discussion VN KN Ren'Py DAZ Thirty Seconds [v0.1.1] [ElfiEven]

[maxprotocol115]

Very nice demo. I hope it sticks with the hebe theme because there seem to be so few games that do.

 

[Knight5946]

Any chance this could come up for Android?

 

[Moongod]

I figured out where did the Thirty Seconds name come from when I saw Jessica in skimpy suit for the first time. It's the time what would take for MC to come if he get's to have sex with such an hottie. She went instantly into my all time top ten girls list. Such a beauty.

 

[elfieeven]

Any chance this could come up for Android?

There will be one soon. I just am getting some fixes included in it before I link to it.

 

[smite22]

Gonna try to make my opinion not come off as negative or disrespectful of the effort that @elfieeven has put into their work.

The story setup is there in this one but I am hoping that in future updates there will be scenes added that fill in the time jumps to make it progress better.
I understand animations take time but would really enjoy seeing sex scenes with animation in this and PGI.
I am pleased that the trans content is optional as it's not what I prefer. If it wasn't optional I likely would have not tried this out.
I like that you put effort into describing what content will be in your VN's so I can read the ones I have interest in while avoiding the others.
I won't go into the bugs as it seems that has been covered by others and you stated they are being fixed.
All that said it just seems this one may have been rushed a bit much to just get it posted.
I will keep my eye on this one as it develops to see how it progresses.
Thanks again for your effort to bring new options into this genre.

 

[Knight5946]

There will be one soon. I just am getting some fixes included in it before I link to it.

Good, if its anything like pgi this is gonna be in my top 10 favorites

 

[duckydoodoo]

i dont come here for info on game. i find dev's attempt at coaching critics to hurt his feelings less to be way more entertaining than this demo. at first i thought he wasted time making this game that could have all been spent on pgi. now dev wasting time here telling people they should give em a reach around when saying they dont like the demo. i cant even complain about it, its freakin hillarious. though i get the feeling it doesnt bode well for pgi or anything when someone is so reactive, how can they get anything productive done. oh well. im still entertained, just not in the way i expected.

 

[BeowulfKnight]

Bug fix update soft promote

 

[Regardie]

@elfieeven I grabbed this today and a couple of bugs still. Wrong sayer at the start of the waterpark scene in the car, line 806 - 810. the images don't match the name speaking. When Nora and Quinn are leaving, MC says it's nice to get to know you Nora, and then next tells Nora that it would have been nice to get to know her too, around line 1270.

 

[SA1NTBURRITO]

Still no apk love ?

 

[Waylight]

Still no apk love ?

I know ElfieEven has plans for PtPorts (Cebs) to port the game, just not sure why it hasn't happened yet.

 

[Retrofy]

Some cute girls, and a bit of nudity.
But what a crap game, and huge cock tease.
I don't want to hear from the hot girl how I fucked her ass for hours while talking about her sister... I WANT TO SEE HER GET ASSFUCKED for hours.

The MC does not even get a fucking blow job in this crap of a game. The girl talks about giving him a blow job in the car. And girls showing tits and ass, and pussy.... tease....
The MC has a superpower that will get him any girl.... and he never uses it.... it wouldn't be right he said... oh fucking boo hoo.... then there are the time skips.... years pass as he teaches an all girl class, he never fucks any one of them.

talk about a wasted setup for a porn game..

I try to be understanding to devs, not easy to make a game.... But this had LOTS of opportunity to have sex, but dev just didn't bother to do it.

You need to relearn the definition of a crap game, theres nothing bad about this game. Just because you didnt see anything too sexual in the first bit doesnt make it bad, if you wanna watch some porn theres plenty of sites that get right to that.

 

[Nezron]

You need to relearn the definition of a crap game, theres nothing bad about this game. Just because you didnt see anything too sexual in the first bit doesnt make it bad, if you wanna watch some porn theres plenty of sites that get right to that.

I don't need to "relearn" anything. But maybe you need to learn that people have opinions that do not always align to yours. If I think something is crap... well that is my opinion. Are you are so arrogant that you think I should only have an opinion that is the same as yours?

So please just let us part as people that just have a different opinion. It does not hurt the game, the developer or you. I did not give a negative review that would hurt the game... just my opinion.

so you have a nice day.
peace.

 

[internate]

No. the time for building relationships has past.... in time skips. She is his underage girlfriend, they have already had lots of sex... just not shown. The relationship building was done off screen. After a time skip... we first see her walking naked out of his shower... she was spending the weekend with him.

So yeah skipped sex, relationship, meeting, becoming a couple.

So what world building do we need? Some flashbacks on all the cute girls that he didn't sleep with. Maybe we can have some updates on who they did fuck? That will some fun cuck shit to add in. Maybe we can show the Trans girls fucking each other....

This game has no characters to be attached to, because we don't know any of them.... yet they have history we just skipped over... How many years of the MC's life did we just skip past? 11? 15??? I don't remember... but it was a lot.

And the developer put out another game Just One Month that is also a tease game. (the best scene was on a PC screen from someone else's game), and that is on top of his "Main" game PGI-257. So tell me when do you think there will be any grand world building from a developer that is working on 3 games atm.

How many devs deliverer quality games when they work on multiple games at the same time.... Updates will just be even slower..... This is not a good sign people, and if you are deluded enough to think it is.... well I have this bridge for sale.....

I have NOTHING against this dev or you, this is not an attack on any person.... but this game is not good, and will probably never be finished, the dev has no focus. and that just hurts any game he touches and his fans.

Why dont you chill out and be patient? It is a free game being developed by a single person. Not every single porn game has to have sex in the first chapter. You're mad because of that?

 

[internate]

Like It seems like you wanted a fap fest and you're mad that a 0.1.1 release game doesnt have the fap content you were looking for, and so you took your anger out on the dev.

 

[Nezron]

Why dont you chill out and be patient? It is a free game being developed by a single person. Not every single porn game has to have sex in the first chapter. You're mad because of that?

I did not realize that my opinion matters to so many people. I guess I should feel honored that you all care what I think so much.

but let me be clear, I don't care about the game not having sex in the first chapter. One of my all time favorite games is Cosy Cafe. And the story is good because the MC is introduced to the LI's and the player get to know each girl and the sex with the girls is introduced naturally. As the player you are there for the first time, you get to know the girls.

Now in Thirty Seconds, you get none of that, the relationship is just dumped on you, no getting to know the girl, and any sex you had with the girl is just mentioned in text. Just some tease shots of the girl nude. This is why I don't like the game, it has removed all the intimacy from the game. And the whole beginning of the game just seems to be pointless, the MC has some sort of superpower that is never used, the introduction of girls at a school, then time skips past them.

So now the MC is in a relationship with and underage girl (something the MC seemed to be against earlier), and we know very little about her, and why should we care.

Now if you like the game, good for you.
But why do you give a shit how I feel about the game? Do you think your juvenile reactions to my post are going to change my mind? you can act childish if you want, but I have never given the middle finger to anyone for their opinion.

I hope you can someday act like an adult and respect other peoples opinions, even when they do not align with yours.

peace.

 

[Waylight]

Damn, I wish you guys would stop with the he said, she said bullshit

 

[OkAlright]

Like It seems like you wanted a fap fest and you're mad that a 0.1.1 release game doesnt have the fap content you were looking for, and so you took your anger out on the dev.

I'm one of the ones who said they didn't really like this game. Not many people have complained about not having fap content, most of the complaining was due to time skips, and just skipping all the backstory and setup. The dev mentioned having flashbacks and such in the future, but I don't know, it's just poor storytelling to me, which to me is more important than the fap scenes. The story is what differentiates this type of content from porn.

 

[Waylight]

I'm one of the ones who said they didn't really like this game. Not many people have complained about not having fap content, most of the complaining was due to time skips, and just skipping all the backstory and setup. The dev mentioned having flashbacks and such in the future, but I don't know, it's just poor storytelling to me, which to me is more important than the fap scenes. The story is what differentiates this type of content from porn.

Hell yeah, give me a story that pulls me, creates some depth to the characters, and invests me in the story, and I'm sold every time.

 

[elfieeven]

I'm one of the ones who said they didn't really like this game. Not many people have complained about not having fap content, most of the complaining was due to time skips, and just skipping all the backstory and setup. The dev mentioned having flashbacks and such in the future, but I don't know, it's just poor storytelling to me, which to me is more important than the fap scenes. The story is what differentiates this type of content from porn.

This story aligns with PGI-257 (end of 0.1 is a few days before the end of PGI-257 EP1) so even though I wanted to tell the Jessica/MC story I couldn't. Including the eight months it takes for Jessica to seduce MC and then get him used to being around Rin would have delayed PGI too long so I had to come up with a not very fun solution to a crappy problem.

At the end of the day this story isn't about how Jessica and MC get together. It's about what happens after he takes a bite of the forbidden fruit and then realizes he's standing in a field full of other forbidden fruit.