@Goosenards
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Actually, I didn't want to comment on this game.
But I have to get rid of something:
1.
Why does the guy have the mouse/rat in his anus and how the hell did she get in there?
What is the mental approach of incorporating such a scene into a story?
Should that be fun, I don't know, at least I had no fun.
2.
The part, in which Aliyah makes a bunch of revenge in his bed, was Semi funny, but not more.
The part, in which the guy finds in and what he does with him, was not at all.
I saw pictures on the net on which guys pulled their fully shitty underpants over their heads and photographed themselves, I didn't find that funny either.
There should even be people who shit in a bowl to eat that, I think that is in Disgustfulness hardly to be overbidden.
Nobody would implement something like this in a game that people should entertain and certainly not if it should bring in some money.
Then why are such scenes in this game, in any case it is not good taste, at best artistic freedom.
But even if you can do something, it doesn't mean that you have to do it.
3.
The models of the little Aaliyah and the witch (the black -haired in the white dress that is not in the game) are well done and implemented.
The story, up to the, let's call it slips, was interesting and worth reading.
That is not much on the has it, but because of these two points I would like to continue the project.
I also tested your other project "Uncanny" and was really thrilled.
After I played this one and read comments about others (the game would be too short or would have a bad outcome of the story) I'm worried that it could end up with it.
But in the end you are the author and determine whether and how it goes on.
Thank you for your work.