3 Years of Service
First off, I want to say that I have a heap of respect for all devs, creating a game is a ton of work and putting something out there and hearing people criticize something you put a lot of sweat and love into, must be really challenging. As a consumer, especially when pirating, I do not have any right to demand changes, my only choice is to consume the product a creator creates or not. I write this post in the assumption that makaab wants feeedback on how his work so far is perceived, and also to hear other people's opinions.
Having now played the games, I do have to agree with the points of criticism that were already mentioned. I would not actually call the game slow burn, because the romantic and sexual development is not actually at all slow, it's just rare. Most of the screentime is spent on the story and most LIs are only part of the main story for a short time if at all. Together with the high amount of LIs, there is very little time for each LI to have any kind of development in their relationship with MC. To be honest, Erica's scene in Arc 2 felt long overdue (especially with the very problematic time jump), but at the same time it didn't feel like she and MC were much closer emotionally than after day 3. They never had time to talk one on one, they never even really talked about the kidnapping and subsequent liberation, MC's heroism, at least not on-screen. I hoped Arc 2 would really get into the relationships and put the story in the background, but so far it still spends most of the time on the story. Which is such a pity. I mean, makaab should make the game he or she wants to of course, and the story is fine and well staged, but...
Holy shit, batman, those character models and renders, staging etc are S tier!! Really, really fucking good! With good romantic+lewd dialogue and the quality of the renders the game is in the top 1 percent on that front in my book. That is awesome talent, and I just wish it was spent on romantic and lewd scenes instead of on story scenes, in which I frankly have a hundred times less interest. At the current rate it is highly unlikely that even half of the LIs that really interest me will ever get a decent relationship development and scene, it just would take many more years of development. And that's just so, so sad, because the models are varied but all beautiful, your renders are awesome and the character foundations you have laid out are well done and interesting. I would love to hear more about every single one of them.
Last but not least: Katherine is fucking gorgeous. I can't help but stare at every single render with her.
A few concrete suggestions with little work impact (I assume):
Having now played the games, I do have to agree with the points of criticism that were already mentioned. I would not actually call the game slow burn, because the romantic and sexual development is not actually at all slow, it's just rare. Most of the screentime is spent on the story and most LIs are only part of the main story for a short time if at all. Together with the high amount of LIs, there is very little time for each LI to have any kind of development in their relationship with MC. To be honest, Erica's scene in Arc 2 felt long overdue (especially with the very problematic time jump), but at the same time it didn't feel like she and MC were much closer emotionally than after day 3. They never had time to talk one on one, they never even really talked about the kidnapping and subsequent liberation, MC's heroism, at least not on-screen. I hoped Arc 2 would really get into the relationships and put the story in the background, but so far it still spends most of the time on the story. Which is such a pity. I mean, makaab should make the game he or she wants to of course, and the story is fine and well staged, but...
Holy shit, batman, those character models and renders, staging etc are S tier!! Really, really fucking good! With good romantic+lewd dialogue and the quality of the renders the game is in the top 1 percent on that front in my book. That is awesome talent, and I just wish it was spent on romantic and lewd scenes instead of on story scenes, in which I frankly have a hundred times less interest. At the current rate it is highly unlikely that even half of the LIs that really interest me will ever get a decent relationship development and scene, it just would take many more years of development. And that's just so, so sad, because the models are varied but all beautiful, your renders are awesome and the character foundations you have laid out are well done and interesting. I would love to hear more about every single one of them.
Last but not least: Katherine is fucking gorgeous. I can't help but stare at every single render with her.
A few concrete suggestions with little work impact (I assume):
- Arc 2's intro mentioned that the ages probably won't be used in dialogue anyway. Why? I think a lot of people into the genre find age references hot, if they aren't used ALL the time. Or am I wrong?
- If MC's cock got wet ig, make it shiny, just like you already do for wet pussies. Shouldn't be much work, but has a lot of effect, at least for me.
- Personally, I would be so happy if MC had a very sudden and very extreme growth spurt very soon. (Sorry, couldn't resist even though I assume MC's size is very much intentional.)
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), this is one of the best updates in terms of the plot and dialogues. No obvious fuckups.
