Ten times out of ten, that's going to be jarring when you're trying to perv while reading something meant to be perved to. It just is. It's the way of the world.
Well, that sometimes happens when the pussy is that good. Or when she's giving a BJ and when the dick starts cumming instead of spitting it out and getting up and running she instead starting sucking it with all her might until his toes curl and knees buckle.HE tells HER after one day that HE loves HER pfff...
Like I said, that translation is IMPORTANT to get right. What I was saying is that you should never assume it is anything other than just a translation mistake, because Romance languages make it difficult for their native speakers to translate gendered possessive articles into the correct English article, simply because the possessive articles apply so differently. You're reading something wildly different into what I wrote.
I was responding more to the first paragraph with that.
You said that no one should ever take them as any kind of threat of unexpected character genders. I'm saying that "here there be dragons".
I mean, sure, feel free to say that. You're basing it on a misconception, though, and I was giving you the information that could help you disabuse yourself of that misconception. If you don't want to take that information, and want to continue to assume bad faith on the part of the dev, I'm not going to stop you. The information is there in my post for those that want it.You said that no one should ever take them as any kind of threat of unexpected character genders. I'm saying that "here there be dragons".
Oh lawdy that was hard to get through, yeah I agree with 52637 above me. Even WITH a full pass through from a native english speaker the writing needs SOOOOO much work it would probably be easier to start over again from the beginning with it. Like I said in my review though, this will probably turn into one of those VN's you ctrl click through and fap to the smol scenes. I wish the dev all the luck though, loli VN's have precious few of them, and I hope in time he'll turn into a good one.
Just don't use polish people use polish remover....this needs a whole hell of a lot of polish.
English is very clearly not the first language, the young girl is constantly called "he" along with just about every scene having some spelling errors/ dialog structure that just doesnt make sense.
Random choices that lead to game overs are just stupid. First choice in the game is advance or ignore, you pick ignore and you just game over. Why even have that.
Second choice you give 4 options, pick the first, response is maybe this isnt a good idea. Pick the second and game over. Pick third, the girl ignores you. What is the point?
Third choice, you pick the third option first and it tells you its the wrong order. Pick the first option, gives a response and then tells you wrong order.
Fourth choice bricks the game into a loop. Cant advance past this sequence.
Game is unplayable now, and really a bad showing for a first update.
I’ve seen worse first efforts, though. Let’s see how much the Dev improves with this next version.Oh lawdy that was hard to get through, yeah I agree with 52637 above me. Even WITH a full pass through from a native english speaker the writing needs SOOOOO much work it would probably be easier to start over again from the beginning with it. Like I said in my review though, this will probably turn into one of those VN's you ctrl click through and fap to the smol scenes. I wish the dev all the luck though, loli VN's have precious few of them, and I hope in time he'll turn into a good one.
HE tells HER after one day that HE loves HER pfff...
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