least had good endings, even if they did come too quick, which I'd say is an improvement.
I genuinely hope they eventually get the confidence to make a longer game.
I think it would do really well.

They did make a longer game: Rational Chaos
But that too suffered from things happening too fast after the set-up and an abrupt ending.
There are good short games out there but the type of stories this dev puts out, needs to breathe a little.

 

[mikoko67]

i thought this game was about trying to corrupt some young girls. In fact its about a shy and unintersting dude getting sexualy assault by litteraly all the girl he mets. Like "hello cuty boy, want to take me in the ass in the public toilet right now? heeeee ok ... :/ "

 

[Beduin123]

i thought this game was about trying to corrupt some young girls. In fact its about a shy and unintersting dude getting sexualy assault by litteraly all the girl he mets. Like "hello cuty boy, want to take me in the ass in the public toilet right now? heeeee ok ... :/ "

Well, this is the third game of this Dev that I have played and the male MCs in these games always have just marginally more agency than the kitchen furniture
The most useless one was in the first game Rational Chaos. I guess their main function is to have a dick.

Well, as long as the girls are hot I cannot complain.

 

[RayStachy44]

Well, this is the third game of this Dev that I have played and the male MCs in these games always have just marginally more agency than the kitchen furniture
The most useless one was in the first game Rational Chaos. I guess their main function is to have a dick.

Well, as long as the girls are hot I cannot complain.

the length of the game, the hot chicks and the MC's fart jokes were the best and only good things about this game. well and maybe some hot animated sex scenes, but this is clearly not the merit of the developer. given that the renders and animations were made in porn simulator Virt-a-mate, he most likely just downloaded ready-made animations and just apply to the models, you do not have to create them yourself. and at the end put it all in the renpy engine which is apparently the most difficult of the above. if i knew how to code on renpy i could also troll players with my terrible games or milk one for years.

 

[premier]

What's wrong with this dev, he ended SD so abruptly and now this? Does the popo knock on his door or something?

 

[Goosenards]

Just FYI, AWT and SD were always meant to be short games/placeholders/small projects to fill the gap while I was laying the foundation in the background for a longform game, I was always honest about that from the beginning. I'm nearing the release of the first part of my new long game, and as such I put these two short games to bed. This was never a secret or some conspiracy to milk supporters; in fact the vast majority of my supporters left after the end of RC and never returned, which I completely understand. It's been roughly a year since RC was finished, I learned a lot from developing it, and I'm acutely aware of it's shortcomings. Which again is all information I've disseminated time and time again.

I know this comment will probably be lost in the sea of "bad dev" "short game" "why no (insert obscure fetish here)?" posts, but I wanted to say it anyway. For those of you who enjoyed the projects, I'm glad and thanks for playing. For the rest of you: I'll pray for you.

Well, this is the third game of this Dev that I have played and the male MCs in these games always have just marginally more agency than the kitchen furniture

You said it, not me

the length of the game, the hot chicks and the MC's fart jokes were the best and only good things about this game. well and maybe some hot animated sex scenes, but this is clearly not the merit of the developer. given that the renders and animations were made in porn simulator Virt-a-mate, he most likely just downloaded ready-made animations and just apply to the models, you do not have to create them yourself. and at the end put it all in the renpy engine which is apparently the most difficult of the above. if i knew how to code on renpy i could also troll players with my terrible games or milk one for years.

Such a reductive comment from a simplistic perspective...oh wait, it's just the refrigerator humming.

 

[Oakbender]

Just FYI, AWT and SD were always meant to be short games/placeholders/small projects to fill the gap while I was laying the foundation in the background for a longform game, I was always honest about that from the beginning. I'm nearing the release of the first part of my new long game, and as such I put these two short games to bed. This was never a secret or some conspiracy to milk supporters; in fact the vast majority of my supporters left after the end of RC and never returned, which I completely understand. It's been roughly a year since RC was finished, I learned a lot from developing it, and I'm acutely aware of it's shortcomings. Which again is all information I've disseminated time and time again.

Honestly hadn't seen that information before anywhere and makes sense of the weird abrupt endings of this and SD. Enjoyed RC and hope the next longer form project goes well.

 

[CarolusRex]

Well....
If there is a new game coming, maybe the dev will create some kind of a roadmap showing the progress.
Iliked this one, but as so many have said before me, it was way too short.

 

[Lonesome Toad]

Just FYI, AWT and SD were always meant to be short games/placeholders/small projects to fill the gap while I was laying the foundation in the background for a longform game, I was always honest about that from the beginning. I'm nearing the release of the first part of my new long game, and as such I put these two short games to bed. This was never a secret or some conspiracy to milk supporters; in fact the vast majority of my supporters left after the end of RC and never returned, which I completely understand. It's been roughly a year since RC was finished, I learned a lot from developing it, and I'm acutely aware of it's shortcomings. Which again is all information I've disseminated time and time again.

I know this comment will probably be lost in the sea of "bad dev" "short game" "why no (insert obscure fetish here)?" posts, but I wanted to say it anyway. For those of you who enjoyed the projects, I'm glad and thanks for playing. For the rest of you: I'll pray for you.



You said it, not me



Such a reductive comment from a simplistic perspective...oh wait, it's just the refrigerator humming.

1: Admits he lost most of his supporters after RC.
2: Learns nothing.
3: Makes games that somehow have even worse endings than the aforementioned RC.
4: ?????
5: pRoFiT

 

[Carver]

You know it's gooing to be a rushed and shit ending whenever you see Goosenards.

 

[RodriguezQueso]

It's a very good game, although I feel it was too short.
I would have liked it to be a little longer,
but it also leaves you wanting to play more of the Goosenards games.

 

[Dubbie]

I, for one, won't be complaining about a Dev that actually completes their games. With the sheer volume of games that take multiple years to reach the half-point before being abandoned, while here we have games that, while maybe not as long as we would like, reaches an end, and frees the Dev to work on another game, which they do.

Sure, I would have liked to see the MC fuck Yuria over and over in dozens of different scenarios, but I'll take what I got.

Who knows, maybe in a few years, when Goosenards has a bunch of games to their repertoire, they could make a get-together orgy game with characters from all the games, the MC sharing their girls with one another!

 

[VForValhalla]

Just FYI, AWT and SD were always meant to be short games/placeholders/small projects to fill the gap while I was laying the foundation in the background for a longform game, I was always honest about that from the beginning. I'm nearing the release of the first part of my new long game, and as such I put these two short games to bed. This was never a secret or some conspiracy to milk supporters; in fact the vast majority of my supporters left after the end of RC and never returned, which I completely understand. It's been roughly a year since RC was finished, I learned a lot from developing it, and I'm acutely aware of it's shortcomings. Which again is all information I've disseminated time and time again.

I know this comment will probably be lost in the sea of "bad dev" "short game" "why no (insert obscure fetish here)?" posts, but I wanted to say it anyway. For those of you who enjoyed the projects, I'm glad and thanks for playing. For the rest of you: I'll pray for you.

Don't take this the wrong way. Also I am not a paying customer so my opinion may hold little to no value for you and I don't keep up with all your new posts, so I know nothing about your situation.

Your scenario, story set-ups, characters and their models are really good. It's great see a dev make their stories around older men, among the sea of college guy AVNs. For me personally, the story that you choose to tell goes almost exactly as I want them to (at least in the beginning + the dialogues during sex scenes could be a little better). But all the 3 games I played ends with a small puff. I absolutely loved ATWT and RC (3/4th of it). From your post it seems like you are learning as you go, which is not at all wrong. Your updates are pretty regular too from I saw, which is always great to see. But as I mentioned in the earlier post, the type of set-ups you create in games needs to be told in long form. Since all your stories have 4+ LIs, people want to see a more fleshed out story. Short stories are better suited when they are centered around 2/3 characters (including the MC).

Take it as a compliment that people want to see more of the story that have to tell. Of course accusing every dev of "milking" is not the right way to go about things and I don't agree with it. Devs literally have to try to be a money sucking cockroach like SirD.

I really wish you the best on your new project. And I hope you choose to revisit ATWT (rip ) someday or maybe your new project will make me forget about this one.

 

[fallendarkstar]

Goose can't end a game for shit.

 

[andrew2002]

Goose can't end a game for shit.

Thanks for the translation of the previous post. Just too much to decipher

 

[BadJM]

Those endings... Even if the game was always meant to be small, the endings still feel super rushed, especially the one with the asian chick and her daughter. I think I will just avoid games from this dev from now on. There is no point in playing them if this is what always happens.

 

[helent]

is it just me, or is this unrealistic if you go out every so often because you have a life?

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