4 Years of Service
have to be on Leana path and tell her the truth
https://lewdcorner.com/threads/such-a-sharp-pain-v0-5-7r-ketzal.35/post-8935
i guess something to keep an eye on for the future
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https://lewdcorner.com/threads/such-a-sharp-pain-v0-5-7r-ketzal.35/post-8935
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And what about the words "BAD IDEA" in red? I just don't want to have to go through the game again, and I think a clearer indication of consequence than "BAD IDEA" would be helpful. Please and thank you
U
I understand your opinion perfectly, even if personally I always prefer to see the consequence of my actions. In this case (BAD IDEA), there is no real consequence, except that MC will make his mother angry.And what about the words "BAD IDEA" in red? I just don't want to have to go through the game again, and I think a clearer indication of consequence than "BAD IDEA" would be helpful. Please and thank you
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Ready I was able to get it out. Thank you
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Thanks for replying (again!). The thing is, no one except you knows if the choices will trigger something awful six months from now. If the outcome of the choice is obvious within the same update, fine. If it's saved only to pounce on you several updates later, less fine. With this choice, it was perfectly possible it could trigger a bad-end situation, due to how severe what you did could be, were the author malicious enough lol!
Thank you for your time!
U
Not that I know of. If you know some....
3 Years of Service
What game are these girls from then?
4 Years of Service
That is the wife - Alice and Hailey from the game it's located under game - images - misc - hf.
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Thanks
4 Years of Service
Hi Ketzal. First of all, great game. Render quality, characters, story.
Im playing 0.5.7r right now and noticed that if you change Alice's name:
This line still mantains her standard name:
I still didnt finished but so far its what i noticed. Keep up with your amazing work. SSP is one of the bests.
Im playing 0.5.7r right now and noticed that if you change Alice's name:
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I still didnt finished but so far its what i noticed. Keep up with your amazing work. SSP is one of the bests.
U
Thank you. I've fixed that. There is a patch coming soon, 0.5.8.
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I think I found an inconsistency (2 actually), as it doesn't seem intentional:
When playing the sex scene with Nicole and Alice, MC is given the option to let them kiss freely or only when he's present.
If the 1st option is chosen, it is also possible to later encourage Leana and Tiffany to kiss as well (if he checks up on them, instead of Alice)
If the 2nd option is chosen, he can still visit them both but he won't encourage them to reconcile with a kiss
So during the Alice and Nicole scene, I picked the 2nd option... and Later on I missed the kissing option between Leana and Tiffany, which doesn't make sense to me really. Since firstly, MC shouldn't have a problem with girls kissing in his presence (as that's what he also says to Nicole and Alice in the 2nd option), but also because this is a different instance involving different girls.. I kinda wish it wouldn't depend on that, as I still wanted to encourage them
The other inconsistency stems from this issue further along the story - when Tiffany wants to say goodbye to Marc in the bathroom. He can ask her for a kiss as well, and although I did check on Tiffany and Leana and made them reconcile, I didn't make them kiss (since I didn't get the option). Despite that, Marc still refers to a kiss between Tiffany and Leana, although it never happens in this set of choices.
(He tells Tiffany: "I remember how she smiled when you two kissed")
When playing the sex scene with Nicole and Alice, MC is given the option to let them kiss freely or only when he's present.
If the 1st option is chosen, it is also possible to later encourage Leana and Tiffany to kiss as well (if he checks up on them, instead of Alice)
If the 2nd option is chosen, he can still visit them both but he won't encourage them to reconcile with a kiss
So during the Alice and Nicole scene, I picked the 2nd option... and Later on I missed the kissing option between Leana and Tiffany, which doesn't make sense to me really. Since firstly, MC shouldn't have a problem with girls kissing in his presence (as that's what he also says to Nicole and Alice in the 2nd option), but also because this is a different instance involving different girls.. I kinda wish it wouldn't depend on that, as I still wanted to encourage them
The other inconsistency stems from this issue further along the story - when Tiffany wants to say goodbye to Marc in the bathroom. He can ask her for a kiss as well, and although I did check on Tiffany and Leana and made them reconcile, I didn't make them kiss (since I didn't get the option). Despite that, Marc still refers to a kiss between Tiffany and Leana, although it never happens in this set of choices.
(He tells Tiffany: "I remember how she smiled when you two kissed")
U
Well done.I think I found an inconsistency (2 actually), as it doesn't seem intentional:
When playing the sex scene with Nicole and Alice, MC is given the option to let them kiss freely or only when he's present.
If the 1st option is chosen, it is also possible to later encourage Leana and Tiffany to kiss as well (if he checks up on them, instead of Alice)
If the 2nd option is chosen, he can still visit them both but he won't encourage them to reconcile with a kiss
So during the Alice and Nicole scene, I picked the 2nd option... and Later on I missed the kissing option between Leana and Tiffany, which doesn't make sense to me really. Since firstly, MC shouldn't have a problem with girls kissing in his presence (as that's what he also says to Nicole and Alice in the 2nd option), but also because this is a different instance involving different girls.. I kinda wish it wouldn't depend on that, as I still wanted to encourage them
The other inconsistency stems from this issue further along the story - when Tiffany wants to say goodbye to Marc in the bathroom. He can ask her for a kiss as well, and although I did check on Tiffany and Leana and made them reconcile, I didn't make them kiss (since I didn't get the option). Despite that, Marc still refers to a kiss between Tiffany and Leana, although it never happens in this set of choices.
Indeed, it is a problem, MC should have no problem with girls kissing in front of him. This will also solve the problem in the bathroom with Tiffany. Thanks for reporting this problem.
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3 Years of Service
Finally found the Time to play the last Updates. The renders still are beatifull and the Sex Scenes are hot. Sadly (imho) the general plot and the Dialogues become kind of confusing and feel rushed in a way. Don't get me wrong, the Game is still great if you're mostly Interested in the Sex and not so much in the Plot. The Game for me started really promising. I liked the basic concept, the pacing was great, the renders beautifull, but...
But even after all this critique, I still like the Game and it's characters. I may be a little bit disillusioned that it's not going the way I hoped it would. Will definitely come back in a few Updates when I have more Time for a second look.
After MC get's the news that his Sister orchestrated the whole Accident, it felt for me, as if the Quality and Attention to detail in the Writing and Plot dropped quite a bit.
The first thing that really bugged me was the Talk with Cassie if MC deides to go to his Office after dropping Leana at School. The whole Dialogue felt weird with one detail that stuck into my mind was the way Cassie reffered to Alice all the Time as "your Daughter" towards the MC, what I understood as her blaming Alice mainly as the Aggressor and the MC, at least partly, as a "Victim". Just to blame the MC in the next sentence to have Seduced the Daughter. Plus her behaviour change if your on the Family Path is so extreme and sudden that it kills all the immersion in my opinion. As good of a idea the Scene in itself may be, it's just way to soon.
I hope it's understandable what I mean. And from here on onwards, for someone Interested in the Story and the Development of the Characters, it get's even more confusing and incoherent I feel.
Similar problem with the Scene you can get with the Secretary, or more the way you can choose to treat her here. Again really good and Hot Scene in my opinion, but the Dominant option kind of doesnt fit with what we have seen from MC personality so far and comes quite out of left field here.
But what brought me to skip through most of the rest of the Plot was the way MC reacts when he comes back to his Sister and the "Confrontation" starts. That the only 2 outcomes really are to run away with Alice, what right now ends the Game, or doing a complete and sudden 180 to being 1000% commited to fucking and impregnating every relative they can find, without a single doubt left, is hilarious.
Don't get me wrong here either, normally this would be a dream come true for me as it feeds in a lot of my kinks. But it feels so effortlessly, so rushed in it's execution, that it kills the immersion completely for me. From here onwards i skipped trough most of the Dialogues to be honest so I can not say too much about the rest as, the Sex Scenes where still hot, the renders beautifull. But even while Skipping through most of it, two things stuck out to me.
First the Flashbacks. I like the Idea to uncover the Characters past this way and learn more about them and what happened, but the 35 Years timespan, if I remember it correctly, is just to much. At least for the Models used for the Characters. I mean, it's already hard to beliee that the Guy in the Flashback where MC invites Cassie to the Party is her Dad, as he looks more like a Big Brother or something age wise.
Similar problem with the MC Cassie and Nicole etc. in my opinion, if we assume they are in their Teens in the Flashback and jump 35 years forward it's hard to believe that they are to be in their late 40's to early 50's even with 25 Years it would be kind of a stretch as the models, for me, look not much older as in their early 30's at most.
The first thing that really bugged me was the Talk with Cassie if MC deides to go to his Office after dropping Leana at School. The whole Dialogue felt weird with one detail that stuck into my mind was the way Cassie reffered to Alice all the Time as "your Daughter" towards the MC, what I understood as her blaming Alice mainly as the Aggressor and the MC, at least partly, as a "Victim". Just to blame the MC in the next sentence to have Seduced the Daughter. Plus her behaviour change if your on the Family Path is so extreme and sudden that it kills all the immersion in my opinion. As good of a idea the Scene in itself may be, it's just way to soon.
I hope it's understandable what I mean. And from here on onwards, for someone Interested in the Story and the Development of the Characters, it get's even more confusing and incoherent I feel.
Similar problem with the Scene you can get with the Secretary, or more the way you can choose to treat her here. Again really good and Hot Scene in my opinion, but the Dominant option kind of doesnt fit with what we have seen from MC personality so far and comes quite out of left field here.
But what brought me to skip through most of the rest of the Plot was the way MC reacts when he comes back to his Sister and the "Confrontation" starts. That the only 2 outcomes really are to run away with Alice, what right now ends the Game, or doing a complete and sudden 180 to being 1000% commited to fucking and impregnating every relative they can find, without a single doubt left, is hilarious.
Don't get me wrong here either, normally this would be a dream come true for me as it feeds in a lot of my kinks. But it feels so effortlessly, so rushed in it's execution, that it kills the immersion completely for me. From here onwards i skipped trough most of the Dialogues to be honest so I can not say too much about the rest as, the Sex Scenes where still hot, the renders beautifull. But even while Skipping through most of it, two things stuck out to me.
First the Flashbacks. I like the Idea to uncover the Characters past this way and learn more about them and what happened, but the 35 Years timespan, if I remember it correctly, is just to much. At least for the Models used for the Characters. I mean, it's already hard to beliee that the Guy in the Flashback where MC invites Cassie to the Party is her Dad, as he looks more like a Big Brother or something age wise.
Similar problem with the MC Cassie and Nicole etc. in my opinion, if we assume they are in their Teens in the Flashback and jump 35 years forward it's hard to believe that they are to be in their late 40's to early 50's even with 25 Years it would be kind of a stretch as the models, for me, look not much older as in their early 30's at most.
But even after all this critique, I still like the Game and it's characters. I may be a little bit disillusioned that it's not going the way I hoped it would. Will definitely come back in a few Updates when I have more Time for a second look.
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