4 Years of Service
I don't mind pregnant content but I never really got why some people like it so much.
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The story is so crazy that I lost interest. The renders are good though
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What do you mean by crazy?
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Mom needing to f her children in order to control her cursed desire to eat people
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I mean, in a game where you have demons and magic, that doesn't seem to be that crazy to me.
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It is all subjective
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Because magically being made a cannibal is normal, compared to quenching bloodthirst with sexual acts
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I would like to get some advice on whether to try the game or not (or try it later). I've read the last three pages of this thread, the OP and the reviews, but I'm still not sure. This is in no form meant as critique, I'm just still not sure what exactly to expect.
I do NOT mind a slow burn or kinetic novels. I find over-the-top stories annoying unless the writer is exceptionally original (this refers to the background stories only, loli and harem stories are not really doable without being over the top, so that's ok). I like lolis, incest and harems, I can't stand NTR (in the widest sense, doesn't matter if MC actually has a ig relationship with a girl or not, for example) and although it is not a dealbreaker, I consider lesbian acts not involving MC in any form NTR too.
The last point is my main concern from what I've read. If the girls fuck around a lot while MC is not involved, I would lose interest in later scenes between MC and those girls. Is that the case? Do the girls have full-blown romantic relationships and "real" sex with each other without MC or is it more a kind of experimenting while not having found the right man or not yet being ready for a relationship with MC? How many sex scenes beyond teasing and blowjob level are there involving MC? Any help is much appreciated, thanks guys!
I do NOT mind a slow burn or kinetic novels. I find over-the-top stories annoying unless the writer is exceptionally original (this refers to the background stories only, loli and harem stories are not really doable without being over the top, so that's ok). I like lolis, incest and harems, I can't stand NTR (in the widest sense, doesn't matter if MC actually has a ig relationship with a girl or not, for example) and although it is not a dealbreaker, I consider lesbian acts not involving MC in any form NTR too.
The last point is my main concern from what I've read. If the girls fuck around a lot while MC is not involved, I would lose interest in later scenes between MC and those girls. Is that the case? Do the girls have full-blown romantic relationships and "real" sex with each other without MC or is it more a kind of experimenting while not having found the right man or not yet being ready for a relationship with MC? How many sex scenes beyond teasing and blowjob level are there involving MC? Any help is much appreciated, thanks guys!
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I would say that it is not the slow burn that the main problem here, but in general interactions between the MC and the LIs. They do not seem natural (even in our usual perverted way peculiar for this site
).Firstly, all the LIs want to fuck the MC immediately as they see him. Which is again not very unusual for AVNs, especially for the not very well written ones. All the time they tease him (and us) walking around in underwear (or without it).
The problem is the MC who doesn't want to fuck them and each time postpones it to the very last moment. He always finds something more important than sex.
He feels like a biggest incel around.If the Dev is so set on the slow burn, I'd prefer it the other way around with the MC being eager and the girls reluctant, as it would feel much more natural (as it happens mostly IRL).
Other then that, the main plot is weird and full of holes but I wouldn't care about it that much if it wouldn't bury underneath most the relationships with the LIs.
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So, I'll just toss this here, and there are minor spoilers everywhere, fyi.
The mom is suffering from a cannibalistic condition (think like a vampire), but instead of animal blood or whatever, she needs to do sexual acts to get it under control.
The little sister has been living with the mom, son with dad. Therefore the little sister has been helping the mom with her condition. Iirc, there is only one scene where the sister eats her mom out, the MC walks in, and freaks out because incest. Don't remember it happening after, but I could be wrong. That's probably the height of 'your NTR' here. The girls don't fuck each other without the MC, it is IMPLIED, because cop girl, and witch girl are in a romantic relationship prior to the story start, however.
If you can "get over" how weird the story is, the game is actually good, and there action for the MC. Incest is a slow burn, because he needs to come to terms with it. The sister is MEGA HITTING on him, begging for the D, basically, and the mom is wishy-washy. Hope this helps!
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At the beginning there is a 2-3 angle scene between mom and sis that is from something that existed from before the mc shows up. mc is not involved with mom or sis at this point. consider that as ntr or dont, but it is the only instance of anybody fucking around when mc isnt present. (theres only 1-2 lines of dialogue. its pretty short as its not meant to be focused on that much)
Also, a few instances of a prior act between women being done before mc shows up to town as well, but not spoken of at length. even this sounds worse than it is.
I cant tell you whether or not to play it, as my opinion would seem self serving.
I will say that there are a few things that seem silly at first but aren't as they seem until you find out later.
Also, mc makes some dumb choices early on. These are addressed within the story.
Still, as I said, its up to you.
Some people will find everything wrong with the story and make sure that it's known. which is respectable, as long as you understand that these are based on individual opinions.
Tis is my very first project and I learned as I went.
Some people love the game, some hate it.
Kinda weird though that the people that hate it seem to stick around in the threads on a few forums. ( no, im not talking about anybody specifically).
Basically, shit does go kind of sideways, but the general consensus is that the game is still pretty entertaining.
Asking opinions about a game on a forum that has split opinions is iffy because you will get both sides to answer you, which puts you right back where you started.
Arc 1 is kinetic
arc 2 is not kinetic.
Also, I'll point out that the mc does put off fucking girls, but he does start to come around.
4 episodes into arc 2 and the mc has had some kind of relation in each update except for the last, so far.
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I mean, he does get some action in Act 1 and all. Especially some sweet milfy freckled action
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Thank you guys a ton, this was very helpful and has alleviated my concerns; I'll try the game and am pretty sure I will enjoy it.
Thanks especially to you makaab, I understand it's frustrating to see your work critiqued and rated based not so much on technical quality as taste and personal perference. Some of that could possibly be improved by a change in rating systems, but I'm afraid matters of taste will always play a big role in how people perceive and talk about an AVN. I hope you continue your projects and continue to find fun or financial success in them despite the negativity that sometimes surrounds them. Thank you for your work!
Finally, I do agree with Beduin123's point of critique though, I have played a few games that were like that and it caused some disconnect and annoyance with the MC. Doesn't ruin a game on its own of course.
Thanks especially to you makaab, I understand it's frustrating to see your work critiqued and rated based not so much on technical quality as taste and personal perference. Some of that could possibly be improved by a change in rating systems, but I'm afraid matters of taste will always play a big role in how people perceive and talk about an AVN. I hope you continue your projects and continue to find fun or financial success in them despite the negativity that sometimes surrounds them. Thank you for your work!
Finally, I do agree with Beduin123's point of critique though, I have played a few games that were like that and it caused some disconnect and annoyance with the MC. Doesn't ruin a game on its own of course.
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as far as the mc being the one to push for girls in most games, and the girls being the modest ones, and holdign back:
I intentionally set out to reverse those roles.
I have always liked the though of women chasing men.
To each his, his/her own though.
I cannot blame people for having an opinion. after all, everything in the world is based on opinion.
I only ever have issues with how people choose to present those opinions.
It's the internet and a lot of people forget that they are humans, talking to other humans.
Consideration, and tact seem to be the first things that are tossed out the window.
Usually replaced with selfish views and a false sense of self entitlement. Especially when it comes to AVN's
Sorry, went off on a bit of a rant there.
I hope you enjoy the game!
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You're also not doing it completely goddamn fucking annoying. As in, there is a bad way of doing things.
My WORST example by far, is the MC in Single Again. I have audibly expressed my annoyance with his beta cuck attitude, several times. I can understand being reluctant in getting with your 'daughters', in the beginning. I mean, if you misread something, you'll end up fucking up your life forever etc. But even AFTER having sex several times, he's still being a little fucking bitch.
The MC in Rav isn't like that. He's not a complete degenerate, so the "landlady" and "roomate" (I had to), asking for the dick, is fucking with his head. He's not as hesitant with the other women, which makes it - for a lack of a better term - way more bearable.
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This also happens IRL but again in a different way. The girls don't usually imply to the guys that they want to fuck them right away. Their game is different and more subtle.
Anyway, I don't hate your game because of wrong choices or else. I understand that you learn as you go. But without criticism you learn nothing and continue to make same mistakes. )
BTW, I don't think there is anything wrong with the sex scene with Erica in the latest update. Except that it is long overdue. Not, because we, the audience, want it but due to the internal plot logic.
But I think you understand it now youself as you put this understanding in the words from the MC's mouth.
I think Erica's fantasies during that sex scene about fucking her family members together with the MC were very hot. Not exactly what you talk about during the first sex with your brother
, but it serves perfectly to the purpose of the incest kink.The new girl is very cute but I'm afraid that at this rate we aren't going to see the action with her any soon considering the number of characters already introduced. Or maybe I'm wrong and instead some initial characters will have to wait a bit longer. It's your story.
Anyway, the balance between the main plot (which to be honest I don't find that exciting) and relationships between the main characters is gradually improving, so I hope the MC will buld his little family based harem before I die of the old age ))
Keep up the good work!
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girls like Erica are to be cherished for life
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