discussion Abandoned VN KN Ren'Py DAZ PGI-257 [Episode 1] [elfieeven]

[helent]

I dunno, I played a bit last night and it looked pretty norm...?
..though I was actually microdosing on acid then, so maybe not best metric

what do you mean acid?

 

[ontach]

what do you mean acid?

LSD

 

[magistrate]

The premise is neat, and I'm very excited for a hebe harem game. Way too many **** games here for my tastes.

Not a fan of how long the fades are between pictures. Any way to speed that up?

Edit: holy shit a realistic dick? 10/10 best game ever.

 

[TMoney2023]

@elfieeven .. great game so far... looking forward to what it becomes.... caught a spelling error .... chocolate .... not sure if it was previously mentioned

 

[elfieeven]

The premise is neat, and I'm very excited for a hebe harem game. Way too many **** games here for my tastes.

Not a fan of how long the fades are between pictures. Any way to speed that up?

Edit: holy shit a realistic dick? 10/10 best game ever.

I am strongly considering an option to have 'Cinematic' or 'Fast' transitions.

 

[alvin]

wow, it looks good! gonna try it~
congratz and thx for the new game~

 

[bloggs.fred00]

Very good game. Quite impressed with quality of story and renders. Congrats

 

[fenix34]

wow. I didnt know what to expect but this was really good. It was an interesting experience going in expecting one thing and then having the story kind of take a left turn. But in a good way, it really intrigued me.

To those who have said "nothing happens/no real content yet" .....what are you talking about? the girls are naked for a majority of the first quarter if not half of the game. There is a lot of content even already.

keep it up dev, looking like a hot game that also has a interesting sort of mysterious story line going.

 

[elfieeven]

wow. I didnt know what to expect but this was really good. It was an interesting experience going in expecting one thing and then having the story kind of take a left turn. But in a good way, it really intrigued me.

To those who have said "nothing happens/no real content yet" .....what are you talking about? the girls are naked for a majority of the first quarter if not half of the game. There is a lot of content even already.

keep it up dev, looking like a hot game that also has a interesting sort of mysterious story line going.

They want "The Good Scenes" which will happen sooner than you'd think, but that's kind of the point of having the mix of LIs...


Starting with the girls who will provide immediate relief:

• Have wanted to have sex with MC for awhile now (Amber, Katie, Yuna).
• Not interested in sex, but MUST have sex SOON to survive due to late stage PGI (Lily, ?) And yes, Lily fits here since she is not ready for sex, considering how much trouble she had with simple touch.​

And then we get the LIs who fit into the slow/super slow burn categories:

• Don't need to have sex soon BUT must receive 'medicine' due to early stage PGI (Becca, ?)
• Not showing signs of PGI, so they can wait as long as I... err, they want (Jasmine, ?)

 

[R51093]

This is a great game with a lot of backstory. It takes a while to reach the exciting parts, but there are plenty of scenes to keep you engaged. I'm definitely looking forward to the next update and excited to see where the story goes from here.

 

[e6mill]

wow, it looks good! gonna try it~
congratz and thx for the new game~

Love the Aeon Flux PFP!

 

[alvin]

Love the Aeon Flux PFP!

most people didn't recognize it~

 

[elfieeven]

What? Frank is a subscriber to Found in Translation so he gets to see what is going on before non-subs? AND he supports the development of one of the girls favorite AVNs?

Found in Translations Day 13 is already rolling out in waves across the various subscription levels so now is a great time to subscribe and get in on that Annie cuteness... What? You've played my game... she is OBVIOUSLY going to be my favorite thanks to her her cuteness levels being off the charts. You can thank @Gadgeteer for how adorable I had to make one of the new LIs in Episode 2.

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[Regardie]

@elfieeven And again here, maybe a link to the development thread in the OP?

Going back to some of the comments in this thread about the amount of exposition, have you considered creating a Codex? You could put a bunch of the world lore there for those who want to see it and unlock newer entries as the game reveals more information.

 

[elfieeven]

@elfieeven And again here, maybe a link to the development thread in the OP?

Going back to some of the comments in this thread about the amount of exposition, have you considered creating a Codex? You could put a bunch of the world lore there for those who want to see it and unlock newer entries as the game reveals more information.

Oh good idea.. I forgot about that.

A Codex was definitely planned out, but I didn't have a good name for it so thanks for that.

Here is a list of the things I want to add over the new few episodes.

• Colored, clickable character names in dialogue that take you to an info page about them
• The first side story (again these will be very short)
• Codex (thanks for the name!) with additional details on the world that MC lives in. I'd LIKE to make it so that the first time a new important word is encountered, it will be clickable and take you to a short Vocabulary entry.

 

[WLMS]

Well, played it to the end and my only question is : what is your schedule for the next update ?

 

[DirkMcGirk]

Holy fuck. I kind of slept on this. I am usually disappointed by Ver 0.1s so I tend to wait for a few updates before digging in. I am glad I didn't on this one. Really well done. Good story and writing. Great models. The idea of each of the girls having their own "thing" or kink is clever and well done. I'm looking forward to more.

My only critique would be that the whole disease/affliction/ailment plot point is kind of convoluted. I found myself going back and rereading text because I did not follow it entirely. I am guessing it will be furtherr fleshed out further down the road but for now I feel like I am at a pinboard tying strings from point to point to try and narrow down what the condition is and does and who actually caused it!

 

[elfieeven]

Holy fuck. I kind of slept on this. I am usually disappointed by Ver 0.1s so I tend to wait for a few updates before digging in. I am glad I didn't on this one. Really well done. Good story and writing. Great models. The idea of each of the girls having their own "thing" or kink is clever and well done. I'm looking forward to more.

My only critique would be that the whole disease/affliction/ailment plot point is kind of convoluted. I found myself going back and rereading text because I did not follow it entirely. I am guessing it will be furtherr fleshed out further down the road but for now I feel like I am at a pinboard tying strings from point to point to try and narrow down what the condition is and does and who actually caused it!

Oh... the rabbit hole goes so much deeper

But don't worry, now that the basics have been revealed the rest will come at a slower pace.

 

[elfieeven]

Episode 2 Progress Update Available Now @ https://lewdcorner.com/threads/pgi-257-dev-updates-discussion.11707/post-695365

** Gender Fluid Character Reveal **

Well, it's time for the character reveal that is going to be controversial with some, but honestly if you find this news upsetting, then that's a you problem. One important thing to note is I'm not going to be preachy with this character. I think gender identity is something that is best handled without being made a big deal of. It can require a simple explanation the first time you run into it so people aren't confused, but beyond that it should just be.

With all that said, say Hello to Nova. They are NOT the transgender character and have female genitalia. For anyone confused, there is only one Nova and both renders depict this character. It's just that sometimes Nova is a girl and sometimes he's a boy. Sometimes they may even feel like they're both at the same time.

Spoiler: She is such a little cutey with the most interesting eyes...

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Spoiler: He loves his swing and can't wait to meet you...

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[Halfbreed]

Still a great game, but just a bit too smol for me, I initially thought they were going to be hebe, but this is for sure loli. I wish there was a beautiful hebe game out there that had regular updated. Ah well, we can't all have a perfect Christmas.