discussion Abandoned VN KN Ren'Py DAZ PGI-257 [Episode 1] [elfieeven]

[Magician5513]

And then I will write another... and another! I'm already pretty deep into writing another story that I'll have to put away until my side project is done

I noticed it... Good work too ... You definetely will need a 'team' in a very short time

 

[Clunk676]

I hope the best for you this is probably going to be another one of my favorites looking forward to episode 2

 

[elfieeven]

I noticed it... Good work too ... You definetely will need a 'team' in a very short time

Sadly my process won't allow for it. I have a habit of completely rewriting half of a scene because of ONE render helping me realize I had missed something important in how the characters would respond or what someone would say.

The best example of that is this render of Lily. Before this the scene was going to go down VERY differently, but the moment I saw this I realized I had her character completely wrong. I love the new version of Lily soooo much more than the original cliche version. This is probably the biggest change in the entire story caused by a single render, but there have been so many other major changes to scenes brought on by a single render so having someone else create renders is not something I'd ever do.

Spoiler: Lily suddenly realizes that teasing and the real thing are VERY different

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[Magician5513]

Sadly my process won't allow for it. I have a habit of completely rewriting half of a scene because of ONE render helping me realize I had missed something important in how the characters would respond or what someone would say.

The best example of that is this render of Lily. Before this the scene was going to go down VERY differently, but the moment I saw this I realized I had her character completely wrong. I love the new version of Lily soooo much more than the original cliche version. This is probably the biggest change in the entire story caused by a single render, but there have been so many other major changes to scenes brought on by a single render so having someone else create renders is not something I'd ever do.

Spoiler: Lily suddenly realizes that teasing and the real thing are VERY different

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And that is what (probably) makes you better then a lot of other dev's... : You care. -- if you ever start working with others make sure you screen them!!! (but you probably know that ).

 

[elfieeven]

And that is what (probably) makes you better then a lot of other dev's... : You care. -- if you ever start working with others make sure you screen them!!! (but you probably know that ).

Good advice

I guess one thing to mention is that I am already working with a model creator over on ATF who does amazing work so that future characters in my games will be way more custom which will be fun.

 

[ILikeGamesToo]

Great werk in this, love it. Nice graphics, nice girls and perfect body size.

 

[ghostwerx]

I love the graphics & girls in this game. The storyline is bit...it's a porn game, but even still for some reason the story just seems a bit fantastical & occasionally my suspension of disbelief falters. But still a very good game & I'll be watching for the next update.

 

[Beduin123]

I love the graphics & girls in this game. The storyline is bit...it's a porn game, but even still for some reason the story just seems a bit fantastical & occasionally my suspension of disbelief falters. But still a very good game & I'll be watching for the next update.

My only problem with this is the MC's wife. She was hot. Killing her deprived the girls of opportunity to be personally guided by her through first sex experiences of their lives.

 

[jeff1005]

Can't wait for the next episode - interesting story, great graphics, pretty girls. What's not to like?! Congratulations to the Dev.

 

[Montimer]

I can't believe I somehow missed this game. For starters I love how uncensored it is. There isn't really some beating around the bush. His wife obviously had some... intentions and preferences lmao.
Same goes for the MC. Would love for it to continue. Spell the things as they are.
I like that the girls are well defined, I like how the girls look. I like that story mentions how old the girls are as usually lot of games tend to do the "All characters are totally 18+"
Personally not too drawn into the more videogamey plot of "here is this thing that forces you to have sex with women" type of plots. But on the other hand, I was more drawn into Tracy and her attempts to establish a "fanclub"
Plus the relatively slow progress with acknowledgement that what's happening isn't normal and should be careful.
Would be actually awesome if there were perhaps some flashbacks to younger girls when they are being educated by their mom.
Very interested to see where this project goes! Thank you for your hard work!

 

[elfieeven]

I can't believe I somehow missed this game. For starters I love how uncensored it is. There isn't really some beating around the bush. His wife obviously had some... intentions and preferences lmao.
Same goes for the MC. Would love for it to continue. Spell the things as they are.
I like that the girls are well defined, I like how the girls look. I like that story mentions how old the girls are as usually lot of games tend to do the "All characters are totally 18+"
Personally not too drawn into the more videogamey plot of "here is this thing that forces you to have sex with women" type of plots. But on the other hand, I was more drawn into Tracy and her attempts to establish a "fanclub"
Plus the relatively slow progress with acknowledgement that what's happening isn't normal and should be careful.
Would be actually awesome if there were perhaps some flashbacks to younger girls when they are being educated by their mom.
Very interested to see where this project goes! Thank you for your hard work!

Flashbacks are DEFINITELY going to happen

 

[jeff1005]

Flashbacks are DEFINITELY going to happen

Ya-a-a-a-y! Flashbacks would certainly be a welcome addition

 

[sn0wf0x]

A little late to the party - I finished Ep1 yesterday and I'm a big fan of your work.
Definitely one of the top games right now.

It's good to see a dev focussing on the details (facial expressions, Amber's perfect tits, etc.). All the girls look really good and the animations are ok so far.
Big fan of slow VNs with a well written story and intimacy in the right place / time. There is enough nudity to be happy playing this game

The plot itself is not my favourite (the medical part that the girls are forced to have interactions) but it works for now and I'm curious where you will take us. The fanclub on the other hand is great ^^
Felt a little bit lost in the supermarket scene - a little bit rushed / forced after you just got a new girl in your fanclub. But I get that it was important for the story with all the information you get and it cleared some questions I had.

For the first release / Ep1 the playtime is really good. Please don't push yourself into a burn-out ^^

Can't wait for the next episode!

 

[elfieeven]

A little late to the party - I finished Ep1 yesterday and I'm a big fan of your work.
Definitely one of the top games right now.

It's good to see a dev focussing on the details (facial expressions, Amber's perfect tits, etc.). All the girls look really good and the animations are ok so far.
Big fan of slow VNs with a well written story and intimacy in the right place / time. There is enough nudity to be happy playing this game

The plot itself is not my favourite (the medical part that the girls are forced to have interactions) but it works for now and I'm curious where you will take us. The fanclub on the other hand is great ^^
Felt a little bit lost in the supermarket scene - a little bit rushed / forced after you just got a new girl in your fanclub. But I get that it was important for the story with all the information you get and it cleared some questions I had.

For the first release / Ep1 the playtime is really good. Please don't push yourself into a burn-out ^^

Can't wait for the next episode!

Believe it or not, the supermarket scene was originally WAY worse. Originally I tried to break it up better into two completely different scenes, but it just didn't make sense that way.

One of the big rules for all of my writing is 'Characters Shalt Not be Dumb unless there is a valid in-world reason for it' which lead to this scene having to play out the way it did.

Jasmine had two priorities in her life. 1) Save Yuna 2) Get MCs help with dealing with other girls infected with PGI. She was willing to let Yuna go first because that was her first priority, but no way would she let MC walk out of the store without talking to him about helping the other girls as well (even though she did get sidetracked during that conversation by her worry for Yuna -- but that's what her character would do. Yuna is priority #1 to her.)

 

[alvin]

thank you for the game update

 

[RushdiaAhmad74]

This one straight to the point I love it, no beating around the bush Lolis and Incest right from the beginning .

 

[User_43891]

Quick question: what's in the update? The changelog and version number seem to be the same as what was posted in December?

 

[Jorund]

Quick question: what's in the update? The changelog and version number seem to be the same as what was posted in December?

It seems to end at the same point, didn't check the whole game to see if something significantly changed, but probably not, it's still just chapter 1.

 

[Naps-On-Dirt]

I don't think there was an update, the OP still says December something. But LC just changed around how things are displayed so I think people got confused.

 

[kot9ira]

Grats will try latter