discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Lost & Bound [0.4 Public] [Twisted Moon Games]

[TwistedMoony]

when doing a scene with alot of white walls make sure to adjust the ambient lighting as it will bleed the colors or make everything that is light colored realy bright. the dinner scene is a example.
might want to add a age condition at the opening area with first daughter talking about internship even thou she looks 9. its out of place.

Thank you for the pointers in lighting.
About age:
As stated early on, all girls are 18 years old

So is this going to be another game that mind fucks the player as you play? Were you end-up going insane, depressed, or crazy again?

Nope. No mental health issues here for the MC

The MC looks like a character Scott Adkins played in the Undisputed movie series.

Don't know the series but when I saw the tattoos from said character and the rest... well sure, they look alike But pure coincident...

but it's explained pretty good on why only Lily is the real bio daughter.

Exactly!

 

[JustFlynn]

Wow, very promising start! Looking forward to future updates! My only tiny issue is that the nipples on the twins look a little odd. Is it just me?

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This has nothing to do with the size of the boobs or color of the nipples, those are perfect. I just feel like their nipples are maybe placed a little too low, making them look like they are slightly saggy boobs instead of perky, teen boobs. They're obviously not saggy, but they remind of a 30yo with A-cups that are just starting to see the effects of time and gravity. It could also because the areolas are oblong and in a slighty vertical direction with the nipple being a bit lower down on the areola.

I know this is such a miniscule detail in an otherwise great game, but they just struck me as a little off for the characters. Am I the only one seeing this?

 

[TwistedMoony]

Thanks for the feedback.
I am aware of the problem and couldn't put my finger on it until you pointing it out! I will look at it so they look perfect.

 

[Sht421]

A very good start. Short but still worth it.

 

[khaelin02]

I'm hoping this one adds lesbian loli's or mother sexing her own cute girls. Too many games have where it's only the MC that does each girl one a time, while others just stand around, or not even there. I'd even like if they told MC stories of them being with each other.

 

[GiantPixi]

Don't know the series but when I saw the tattoos from said character and the rest... well sure, they look alike But pure coincident...

I wasn't having a dig at all. Scott Adkins is my fave martial arts actor, I love his films.

I just saw the MC and he instantly reminded me of Boyka is all. Tis not a bad thing.

 

[Loyo]

Tags looks great, best of luck! Would be great if you were to add some lesbian incest interactions.

After what I saw, gotta say that not only there are clear signs pointing in this direction, but it's exceptionally well made. I will be waiting for next update to see where this goes, but so far this looks like a prime candidate for subscription

 

[TwistedMoony]

I wasn't having a dig at all. Scott Adkins is my fave martial arts actor, I love his films.

I just saw the MC and he instantly reminded me of Boyka is all. Tis not a bad thing.

Didn't see it as one once I understood it was obvious why you said it

After what I saw, gotta say that not only there are clear signs pointing in this direction, but it's exceptionally well made. I will be waiting for next update to see where this goes, but so far this looks like a prime candidate for subscription

Thank you very much for your kind words! We'll do our best to deliver the expectations we've created with this demo.

 

[Drvm]

Any hope for a Mac version ?

 

[TwistedMoony]

Any hope for a Mac version ?

Will do one tomorrow

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

And right off the bat, there's great character-building, an interesting plot twist, and (for me) some unforeseen intimacy — didn't expect things to be lewd with the daughters yet, even if it was clear in which direction it was going. As previously, the story so far is well put together with beautiful renders and fitting music.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Any hope for a Mac version ?

Mac version now available in OP

 

[goregames]

Moony, this was better than I thought it was going to be, I have to say, it's better than AITA.

Well done.

 

[TwistedMoony]

Moony, this was better than I thought it was going to be, I have to say, it's better than AITA.

Well done.

Thank you for the compliment

 

[SynBlade]

Oh for fucks sake redheaded twins! you Devs really know how to get me to play a game

 

[Drvm]

Mac version now available in OP

Amazing !

 

[Impulse 9]

After what I saw, gotta say that not only there are clear signs pointing in this direction, but it's exceptionally well made. I will be waiting for next update to see where this goes, but so far this looks like a prime candidate for subscription

Saw this game. Was about to ask till I saw your answer. Fingers crossed

 

[0bora]

Charachters should have a sugestion about the age... to be in harmony with the aspect, size, expresion or action. When are asked to set a age usualy you see the character first time into some small picture out of context and try report it to the other characters. example if set a 14 for twins because they look like that and in the next update they drive a car or go to colege or work that will be odd.
TY

 

[Nastastic]

Yeah like Delilah's internship in Rational Chaos (by another dev) lol.

At least that game is over now so she's only ruined in retrospect.

Follow the above poster's advice please, Moony.

 

[tinytits]

interesting definitely a yes from me