discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py EGBE [Prologue v0.3.3b] [Ketzal]

[Nosian]

Thanks for your constructive criticism, love it. The ages are just for the demo, in the Prologue, released next week, you can configure the ages as you wish.

AHHH!!! WHEN?! Not actually trying to rush you, but I would be lying if I said that I wasn't checking on this for the update daily.

 

[eudaimonia]

Very promising game, looks amazing so far.

 

[RodriguezQueso]

I want to see how the story progresses.
It seems to have a lot of potential.

 

[LuigiMaxGalaxy]

Everytime a newer game drops and it has an amazing prologue I always tell myself not to get hyped or attached but brothers, I am here for this!

 

[AlBetGam]

Exactly, Why would someone play an incest AVN and choose to not fuck their family? I've never heard of a dev purposely making ugly family members so that's not a reason to not fuck them. As far as this one in particular maybe in later updates there's an alt path that opens up for the lolis and that choice was just meant to close the path of fucking mom for those not into milfs (same reason the MC's literal landlady is also optional via choice).

In this case a roleplay-focused player might decide their character isn't willing to forgive her.

Which, fair enough. But if so it makes sense that they wouldn't get to do the photoshoot, because that's part of the olive branch she's extending to the MC; if he shoots that down why would he still get to take pictures of her models?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

In this case a roleplay-focused player might decide their character isn't willing to forgive her.

Which, fair enough. But if so it makes sense that they wouldn't get to do the photoshoot, because that's part of the olive branch she's extending to the MC; if he shoots that down why would he still get to take pictures of her models?

Unforgiven = then grudge/hate fuck her. I've never hated my mom but if I did for some reason and was in a similar situation I'd prob fuck her anyway if she was willing because there's no way I'd turn down more incest pussy, grudge or not.

 

[crisps]

I played 0.3B, but I found a problem. When I clicked on the Characters button in the top right corner, an error occurred（Well, actually, there was more than just this error）

 

[User_150284]

I played 0.3B, but I found a problem. When I clicked on the Characters button in the top right corner, an error occurred（Well, actually, there was more than just this error）

By following the instructions, you will no longer have bugs. : "SAVES ARE NOT COMPATIBLE." And no it's not a demo anymore. That's the reason you need to start a new game.

 

[crisps]

By following the instructions, you will no longer have bugs. : "SAVES ARE NOT COMPATIBLE." And no it's not a demo anymore. That's the reason you need to lunch a new game.

Oh, I understand. It's because I used an old save file. Thank you for your reply. The game is great, and I appreciate your hard work in creating it

 

[MMD enthusiast]

Just finished playing through v0.2B. Great stuff, I really liked the direction it's heading in, and can't wait for more.

The ages are just for the demo, in the Prologue, released next week, you can configure the ages as you wish.

Super glad to see this, because as was pointed out by CndnViking, a few lines don't make a ton of sense with the ages being listed as 18 in the menu.

The other bit of critique that I would give is:

Spoiler: Minor spoiler for photoshoot scene

At the start of the photo shoot scene, you have a few instances where the MC imagines or hallucinates the models naked. It feels to me like that takes away a bit of the impact from the reveal, to just have them be standing there naked all of a sudden. This is doubly the case because you already have them both shown naked later as part of the scene. I would PERSONALLY have preferred to wait just a little bit longer for the 'real' reveal in a way that makes sense in universe (like you do later with the changing room scene, and towards the end of the photoshoot), rather than you giving it up early as part of the hallucination.

Other than that though, I really enjoyed the game. The renders were nice, the models are attractive, the lighting in scenes was good, the story is interesting enough that I want to see where it goes. All around really enjoyable. I wish you luck with your future development of the game Ketzal!

 

[User_150284]

Just finished playing through v0.2B. Great stuff, I really liked the direction it's heading in, and can't wait for more.

Super glad to see this, because as was pointed out by CndnViking, a few lines don't make a ton of sense with the ages being listed as 18 in the menu.

The other bit of critique that I would give is:

Spoiler: Minor spoiler for photoshoot scene

At the start of the photo shoot scene, you have a few instances where the MC imagines or hallucinates the models naked. It feels to me like that takes away a bit of the impact from the reveal, to just have them be standing there naked all of a sudden. This is doubly the case because you already have them both shown naked later as part of the scene. I would PERSONALLY have preferred to wait just a little bit longer for the 'real' reveal in a way that makes sense in universe (like you do later with the changing room scene, and towards the end of the photoshoot), rather than you giving it up early as part of the hallucination.

Other than that though, I really enjoyed the game. The renders were nice, the models are attractive, the lighting in scenes was good, the story is interesting enough that I want to see where it goes. All around really enjoyable. I wish you luck with your future development of the game Ketzal!

Someone else had already pointed this out, and I didn't want to listen to them, but I realize now that I was wrong. So for the R version (public), I'm going to tone down the MC's delirium.

 

[MMD enthusiast]

Someone else had already pointed this out, and I didn't want to listen to them, but I realize now that I was wrong. So for the R version (public), I'm going to tone down the MC's delirium.

Right and wrong is subjective (at least in this instance), it's your artistic vision at the end of the day. Do what feels right for you, it won't do anyone any good if you ignore what YOU want in the game and get burnt out on creating it. I just wanted to share my opinion for you.

IF you are looking for more feedback though, and this one is very much an opinion, I would also say it might be worthwhile to truly consider what the upper limit should be for the amount of love interests in the game. The more you add, the harder it is for the player to care about them all. You already have I believe around 10 characters that are or could become love interests, that's fine, you probably have room for more still, just be careful about how many you end up with in total.
If you end up with too many, the player (or at least I know this is the case for me) will stop caring about most of them, and only truly be interested in a handful. This isn't a bad thing, but when you as a solo dev/small team put out an update, if you have say 20 love interests, you might not be able to put content for all of them into the update. Again, that's totally fine, it can however lead to people losing interest if the characters they care about get nothing for an extended period of time.

Parting wisdom though, you can ignore literally everything I said if you truly want to. If listening to the audience for everything takes the game in a direction you don't like, and makes it something you don't want to work on, then it might be worth ignoring the criticism, even if it is valid. Also, just a reminder after the multiple paragraphs of critique, I really did truly enjoy the game. I look forwards to seeing the final product, even if that means it ends up having some small things along the way I don't like.

 

[chester1530]

Sorry, but I have a complaint...
Why do the updates seem so short and exciting even if they last an hour, and always with supreme quality?... That's it, I'm pissed.

 

[fthegovernment]

By following the instructions, you will no longer have bugs. : "SAVES ARE NOT COMPATIBLE." And no it's not a demo anymore. That's the reason you need to lunch a new game.

"launch" a new game

 

[User_150284]

"launch" a new game

Lol. Thanks. Fixed

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Another hot auntie (though young Sophie was still hotter). Also call me strange for noticing oddball things but all the milfs had their daughters when they were 16. Not unheard of I guess but quite the coincidence when most of them live in the same building.

 

[User_150284]

Another hot auntie (though young Sophie was still hotter). Also call me strange for noticing oddball things but all the milfs had their daughters when they were 16. Not unheard of I guess but quite the coincidence when most of them live in the same building.

Excellent observation

 

[jugz79]

Love your work. Patiently waiting for us broke folk to get to enjoy the new update. No spoilers please. Lol

 

[chester1530]

Love your work. Patiently waiting for us broke folk to get to enjoy the new update. No spoilers please. Lol

Trust me, it's worth the wait. The bad thing is what it always is. It's like that drink with a drug name. No matter how much you drink, it always leaves you wanting more...

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[chester1530]

"launch" a new game

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