discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ My New Father [v0.1.4.8 Preliminary] [Diego]

[Galat]

Allow others to update?

1. no

Developer Name

Diego

Developer Links

Suscribir Estrella

Version

v0.1.4.8

Latest Update

Apr 11, 2025

Release Date

Jun 27, 2023

Language

English - Spanish

OS

1. Windows
2. Linux
3. MacOS
4. Android

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Overview:
When you leave your work you meet a girl, who seems to have run away from home.

Preliminary Version:
-Not suitable for publication.
-Download at your own discretion.
-a new game is recommended
- CPU rendering, expect some noise.​

Spoiler: Genre:

-Planned Tags: anal, vaginal, oral, sex toys.
-Planned Tags (optional): bdsm, impregnation, pregnancy, ntr, lesbian.

Spoiler: Installation:

1 - Extract and run.

Spoiler: Changelog:

Spoiler: 0.1.3.5

-preview version
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Spoiler: 0.1.0

v0.1.2
- changes in tone and dialogues
-code changes
-the menus are reduced to 2
-branch b is presented as alpha
-changes the aesthetics of sofi

v0.1.0
Initial version

Spoiler: Developer Notes:

-CPU rendering; Expect some noise.
-Add a language selection button in the game options (EN-ES)
-English translation by Google

Downloads

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[perheiro]

Seems to have run away from home??? DL'ing as I write this. I'll give some feedback soon.

 

[derodius]

the gdrive download is an .APK file not pc/Linux file

 

[MicoJive]

....this needs a whole hell of a lot of polish.

English is very clearly not the first language, the young girl is constantly called "he" along with just about every scene having some spelling errors/ dialog structure that just doesnt make sense.

Random choices that lead to game overs are just stupid. First choice in the game is advance or ignore, you pick ignore and you just game over. Why even have that.

Second choice you give 4 options, pick the first, response is maybe this isnt a good idea. Pick the second and game over. Pick third, the girl ignores you. What is the point?

Third choice, you pick the third option first and it tells you its the wrong order. Pick the first option, gives a response and then tells you wrong order.

Fourth choice bricks the game into a loop. Cant advance past this sequence.



Game is unplayable now, and really a bad showing for a first update.

 

[Moss]

....this needs a whole hell of a lot of polish.

English is very clearly not the first language, the young girl is constantly called "he" along with just about every scene having some spelling errors/ dialog structure that just doesnt make sense.

Random choices that lead to game overs are just stupid. First choice in the game is advance or ignore, you pick ignore and you just game over. Why even have that.

Second choice you give 4 options, pick the first, response is maybe this isnt a good idea. Pick the second and game over. Pick third, the girl ignores you. What is the point?

Third choice, you pick the third option first and it tells you its the wrong order. Pick the first option, gives a response and then tells you wrong order.

Fourth choice bricks the game into a loop. Cant advance past this sequence.



Game is unplayable now, and really a bad showing for a first update.

?

 

[perheiro]

Very rough around the edges. Translation = Poor English throughout. Concept is good but dev seems unable to pass what he/ she is thinking over to the player. Tends to wander. Needs a lot of work and some help with English. I'm gonna hang in here and support where I can as we need fresh material in this genre. I hope this dev stays with this project, so many give up to soon.
To Galat: If I can help in an way (English) don't hesitate to ask. (not looking for payment) Good Luck.

 

[perheiro]

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I played through to the end without a hitch. Game played smoothly. Except for the "Game Over" farce.

 

[Cr8tiveM3dia]

I would personally add a little bit of her "thoughts" into the game... as even though I have been considered to move things very quickly in my games, this went from her completely ignoring you and scared to be near you, to happily kissing you in a matter of seconds.
Maybe have a little dialogue of her thought process being like "This man seems nice, and has a really nice place... maybe if I play my card right and open up to him a little bit, he might allow me to stay here."

This could realistically show why she may allow her guard down a bit and be a little more forward with the mc... as at the moment we went from 0 to 500 in a few scenes.

Also as others have mentioned the "he" and "she" really need to get looked at, wrong pronouns in games make me nervous... makes me worry that at any point a penis is going to show under her/his dress.

 

[SteamedHams]

A hot mess, but there's hope. She's cute.

 

[DoobieDoobieDoooo]

Came to ask what everyone makes of the first choice History/pet mode and now I'm reading the new posts in this thread like, "Holy shit!"

 

[just4fun1980]

HE tells HER after one day that HE loves HER pfff...

 

[MicoJive]

I played through to the end without a hitch. Game played smoothly. Except for the "Game Over" farce.

This is where it hangs up for me. No matter what I pick it just goes back to these same 3 options.

 

[Frazzanova]

Wow, those tags are mega wrong....

 

[DoobieDoobieDoooo]

I like how he throws a random "it" in there after you've acclimated to converting he/him. Keeps yer joint nice and flaccid.

[pets cat backwards]

 

[DoobieDoobieDoooo]

What word is getting translated to "rich"? I see that a lot on regular porn sites that have amateur stuff.

 

[Mmushy]

This is where it hangs up for me. No matter what I pick it just goes back to these same 3 options.

Same here.

Got it working after restarting the game and choosing a different questioning sequence.
As of now the game is unplayable in English. I am also tempted to say signs show a game that will not be very good in terms of storytelling and plot.

Uninstalled

 

[Frazzanova]

What word is getting translated to "rich"? I see that a lot on regular porn sites that have amateur stuff.

It's spanish, rico is an alternative word for delicious or good.

 

[DoobieDoobieDoooo]

It's spanish, rico is an alternative word for delicious or good.

I'm looking at a long entry on a Spanish to English site for rico and the list of usage examples is as daunting as our list of pronouns must be for them.

 

[perheiro]

This is where it hangs up for me. No matter what I pick it just goes back to these same 3 options.

I'll play it again and see what I did there. I know I got the Game Over once, then changed up my answers and went right through.

 

[Tiur]

As a note, while gender pronoun and article mismatches do need to be fixed in English to appear at all professional, no one should ever take them as any kind of threat of unexpected character genders if the original dev is a native speaker of a Romance language (French, Spanish, etc.).

English translation of pronouns and articles, particularly possessive articles (his/her), is VERY easy to get wrong for Romance language native speakers because the way Romance languages think about possessive articles is fundamentally different from how English does. English assigns the possessive article based on the gender of the subject ("his father" and "her father" are different because they have different subjects), while Romance languages assign the possessive article based on the gender of the object instead ("his father" and "her father" are exactly the same, e.g. in French, both are "son père"). The other example being "his father" and "his mother" both use the same article in English, because the subject is male, while "his father" and "his mother" in French use different articles (son père vs sa mère), because the objects are different genders.