discussion Abandoned Ren'Py DAZ Starting Over [0.01] [Anonymous Developer]

[Dean]

Allow others to update?

1. yes

Developer Name

Anonymous Developer

Developer Links

N/A

Version

0.01 (Abandoned)

Latest Update

Jul 1, 2023

Release Date

Jul 1, 2023

Language

English

OS

1. Windows

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Overview:
Upon his release from prison MC has to reconnect with his family and rebuild his life.​

Spoiler: Genre:

3DCG, Incest, Loli, Male Protagonist, Teasing, Oral sex, Animation, Small Tits,, Groping, Mobile game, Vaginal Sex, Humour

Spoiler: Installation:

Download, extract and play

Spoiler: Developer Notes:

This is my first game and I'm still figuring out Ren'py and DAZ.
Advice, criticism (constructive) and suggestions are all welcome.
A couple of animations are lower quality but will be updated in the next release.

Spoiler: Password:

Archive is password protected! Password is: lewdcorner

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[Kawasaki]

Thanks for the upload.

 

[Cornfapper]

Just played, it was really good. Decent amount of content for a first release too. This has a lot of potential.

 

[User_43891]

@Zombie any plans for an android port?

 

[Alex2033]

Cute

 

[massivecumshots]

Can we get a mac version?

 

[oh45]

It's a rough start, but keep working on it.
And please note that there's a difference between knowing your shit and knowing you're shit.

 

[WigglyWorld84]

Don't mind if I do...

 

[Seducio]

Great start, can't wait for more! GG Dev, keep going

 

[JoeTheMc84]

Any plans or ideas of future tags?

Is the Main Character going to be the only one having sex with the girls?

Will there be girl-on-girl and if so will it be optional and/or player directed?

Are the girls virgins or are they already “experienced?”

 

[kz1749]

Yes, we like this. Lighting a bit shonky but everything else on point.

 

[BadJM]

Good start. It's kind of refreshing to see a game where the older women actually look their age, for some weird reason it makes it hotter for me. There are a few misspelled words and there are some sentences that don't start with capitalized letters, but those are things that can be easily fixed in future updates. Other than that I don't really have anything bad to say.

 

[LGM]

Not a bad start. If nothing else, the English is certainly a cut above most first releases. Although not perfect.
Frequent mixups of your <> you're and a lack of vocative commas should be fixed. Also, words like mom, dad, and sis, should be captitalized when used as a substitute for a name. (For example, you'd say, "He's my dad," but, "Shut up, Dad.")

 

[User_37082]

Thanks for the feedback.
I'll include a mac build in the next update. Not sure about an android port, I'll look into it though.
Yes, MC will be the only one having sex with the girls, there is already a little girl-on-girl action and there will be more (optional)
Lighting is one of the areas I'm trying to improve my skills on - so hopefully it will get better!
With regards to spelling mistakes/grammatical errors please feel free to post exactly what mistakes I've made and I'll fix them. ?

 

[depp123]

Thanks for the feedback.
I'll include a mac build in the next update. Not sure about an android port, I'll look into it though.
Yes, MC will be the only one having sex with the girls, there is already a little girl-on-girl action and there will be more (optional)
Lighting is one of the areas I'm trying to improve my skills on - so hopefully it will get better!
With regards to spelling mistakes/grammatical errors please feel free to post exactly what mistakes I've made and I'll fix them. ?

Lesbian is not optional tho. Well maybe if you avoid the scenes or characters altogether I guess and they still say how they think the other girl is hot etc..

 

[saltydogmk]

Although I am unable to play it, due to a lack of an Android port. I simply wanted to say something. It's always great to see a Developer take constructive feedback in a positive manner. Despite the game being in such an early state, and myself not yet experiencing it. I shall be keeping an eye on this one. If not for the simple fact @Zombie earned my respect, by how they handled the criticism. Well done.

 

[Vnlover99]

Although I am unable to play it, due to a lack of of an Android port. I simply wanted to something. It's always great to a Developer take constructive feedback in a positive manner. Despite the game being in such an early state, and not yet experienced it. I shall be keeping an eye on this one. If not for the simple fact @Zombie earned my respect, by how they handled the criticism. Well done.

Look into joiplay, but avoid the play store version it seems to be buggy. You can get it directly from the joiplay website

 

[Seducio]

Thanks for the feedback.
I'll include a mac build in the next update. Not sure about an android port, I'll look into it though.
Yes, MC will be the only one having sex with the girls, there is already a little girl-on-girl action and there will be more (optional)
Lighting is one of the areas I'm trying to improve my skills on - so hopefully it will get better!
With regards to spelling mistakes/grammatical errors please feel free to post exactly what mistakes I've made and I'll fix them. ?

At the start (Tuesday) when Chloe say "I'm so happy your home daddy." , it should be "I'm so happy you're home daddy." There are one or two minor mistakes like that, that I noticed so far. But still a great job, at least this games English is not a machine translation from another language XD

 

[User_37082]

At the start (Tuesday) when Chloe say "I'm so happy your home daddy." , it should be "I'm so happy you're home daddy." There are one or two minor mistakes like that, that I noticed so far. But still a great job, at least this games English is not a machine translation from another language XD

Thanks. There was a previous comment regarding my use of your and you're and I've already gone through it and corrected the mistakes for the next update.
Just to give you a heads-up - this error shows up a lot in this first version!

 

[Nastastic]

Looks like the MC is trying to get right back into prison!

All kidding aside though, I'm always down for another loli-incest daughterfucker game!

Downloading now!