discussion On Hold VN Ren'Py DAZ Kicked Out Of The House [v0.3.1 EARLY ACCESS] [Zbykson]

[Zbykson]

I can't unbutton Melissa's shirt, I've tapped every inch of it

You need to click exactly on the shirt button.

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[Hilarion]

I was pleased to not see reused assets that many vn seem to share. the english is rough but decent. Payout for the job should be higher to reduce grinding. The girls are nicely done and i can't wait to see all age difference sex.

 

[Uh nona miss]

Idk if i did all i can or not. Theres really no indication on what to do. Didnt even know about stealing the panties til i decided to just try it.

 

[Zbykson]

Idk if i did all i can or not. Theres really no indication on what to do. Didnt even know about stealing the panties til i decided to just try it.

Read the dialogues carefully next time

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[Uh nona miss]

Read the dialogues carefully next time

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Yea no it was 100% my dumbass error lol.. I can also check the pc for "path progress" didnt know i had to talk to, as shes named in ERM, PM(assume pizza manager) and then talk to her in the evening on a saturday

 

[Zbykson]

Version 0.3 EARLY ACCESS officially released!

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[Moss]

Read the dialogues carefully next time

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It's hard to read the dialog while depressing the ctrl tab! Lol.

 

[Moss]

I'm stuck on the computer screen. I hit Return but that doesn't take me back to the game -

Looking good. I'm an oddball and like sandbox style games lol. I wish it was a bit easier to see when you reach the end of the content though. With some sand box games, you could be clicking around forever and not know there isn't any more to do this round. I know there is a thing on the computer to tell you whats next, but i'm not sure if the arrow doesn't work or if i've reached the end of what I can do.

I'm stuck on the computer screeen. Hitting return only takes me to my saves. How do i get back to the game once i'm in my computer??

 

[Zbykson]

I'm stuck on the computer screen. I hit Return but that doesn't take me back to the game -

I'm stuck on the computer screeen. Hitting return only takes me to my saves. How do i get back to the game once i'm in my computer??

Click the Windows logo on the in-game taskbar

 

[Moss]

Little rough around the edges. Someone should really invite the developer to lewdcorner so he can communicate and perhaps take feedback.

I think lot of the game is held together by nonsense and convenience. If this is a demo, proper 0.1 release should perhaps be reconsidered for a rewrite to make semblance of a story.

1. Kicking out of the house
How its done in the game is incredibly lazy. No offense but it's purely that. Parents appear incredibly heartless and it exists to drive the plot.
Firstly, portray the MC in different way. Give parents actual good reason to kick out the MC and finally; Give MC actual emotional response as he's been kicked out of his home.
Why?
A) You could age up the MC by a lot and have MC be kicked out for being a good for nothing parasite. Parents get fed up, they kick the MC. He then out of desperation goes to his good aunt and gets a new home however under condition that he gets a job.

B) Let parents find some "questionable content" on PC's computer. Perhaps make MC older too. Let them freak out. Yell at him, kick him out. Threaten to call police if he comes near the house. This establishes the MC as already interested in the girls. Perhaps during dialogue change the wording to be more... lustful towards Lena.

C) Portray MC's family as abusive or fucked up. MC angers his short tempered parents, he gets kicked out.

2. Readproof texts and commit
Select a writing style and wording for your game and commit to it. Make sentences age appropriate. It feels so weird for an 18 year old dude to call his cousin a "young one" so many times. Like dude, she is just 8 years younger. It isn't that big of a difference. Additionally making the characters more engaging in repeated conversations would help.
Since all you need is to see conversation once and you've seen everything. Meaning relationship grind becomes a chore.

3. ANNOYING SANDBOX CLICKING
If you want to make a sandbox, all good. But make it bearable.
For example. WHY can't we travel from any room to any point? Why do we have to be in a specific area to travel. Let players freely go from Melissa's home to theirs.
WHY do we have to after work go to Pizzeria if there's nothing else to be done there.
WHY do we have to unlock our phone. One click. Does literally nothing.
WHY there isn't a back button when browsing on a PC.
WHY is the relationship grind so damn slow. Especially with people like Emily and Melissa.
Half of the game is split between clicking from one place to the another. Where actual "meaty" part of the game is about 5 minutes total.

4. Melissa
Entire... part felt so wrong. Starting with the dumb blowjob. Who does that? It's just so out of place. Wouldn't it be better if their relationship progressed, she invited you home for first time, you both got a bit drunk and she sucked off the MC?
Then for second time with "pizza level 2" she invites you home?
You look at her sister and suddenly you both are accomplices? Wouldn't it be much, much better if MC went and spied on Emily?
Alternatively MC caught Melissa fingering herself while watching Emily shower?
Then MC confronting Melissa about it. Melissa understandably getting paranoid and throwing out MC and threatening his job.
Then in order to unlock more dialogue you talk to her daily, unlock "pizza level 3"
Where she proceeds to admit what she likes and slowly introduces you to... her world. Let's say. Perhaps shows you videos. Talks dirty while jacking off MC. Then offers to be his accomplice.
All the while reserving that Emily nightime visit for much later into the game once their twisted relationship has progressed.

Things progress way too quickly and happen because it's convenient for them to happen.

That being said, I do appreciate that the game is actually a loli game and doesn't hold back in some regards. Describes lolis as lolis and characters for who they like in terms of the preference. That kinda makes it stand out unlike some games.
At the same time, it needs a bit more text variety and bit of rewriting + quality of life to make the game overall better.
Regardless, I wish the developer good luck with future endeavors!

Excellent feedback. Thanks for taking the time to write it. I hope the Dev follows through with your suggestions!

 

[Moss]

Click the Windows logo on the in-game taskbar

Thanks! I only saw the word Hist, couldn't see the windows logo.

 

[Moss]

Click the Windows logo on the in-game taskbar

Sorry, probably another dumb question, but how do you make money? the option to deliver pizzas only comes up the one time.

 

[mig776]

I have a problem, I prepared everything to open the studio but after the afternoon it turns into night and I can't start the last scene because there is no evening

 

[Zbykson]

Sorry, probably another dumb question, but how do you make money? the option to deliver pizzas only comes up the one time.

In the pizzeria on the counter next to Melissa there are 3 boxes, click this

I have a problem, I prepared everything to open the studio but after the afternoon it turns into night and I can't start the last scene because there is no evening

Do something that causes the game to skip to the evening, for example, doing homework with Lena. Do not use the shared shower with Lena because this activity causes this bug. In the next few days I will release a patch that fixes all the bugs reported to me.

 

[Andems]

In the pizzeria on the counter next to Melissa there are 3 boxes, click this

Do something that causes the game to skip to the evening, for example, doing homework with Lena. Do not use the shared shower with Lena because this activity causes this bug. In the next few days I will release a patch that fixes all the bugs reported to me.

Thats not working unfortunately... Do you know the variable name you use for the time cycle so i can manually change it?

 

[BMUS]

Thats not working unfortunately... Do you know the variable name you use for the time cycle so i can manually change it?

$ current_period = 2

 

[mig776]

I have same problem no matter what i do to speed up time and it always skips evening now,same with delivering pizzas use be able to do twice day to get evening it skips to night also,so no way to get to evening to go to garage for the studio .no way to do the last part.

Try doing homework with Lena like Zbykson said. It works for me

 

[warhendy]

Try doing homework with Lena like Zbykson said. It works for me

I have same problem and doing homework not fixed problem :-(

 

[warhendy]

I have same problem and doing homework not fixed problem :-(

after save , quit game , start and load now frst evening ... fixed

 

[phdusa1]

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