discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ My Life in a Fantasy Kingdom [LK1.69EXTRA Public] [etrusmo]

[etrusmo]

A small progress update.
I had been working in the code and fixing a few grammar errors and added a way to change the player name.

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I also added a way to set the characters ages too.
Ages are relative to each other, that means that you will only be required to set your desired age for the youngest character, all the other characters with similar features/age, will be the same age or close.

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For example, if you set the youngest character (Silkie) age to 18, then her mother will be 42, Fariza's second youngest form which is 4 years older than her will be 22, Mina will be 21, etc.
Or you can go younger if that's what you want.

This way you can set all the ages with one input, I also added a way to changed them from within the prefrences menu.
Hope you like these changes.
You will see these changes in the next version 1.5, please wait a few weeks until I release it.

 

[etrusmo]

I have made V1.4 public, I'm still working in V1.5, which I hope to release in my fanbox in 1 or 2 weeks. Enjoy.

 

[thorweiner]

can't wait for 1.5 ^^ you're doing well with the releases but hope you're doing well yourself and don't experience a burnout

 

[etrusmo]

can't wait for 1.5 ^^ you're doing well with the releases but hope you're doing well yourself and don't experience a burnout

Thank you for worrying about my well being.
I'm ok, just a little over worked, but who isn't in today's society? (Not because of the game, but because of my day job)

Here is a small gift, literaly a small gift .

More in V1.5, when it gets released ?

 

[Nastastic]

Thank you for worrying about my well being.
I'm ok, just a little over worked, but who isn't in today's society? (Not because of the game, but because of my day job)

Here is a small gift, literaly a small gift .

More in V1.5, when it gets released ?

She comes complete with an included cum rag.

How thoughtful.

 

[thorweiner]

Thank you for worrying about my well being.
I'm ok, just a little over worked, but who isn't in today's society? (Not because of the game, but because of my day job)

Here is a small gift, literaly a small gift .

More in V1.5, when it gets released ?

hahaha You're a legend and you're welcome.

I definitely get the day job issue, I genuinely want to learn the tutorials to build these renders to help creators and work on a project like this, but also build my own.

but the day job drains you so hard.

 

[ghostch15]

I've tried several times but the password is not working for me (copy paste or hand typed) does version 1.4 have a different pw then 1.3?

 

[etrusmo]

I've tried several times but the password is not working for me (copy paste or hand typed) does version 1.4 have a different pw then 1.3?

Is the same password, try copy pasting form here, if you still have problems maybe your download got corrupted, try downloading it again.
aX916%tfz6bF5iIP

 

[ghostch15]

that worked thank you

 

[LGM]

Just read 1.4; the plot thickens... Fariza might need to be burned at the stake by the end of it.
Anyway, the English is as atrocious as ever. Holy Shit! A proofread has to happen, the sooner the better.

 

[etrusmo]

Just read 1.4; the plot thickens... Fariza might need to be burned at the stake by the end of it.
Anyway, the English is as atrocious as ever. Holy Shit! A proofread has to happen, the sooner the better.

I know.

But I'm open to provide the dialog to anyone willing to fix it, so I can add the changes to future versions.
The game has more than 35k words so far so it would be a lot of work, just to give everyone an idea, charlie and the chocolate factory and the first narnia book the lion the witch etc, were around 30k words.

 

[Lefty]

I can understand MC's feelings on his situation flip flopping since he is under a spell to make him more open to what's happening around him, but I am not understanding Fariza. She wants to fuck around, she does, and she comes to life. She wants him to fuck around. He does, and she gets pissed at him? At this rate her daughter will stay a virgin, and not have a child of her own.

While we have had some back story about Fariza, it feels like we've hardly spent time with her, at least nothing that makes us understand why they are together. Even though she has a purpose for being with him, I can see her packing up and leaving, and the overall story not changing. There is a whole village hot for MC, and all of the options make Fariza nothing special. If her plans are what's driving the plot, she needs to be made more special to the MC. I think what I am trying to say is now that her daughter is here, Fariza and MC really need to focus on becoming a family before bringing in all of the extra fucking. If MC just goes right into making a child with his step-daughter, she can be as quickly removed as she was introduced, and her mother can go with her. There is more of a connection between MC and the centaur and lamia families than there is with Fariza.

 

[etrusmo]

I can understand MC's feelings on his situation flip flopping since he is under a spell to make him more open to what's happening around him, but I am not understanding Fariza. She wants to fuck around, she does, and she comes to life. She wants him to fuck around. He does, and she gets pissed at him? At this rate her daughter will stay a virgin, and not have a child of her own.

While we have had some back story about Fariza, it feels like we've hardly spent time with her, at least nothing that makes us understand why they are together. Even though she has a purpose for being with him, I can see her packing up and leaving, and the overall story not changing. There is a whole village hot for MC, and all of the options make Fariza nothing special. If her plans are what's driving the plot, she needs to be made more special to the MC. I think what I am trying to say is now that her daughter is here, Fariza and MC really need to focus on becoming a family before bringing in all of the extra fucking. If MC just goes right into making a child with his step-daughter, she can be as quickly removed as she was introduced, and her mother can go with her. There is more of a connection between MC and the centaur and lamia families than there is with Fariza.

In V1.5 there is a very small backstory about how the MC and Fariza started dating, and why the MC fell in love, and there is reason why Fariza, and others, fall in love so easily to the MC, I'm sure some of you already have an idea of what is after hearing Zeleris words.

I would like to clear a few things about the story, if you don't want any spoilers don't read it

Spoiler: Story

The MCs past is key to fariza's ritual to help her daughter, she hasn't told the MC about his past because is something too disturbing for someone from a conservative place like the MC, which will be shown in v1.5.
The MC will help fariza and farla, because he loves Fariza and will eventually love Farla, like a father, I think this is obvious.
The mc will marry fariza, because who wouldnt marry a woman who is not only ok when you have sex with other girls, but who also actively helps you get more girls?
Couples on the DEMI kingdom don't get mad/jelous when their partners have sex with others, because every species has a different lifespan, some live for centuries, others for years, and marriage for them it's about building memories together, raising a family, sharing memories, andsharing partners.
The ones who marry to have boring sex lives are those boring humans from MCs original kingdom.
MC is special, very special, but you wont see it until chapter 3, which will be the final of the game, there will be some hints in v1.5.
MC loves to watch how his girls get railed by young men, but not by old men, Just as much as his girls like when he has sex with other women, young and old.
About the mermaids, when will they appear? well, they appear at the end of chapter 2, the dog girls will appear before, twice, adn the futas will appear before too.
The mc will get at least 2 girls pregnant before chapter 2 ends.
Chapter 2 will have 3 different unlockable extra scenes, one for each kink (NTR,Bestiality,Futa)
V1.5 has reached the point were only one of those scenes will make sense, still thinking about adding it or not, adding the other two wont make sense to the player, until the entire chapter is played.
Chapter 2 is long, I think the longest of all.

 

[Lefty]

In V1.5 there is a very small backstory about how the MC and Fariza started dating, and why the MC fell in love, and there is reason why Fariza, and others, fall in love so easily to the MC, I'm sure some of you already have an idea of what is after hearing Zeleris words.

I would like to clear a few things about the story, if you don't want any spoilers don't read it

Spoiler: Story

The MCs past is key to fariza's ritual to help her daughter, she hasn't told the MC about his past because is something too disturbing for someone from a conservative place like the MC, which will be shown in v1.5.
The MC will help fariza and farla, because he loves Fariza and will eventually love Farla, like a father, I think this is obvious.
The mc will marry fariza, because who wouldnt marry a woman who is not only ok when you have sex with other girls, but who also actively helps you get more girls?
Couples on the DEMI kingdom don't get mad/jelous when their partners have sex with others, because every species has a different lifespan, some live for centuries, others for years, and marriage for them it's about building memories together, raising a family, sharing memories, andsharing partners.
The ones who marry to have boring sex lives are those boring humans from MCs original kingdom.
MC is special, very special, but you wont see it until chapter 3, which will be the final of the game, there will be some hints in v1.5.
MC loves to watch how his girls get railed by young men, but not by old men, Just as much as his girls like when he has sex with other women, young and old.
About the mermaids, when will they appear? well, they appear at the end of chapter 2, the dog girls will appear before, twice, adn the futas will appear before too.
The mc will get at least 2 girls pregnant before chapter 2 ends.
Chapter 2 will have 3 different unlockable extra scenes, one for each kink (NTR,Bestiality,Futa)
V1.5 has reached the point were only one of those scenes will make sense, still thinking about adding it or not, adding the other two wont make sense to the player, until the entire chapter is played.
Chapter 2 is long, I think the longest of all.

***Just had a power outage, and have to write this all over again... dammit. It was getting too long so I'll tldr as much as I can.***

A flashback of how they met won't really be enough to show why they are still together. Every MC has a magic dick that all females want. I have a feeling all we'll see is Fariza recognizing it (based on what Zeleris said), understanding how it works, and figuring out a way to use it to her advantage. The love starting here will just be an incidental crush on both of their parts, not something that got them to where they are so quickly. There needs to be more between them to get past the crush stage, into devotion, and actual love. The open relationship isn't enough. MC is from a much more repressed society, so right now he is a kid in the candy store with a free pass to eat whatever he wants. This is what makes Fariza nothing special. MC leaves for work, trips over a rock, his penis falls out of his pants, and there are five pussies there to catch it. All we've seen out of her relationship to him so far is that she is just one of them. We need to see what makes him want to come home to her, and what drives their passion for each other. Something simple that could have shown it in 1.4 would be when he got home from the bar after banging his boss and her girlfriend, she could have snuggled up to him, and asked if he had saved any for her. Accepted or declined, it would have shown something. Instead we got what looked to me like a cold shoulder, and then she was gone in the morning. Yes, it lead to what Zeleris said, but that could have been handled differently, and still worked just fine with the same outcome.

Yes, this is the short version of what I wrote before, and I think it came out better this time. Power is still flickering, so I am going to post this, and shut things down before something bad happens.

 

[Galgano]

I screwed up. I was in the section where I'm going through the questions that you can ask the various races about how their society works. I clicked on the last option, but decided to rollback to reread the last part of the answer to the previous question. But when I clicked forward, I wasn't given the option to ask the last question again. The dialogue continued on as if I were done with asking all the questions. Is there any way to reset being able to ask those questions?

 

[etrusmo]

***Just had a power outage, and have to write this all over again... dammit. It was getting too long so I'll tldr as much as I can.***

A flashback of how they met won't really be enough to show why they are still together. Every MC has a magic dick that all females want. I have a feeling all we'll see is Fariza recognizing it (based on what Zeleris said), understanding how it works, and figuring out a way to use it to her advantage. The love starting here will just be an incidental crush on both of their parts, not something that got them to where they are so quickly. There needs to be more between them to get past the crush stage, into devotion, and actual love. The open relationship isn't enough. MC is from a much more repressed society, so right now he is a kid in the candy store with a free pass to eat whatever he wants. This is what makes Fariza nothing special. MC leaves for work, trips over a rock, his penis falls out of his pants, and there are five pussies there to catch it. All we've seen out of her relationship to him so far is that she is just one of them. We need to see what makes him want to come home to her, and what drives their passion for each other. Something simple that could have shown it in 1.4 would be when he got home from the bar after banging his boss and her girlfriend, she could have snuggled up to him, and asked if he had saved any for her. Accepted or declined, it would have shown something. Instead we got what looked to me like a cold shoulder, and then she was gone in the morning. Yes, it lead to what Zeleris said, but that could have been handled differently, and still worked just fine with the same outcome.

Yes, this is the short version of what I wrote before, and I think it came out better this time. Power is still flickering, so I am going to post this, and shut things down before something bad happens.

I get your point, the snuggle thing sounds, good, I think I will change that.

About fariza leaving the MC in bed for a little more time, well, in my own experience the best thing your partner can do for you when you have a horrible hangover is to leave you alone, so you can rest in a silent house, this was a personal take, and I believe most men think that way.

 

[etrusmo]

I screwed up. I was in the section where I'm going through the questions that you can ask the various races about how their society works. I clicked on the last option, but decided to rollback to reread the last part of the answer to the previous question. But when I clicked forward, I wasn't given the option to ask the last question again. The dialogue continued on as if I were done with asking all the questions. Is there any way to reset being able to ask those questions?

You mean when Ariadne tells you to ask her and you have 4 choices?
Those have no effect in the story but if you want to start over, just delete your save file.

 

[thorweiner]

You mean when Ariadne tells you to ask her and you have 4 choices?
Those have no effect in the story but if you want to start over, just delete your save file.

Is 1.5 on Fanbox? Hopefully so, I checked out Pixiv and subscribe star but there' some approval BS going on? an artist I follow Art delly has also had trouble with Patreon and subscribe star recently.

 

[etrusmo]

Is 1.5 on Fanbox? Hopefully so, I checked out Pixiv and subscribe star but there' some approval BS going on? an artist I follow Art delly has also had trouble with Patreon and subscribe star recently.

Not yet, Stil working on it, I have enough content to release it, but I want to add more. maybe another week.

 

[thorweiner]

Not yet, Stil working on it, I have enough content to release it, but I want to add more. maybe another week.

Oooo another week I can wait can't wait to play, more content is always amazing ^^.

Hope you're well!!