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Any particular reason Brittany is called Zero2 a couple of times now (I don't think that was the case in the previous version)?
Specifically in upWHall.rpy line 40 and script.rpy line 352. I'd think it'd make more sense for those instances to be replaced by [bn]
 
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Any particular reason Brittany is called Zero2 a couple of times now (I don't think that was the case in the previous version)?
Specifically in upWHall.rpy line 40 and script.rpy line 352. I'd think it'd make more sense for those instances to be replaced by [bn]
Ahh, thanks. I had meant to update the script before release. I'll fix that.
 
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Thank you for the feedback. Yeah multiple paths isn't exactly easy but I'm working on it after hearing the feedback. I think my biggest hurdle with that particular schtick is what's extreme? Extreme to some people is sorta run of the mill to others.
Maybe I should poll that.
Check out boundheat after dark. Might find some good ideas there.
 
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Check out boundheat after dark. Might find some good ideas there.
I've never heard of that, no ntr, yeah? Actually, is this a VN? Who's the author if it is?
 
I've never heard of that, no ntr, yeah? Actually, is this a VN? Who's the author if it is?
All I could find was a site. Boundheat after dark is a sister site of boundheat. The videos are dedicated to the genre of lesbian women in prison in films, lesbian bondage, lesbian mistresses, lesbian slaves and lesbian fantasies.
 
ThatTimmy,

I LOVE your game! The setting and the alluded kinks are a perfect match for me and I love your style of writing. The first scene where MC enters the house and holds Brittany for the first time already had me going more than most games manage with their best sex scenes. The only criticism I have so far is a matter of taste; Marie is much too lean and a bit too muscular for my personal taste, but that's not going to hinder my enjoyment too much. Overall really great work and I wish you all the best for the rest of the game and possibly more to come.

Here are some typos and other mistakes I noticed (I assume you can easily find them using the quoted words in a text search):
* "Telsa" -> Tesla (at at least two places)
* "inflagrante delectato" -> in flagrante delicto (unless that's a wordplay on delectable, but even then there's a space missing between "in" and "flagrante")
* "Niagra Falls" -> Niagara
* "defacto" -> de facto
* Danni: "You broke me, remade me into who I was made to be." should probably say "... I was meant to be."
* "ecstacy" -> ecstasy
* Danni: "I still don't have any. You never gave me permission, Master." The sentence is correct, but there's no context, no idea what she's talking about.
* "appaled" -> appalled
* "stupified" -> stupefied
* "Brittany is off and runnig" -> running
* "You're youngest bio-daughter" -> Your
* Brittany: "Hey sis, don't forget to pick up your earring"... -> Marie should be the one saying that
* Marie: "I think you might be as perverted as your old man." Nothing wrong with the text, but after that the image switches to Marie alone, which is too soon I think, because after that Brittany still talks like she is bent over and MC is looking at her ass.
* Marie: "questionably legal acts acts"
* Marie: "I'll beg you it." -> I'll beg you for it.
* Marie: "Begining to want it" -> Beginning
* "Neverless" -> Nevertheless
* "how easy, is is to open" -> how easy it is to open

PS: I'm kinda envious of you, regarding your wife :love:
 
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ThatTimmy,

I LOVE your game! The setting and the alluded kinks are a perfect match for me and I love your style of writing. The first scene where MC enters the house and holds Brittany for the first time already had me going more than most games manage with their best sex scenes. The only criticism I have so far is a matter of taste; Marie is much too lean and a bit too muscular for my personal taste, but that's not going to hinder my enjoyment too much. Overall really great work and I wish you all the best for the rest of the game and possibly more to come.

Here are some typos and other mistakes I noticed (I assume you can easily find them using the quoted words in a text search):
* "Telsa" -> Tesla (at at least two places)
* "inflagrante delectato" -> in flagrante delicto (unless that's a wordplay on delectable, but even then there's a space missing between "in" and "flagrante")
* "Niagra Falls" -> Niagara
* "defacto" -> de facto
* Danni: "You broke me, remade me into who I was made to be." should probably say "... I was meant to be."
* "ecstacy" -> ecstasy
* Danni: "I still don't have any. You never gave me permission, Master." The sentence is correct, but there's no context, no idea what she's talking about.
* "appaled" -> appalled
* "stupified" -> stupefied
* "Brittany is off and runnig" -> running
* "You're youngest bio-daughter" -> Your
* Brittany: "Hey sis, don't forget to pick up your earring"... -> Marie should be the one saying that
* Marie: "I think you might be as perverted as your old man." Nothing wrong with the text, but after that the image switches to Marie alone, which is too soon I think, because after that Brittany still talks like she is bent over and MC is looking at her ass.
* Marie: "questionably legal acts acts"
* Marie: "I'll beg you it." -> I'll beg you for it.
* Marie: "Begining to want it" -> Beginning
* "Neverless" -> Nevertheless
* "how easy, is is to open" -> how easy it is to open

PS: I'm kinda envious of you, regarding your wife :love:
Thank you for your kind words and I am really glad you are enjoying it. Not all the girls will be everyone's cup of tea, I intentionally "flawed" both Marie and Brittany. Without spoiling too much, there will be the option to modify their bodies. So, you will be able to adjust that. I appreciate the errors you found. Seems like there's always more lol.

Honestly, I have no idea how I managed to get her to fall in love with me. But we're both fully committed to the game and having as much fun as possible with it. I've tried to figure out what to write here for 15 minutes because I could go on and on and on about how incredible she is, and how lucky I am. It's why I'm making the game, ultimately it's for her. :giggle:
 
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Just a quick update. We've had a lot of things go wrong this year. A lot. Right now we're down to one car and have been for too long. Hopefully that changes soon. All that to say It's not moving as fast as I hoped, but it's never stopping.
Writing 80%
Coding 60%
Renders 10%
 
Just a quick update. We've had a lot of things go wrong this year. A lot. Right now we're down to one car and have been for too long. Hopefully that changes soon. All that to say It's not moving as fast as I hoped, but it's never stopping.
Writing 80%
Coding 60%
Renders 10%

@ThatTimmy Dude! nice hear of u work!

keep safe!
 
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Lost a day of work due to a massive power loss in NE Ohio. But, tomorrow looks good.
 
No new version yet as far as I can tell, but the update is still being actively worked on judging from the regular subscribestar posts.
 
No new version yet as far as I can tell, but the update is still being actively worked on judging from the regular subscribestar posts.
thanks 4 the heads up :)
 
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