discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ Origin Story [S2 v0.9.3] [JDOR]

[User_90763]

Really high quality graphics. Not many animations in the lewd scenes but still a good game for fans of realistic graphics/characters with natural facial expressions.

 

[tapion]

There doesn't seem to be much actual feedback on the game, so here's something I hope you take to heart: take out the plot point about his powers being secret. Literally everyone knows—the MTF knows, the principal knows, and he informed the entire faculty of the school. Anyone you wouldn't want to know, knows. Originally, the whole point was to hide it from the MTF, but now not only is the MTF not a problem, but they are in on it.

Who is the principal? How does he have the power to force classified information out of the MTF and then immediately ignore the order not to tell anyone? If this plot point is important to the story, simply don’t have the MTF know and have them lie to the principal, or tell him that it's because the MC is most likely still in danger and she needs to stay with him for a few days to ensure everyone's safety.

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sorry turns out you seems have a continuity error: you had him say he informed the faculty, and then later state that he didn't. My point still stands—he shouldn't be able to obtain classified information from them. He immediately starts using it to threatening the MC. If you're going to have him blackmail the MC, let him overhear the MC or his friends discussing it. It doesn't make sense if the MTF and the sisterhood are backing the MC.

 

[tyktamsyl]

Hey I wanted to ask, I don’t know if the developer checks here, but I saw in developer notes that you spent a year learning daz and renpy. Are those hard to learn? Will they take a year to learn? Are they slow to work with? I am interested in making my own stuff but if there are easier ways than something that will take a year to learn, I would probably want to start there.

 

[captain_hamhog]

When it says profile added or updated or whatever, where do you go to check them out?

 

[Underlord]

Pretty nice can't wait to see what powers we get this update

 

[JoJotheJoe]

One of my favorites. Can't wait to play the new update.

 

[lillo]

OF COURSE both Origin Story and Neko Paradise come up with an update right on the day I'm gonna be out all day TT_TT

 

[AnKaFra]

Disponible traduccion al español de esta version del juego (v0.6.0)
Available spanish translation of this version of the game

Translation of games into Spanish / Traduccion de juegos al español

 

[solcrow]

Mew update! Nice. Looking forward to seeing how far this game goes.

 

[Umutumtrak]

You know MCs power is strong just because he's such an ugly chud. Should be interesting when people find out about the attraction side of things lol

 

[Nezron]

I enjoyed the update, looking forward to more.

peace

 

[captain_hamhog]

I really do hope the MC does get tougher.

 

[peyiwe95]

I really do hope the MC does get tougher.

I'm sure with Lady Steele as a known LI that getting tougher is inevitable. I only hope that it takes a while so we don't end up with another Saitama type situation. In this particular story that would kill the super hero story and turn it into a harem based soap opera.

 

[captain_hamhog]

I'm sure with Lady Steele as a known LI that getting tougher is inevitable. I only hope that it takes a while so we don't end up with another Saitama type situation. In this particular story that would kill the super hero story and turn it into a harem based soap opera.

Indeed, I like seeing a character grow properly. Any idea how many chapters are planned?

 

[skybreaker1780]

Enjoyed the game, renders are great and 6 chapters gives tons of content!

 

[RickS]

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[Underlord]

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Pretty good update I can't wait for MC to start mastering duplicate ability hopefully next updateI want him to gangbang a girl haha

 

[Xdream09]

Ty - Good Job I'll download it right away

 

[duckydoodoo]

small screw up with renders, MC goes shirtless, wearing a shirt for 2 screens of dialogue and then back to shirtless again after Ruth nearly crushes MC while tickling him she has him take off his shirt, they talk then it reappears and is gone again. no big deal, just made me laugh when i was a teen my buddies and i would make our own movies using an 8mm handheld camera, we also did all the editing on the camera or between it and a vhs player. anyway, there were 3 of us one day shooting another bad action film and we had to play all the characters, just changed clothes, but we made some mistakes and had to reshoot one scene way too many times, and not always right away. when we finished the movie and watched it, that one scene showed our characters wearing like 5 different outfits each, every time the camera panned from one side of the room to the next outfits were different. even while playing dead. was so funny we kept in even though we had a manageable scene on vhs we could have cut it with, it was really just too funny and a great reminder how much time and effort we had to put into our stupid movies due to lack of experience and equipment.

anyway. this is not the first scene i caught with similar wardrobe issues. but thought id mention is cause i remembered it due to my long unasked for story

 

[xaren_ae]

Thought this had surprisingly interesting world building, kinda rare but not unique. Slightly slow start but picks up the pace and has good scenes.