discussion On Hold VN Ren'Py DAZ Kicked Out Of The House [v0.3.1 EARLY ACCESS] [Zbykson]

[Zbykson]

Renderings look like they would be good if they were clearer. I am not a graphics expert, but damn, these look like they have sand all over them. Hopefully just as a test for the demo, and they will be polished up for the game itself.

For the purpose of this game, I started to learn DAZ. It was only recently that I found out how to remove the noise. The scenes in future versions of the game will already be better, and the ones that are already there, I plan to render again before releasing the game from the demo.

 

[Aces.High]

Sandbox style terrible waste of time, too much clicking and no reward, shortcuts to different areas of home would be appreciated.

 

[Kawasaki]

I started the game and got a little tired of clicking around the house aimlessly.
As others have said, the direct actions without any cause is a bit weird.
I hope Dev makes the story a bit more interesting, but judging by his comments he does plan to take the comments to heart.In any case, there is another developer making loli games.
Keep it up.

 

[Iateyourdragon]

I seem to be missing something how do you go outside?

 

[Andems]

Oh lord there is no chance dev's first language is English! I'm too busy laughing at funny sentences to properly enjoy the models

 

[MinnesotaRat]

Hello everyone,
I have read all the feedback on the game so far.
Certain ailments found in the current version of the game I intend to cure, but no promises that this will be in version 0.2.
Thank you for your feedback and advice, I will definitely use it in the future.

The main suggestion I can give you is to have ChatGPT do the translation into conversational English. You can even tell it to do things like "sound like a 25 year old American woman" so that the characters have appropriate voices.

Otherwise you're going to need a native english speaker to edit everything first so it sounds fluent, or at the very least makes sense. For example, ending a sentence with an adverb is common in many languages, but sounds completely bizarre in English.

 

[Deleted member 36437]

Will keep watch. Need more smol games!

 

[Andems]

Some actual recommendations since the dev is new. The game feels repetitive. Add some spice to the grind so it feels less dead. The panty sniffing looks like an attempt but its nothing quite graphic enough. make the pizzeria open at "morning" and id also recommend changing morning into "noon" so the game feels better. Other than that a little proof read and i think itll be better. good luck, have fun!

 

[User_61141]

How do I leave the house?

I seem to be missing something how do you go outside?

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[Montimer]

Hello everyone,
I have read all the feedback on the game so far.
Certain ailments found in the current version of the game I intend to cure, but no promises that this will be in version 0.2.
Thank you for your feedback and advice, I will definitely use it in the future.

Don't take what people say too personally by the way. Most people here are delighted to see another developer who makes an actual loli game.

Welcome to Lewdcorner.

The main suggestion I can give you is to have ChatGPT do the translation into conversational English. You can even tell it to do things like "sound like a 25 year old American woman" so that the characters have appropriate voices.

Otherwise you're going to need a native english speaker to edit everything first so it sounds fluent, or at the very least makes sense. For example, ending a sentence with an adverb is common in many languages, but sounds completely bizarre in English.

Fyi this is a terrible advice to give for loli oriented texts.
DO NOT do this if it's related to describing the girls in the game or any type of sexual content with them. It's nothing but trouble as ChatGPT is usually connected to your phone number.
For somewhat normal texts, sure. Otherwise avoid.

 

[R51093]

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Overview:
You are an ordinary boy, turning 18 tomorrow. Your parents have surprised you with a trip together. However, the trip was just an excuse for you to pack up and on your 18th birthday they could throw you out of the house. You decide to call your aunt to ask if she will take you in under her roof. Your aunt was happy to take you into her home. Already at the front you greet her and your younger cousin. What happens next? Find out for yourself!
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Spoiler: Genre

Loli, Incest, Male Protagonist, Sandbox, small tits, oral sex, hand job, sharing

Spoiler: Installation

Extract and run

Spoiler: Developer Notes

English is not my official language so if there are any translation mistakes please report them on my discord.

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Others: Unofficial Android Port by phdusa1* - Compressed*

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the graphics are not the best some of the renders are grainy and i also HATE "SANDBOX" games how ever the path map on the PC helps alot and takes away most of what makes "sandbox" sooo vexing and the grind is not bad either how ever with that said.

I love that the game doesn't even try to hide that its loli or incest right off the bat the default age's is perfect and fits right in with the story unlike other games that try to hide the loli behind a BS story of "yeah shes 20 and in college but looks and acts like a loli in every other aspect" i just hope and pray that the game continues this "loli crusade" many are doing over damn pixels has shutdown way to many promising games so please keep up the good work

 

[superpuma]

I didn't achieve ANYTHING! I honestly don't see the logic in making something that should be fun difficult... let's get straight to the point.

 

[chester1530]

Hello everyone,
I have read all the feedback on the game so far.
Certain ailments found in the current version of the game I intend to cure, but no promises that this will be in version 0.2.
Thank you for your feedback and advice, I will definitely use it in the future.

Strength and honor; Maximus Decimus Meridius

 

[angstlord]

I cant go out of the house on android @phdusa1

 

[an0n]

I seem to be missing something how do you go outside?

Currently, you can only use the map from certain locations, such as your room, directly outside the pizzeria, and a specific location in [other character's] house. Don't know why the dev did this.

You may also need to complete certain events first, check your laptop in your room for a Progress map.

 

[User_101961]

enjoyable thanks

 

[phdusa1]

I cant go out of the house on android @phdusa1

Go to MC's room, from there you can open the map.

 

[lewdlove]

Plz upgrade renders/quality..
The prefix of a girl who also likes young girls is fresh,and needs a partner in crime, is a fresh angle!
but sandbox and render quality lets it down..

But this can be a homerun if worked on further!!!

 

[Lorudo]

A time skip button and/or a teleport to bedroom from anywhere button would be appreciated.
And probably an overview of locations. instead of having to guess and remember where to click to move around

 

[pregame]

The sandbox is extremely frustrating. I hope the developer makes this a little less tedious if not get rid of it. I am not getting anywhere so far. However, making a smol character the looks like a smot and aged appropriatly is great. I sure hope the developer does some modifications but certinally maintains the smol looks and characters. Nice start but room for improvement.