discussion Abandoned Ren'Py DAZ My Sister's Devious Plot [0.4] [MacroxssZ]

[Alanray64]

Interesting address taped to the front door. If memory serves me right, but isn't that Sherlock Holmes address from the novels?

 

[S7aard]

Interesting address taped to the front door. If memory serves me right, but isn't that Sherlock Holmes address from the novels?

Yup.

 

[albundi]

nice first version, too bad we didn't see the sister in the bathroom

 

[User_4346]

nice first version, too bad we didn't see the sister in the bathroom

What you mean? I mean you cant see genitals but she's standing there xD

 

[Darkrift411]

What you mean? I mean you cant see genitals but she's standing there xD

I think they meant you dont see her come out of the bathroom after.

But, I personally think its good that this story doesnt just throw all girls at you nude and possibly fucking on the first night like a lot of VNs do. I hate it when MC has either fucked every girl on day one, or had a dream where he fucked her the first night. Seems to take all meaning out of it when he finally gets there.

 

[Lefty]

I am at the beginning of the game, and feel a little lost on two characters: Celeste's school friends Mandy and Zoey. I don't know which is which because images seem to be reversed. Either Celeste will look at the blonde, or the blonde's mouth will be open showing she is speaking, but in the pic next to the text dialog has the brunette shown. Then reverse all of that when the brunette appears to speak, the blonde will be next to the dialog.

For example:

Considering the blonde model is Katie from Just What the Doctor Ordered, you've missed a great easter egg/crossover opportunity if Zoey is actually the brunette. Especially with that line.

I scrolled back for this image, and I'm not very far past it. The girls are just shouting their greetings at MC, so I have no idea if this is fixed a little later on in the story.

 

[Darkrift411]

I am at the beginning of the game, and feel a little lost on two characters: Celeste's school friends Mandy and Zoey. I don't know which is which because images seem to be reversed. Either Celeste will look at the blonde, or the blonde's mouth will be open showing she is speaking, but in the pic next to the text dialog has the brunette shown. Then reverse all of that when the brunette appears to speak, the blonde will be next to the dialog.

For example:
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Considering the blonde model is Katie from Just What the Doctor Ordered, you've missed a great easter egg/crossover opportunity if Zoey is actually the brunette. Especially with that line.

I scrolled back for this image, and I'm not very far past it. The girls are just shouting their greetings at MC, so I have no idea if this is fixed a little later on in the story.

That is probably my fault. The Renpy developer left before he added the portraits so I took over that part and I likely messed them up. The one she is looking at would be correct (since Mac is the game dev and the one who did the renders, and those characters are from his previous games, kind of a little cameo appearance). But it wont have any affect on gameplay since as far as I know they will not be showing up outside of these quick little scenes.

 

[Lefty]

That is probably my fault. The Renpy developer left before he added the portraits so I took over that part and I likely messed them up. The one she is looking at would be correct (since Mac is the game dev and the one who did the renders, and those characters are from his previous games, kind of a little cameo appearance). But it wont have any affect on gameplay since as far as I know they will not be showing up outside of these quick little scenes.

I haven't played or looked at What Brothers Are For. Just went to that page, and sure enough there is the brunette right at the top. That would explain why Mandy talks about her brother in this game. So they are easter eggs after all. Maybe later on, the blonde can convince the other two they have they same "condition" she has, and MC can give them all a treatment during a sleepover.

 

[Darkrift411]

I haven't played or looked at What Brothers Are For. Just went to that page, and sure enough there is the brunette right at the top. That would explain why Mandy talks about her brother in this game. So they are easter eggs after all. Maybe later on, the blonde can convince the other two they have they same "condition" she has, and MC can give them all a treatment during a sleepover.

I think that had been brought up, but then that would be MC in this game NTR'ing the MCs in the other games, so was quickly NOPE'd

 

[User_11354]

When the MC was picking up at his sister at school and her two friends were outside with her, it looked like the text in the dialogue box was for the friend that was NOT actually talking. Maybe it was me, but that's what it looked like. I just picked up the game the other day, so I'll go through it again to make sure I'm not talking out of my ass.

 

[Lefty]

When the MC was picking up at his sister at school and her two friends were outside with her, it looked like the text in the dialogue box was for the friend that was NOT actually talking. Maybe it was me, but that's what it looked like. I just picked up the game the other day, so I'll go through it again to make sure I'm not talking out of my ass.

Your post was number 30. Go up to post 26, read it, then read 27. You're not the only one, but the guy helping the dev gave an explanation as to what probably happened. Just an oops.

 

[User_11354]

yeah I'm usually more thorough in these forums, call it a middle-aged brain fart

 

[Darkrift411]

Its all good, I just felt there needed to be more than just that fixed to justify a new release and update. It should be fixed in 0.2 or in any bug fixes we do before that comes out.

 

[crazyfngers87]

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[You play a 20-year-old whose father has been missing for six months and is presumed dead by almost everyone else. You know otherwise, as he is not an easy man to kill. You are determined to find him, or at least what happened to him, all while you are doing everything in your power to care for your younger sister and keep her happy.
Little do you know, your sister has been working on a devious plot that will help bring numerous other girls into your life. Between taking care of your sister, the needs of these new girls, and your investigation into your father's disappearance, you will eventually begin to find out the reason for her plot.]
[Developer notes: This game will never have NTR or sharing (with other males). There will be choices, but none in the early game. Also, I hope to improve my hardware to allow me to make higher quality renders if the game is successful so that the overall quality of the visuals improves.]
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Spoiler: Genre

3dcg, Incest, loli, Male protagonist, oral sex, small tits, vaginal sex

Spoiler: changelog

0.1
Initial Realease

0.1.1
added character portraits to side of text
lowered text so it covers less of the images
fixed the phone number to not show Heather's name before MC would have had her number in his phone
edited name labels to show "unknown person" if we do not yet know the characters' name
edited K's name to change color after an event lets us know more about them
lowered bitrate of the strip club animation video as it was not able to play for multiple users

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MEGA Link is dead for this game Guys & Gals. Too bad cause this game has potential & lots of cute Chicks to play with too, by the looks of the Pics.

 

[Tiur]

MEGA Link is dead for this game Guys & Gals. Too bad cause this game has potential & lots of cute Chicks to play with too, by the looks of the Pics.

Working just fine for me.

 

[User_11354]

Same here

 

[crazyfngers87]

Haha, yeah it works now Guys. It didn't work last night & today too, before I sent the last message complaining about the Broken Link. Before the MEGA Link just went to nothing, not even the MEGA Website came up to say the link is gone or doesn't exist anymore. It was just a blank page. Anyways I downloaded the game from an adult website I googled, but it was just the v0.1 though Lol ?. So hopefully this Version 1.1 will be a bit different. It only 2 min to download too, Compared to the 4 hours at 50-60KB/s

 

[Darkrift411]

Haha, yeah it works now Guys. It didn't work last night & today too, before I sent the last message complaining about the Broken Link. Before the MEGA Link just went to nothing, not even the MEGA Website came up to say the link is gone or doesn't exist anymore. It was just a blank page. Anyways I downloaded the game from an adult website I googled, but it was just the v0.1 though Lol ?. So hopefully this Version 1.1 will be a bit different. It only 2 min to download too, Compared to the 4 hours at 50-60KB/s

There is no version 1.1, just 0.1 and 0.1.1. The second one has very small fixes, nothing that changes the story.

 

[Cacha1023]

Cuando abra nueva actualizacion?

 

[User_4346]

Cuando abra nueva actualizacion?

pronto, espero poder subir la proxima actualizacion antes que acabe el a~o.