discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py EGBE [Prologue v0.3.3b] [Ketzal]

[Ceesko]

Didn't see the wow-effect. MC is like a whiny bitch, constantly "thinking" and complaining about everything. The models are unrealistic and repulsive (the girl on the poster doesn't look like a child, but like a 25-year-old fat slut). The facial features of many models resemble unsuccessful plastic surgery (poor quality of rejuvenation), unnatural and repulsive (an adult face with an unnaturally small body), even ugly from some angles. A huge step back compared to SSP, but since this is just a demo, everything can still change for the better.

Perhaps the reason is that the child models were made by reworking adult models, and not created from scratch. That is why the repulsive effect of "Williams Syndrome" or "dwarfism" appeared.

Most annoying thing for me is the whining and the self chastisement in a Loli game...That is absolute rubbish

 

[Republican Bear]

Not bad for a short demo. Wonder if it's based in the same setting as his other game?

Also hope Ketzal isn't pissed off as he wrote please don't share the demo.

Anyway I don't see how the MC is a whiny bitch. The mom abandoned him to take care of his dying father. It's called plot.

 

[BadJM]

Not bad for a short demo. Wonder if it's based in the same setting as his other game?

Also hope Ketzal isn't pissed off as he wrote please don't share the demo.

Anyway I don't see how the MC as a whiny bitch. The mom abandoned him to take care of his dying father. It's called plot.

He was the one that shared the demo here. This was the first demo that was released a while back, If I am not mistaken he released 2 more demos after that, but those are for subs only.

 

[Republican Bear]

He was the one that shared the demo here. This was the first demo that was released a while back, If I am not mistaken he released 2 more demos after that, but those are for subs only.

Good to know as the disclaimer said otherwise.

 

[Moss]

That's what I've read here and there. I'm not sure if it's accurate, but I'm not looking for truth. It's an imaginary country... For the sake of the story, that's how it works in the country of the story

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[BeowulfKnight]

Good to know as the disclaimer said otherwise.

Ketzal sent this to us :'D, I assume the do not share was a remanent from the initial internal sub testing.

To help someone save time. Password for Gofile version does not work. Workupload working, did not try the others.

Also for people bitching that the password doesn't work for certain links.......THEY ARE THE SAME FILE SENT TO DIFFERENT MIRRORS -_-. They work it's just user error.

 

[User_150284]

I'm very busy at the moment, finishing SSP S2 and working on finalizing the prologue for EGBE, so I didn't think to remove the disclaimer. But I was the one who sent the demo to LC mods, so no problem.

 

[Corpse]

Even though there weren't any sex scenes in the demo it's very easy to tell that this game has a ton of potential.
I'm hoping ketzal decides to show us what some of his non-European lolis look like since the story seems to be centered around a modeling agency.
Don't get me wrong I love European girls, especially gingers with freckles, but even your favorite food gets boring eventually if that's the only thing you eat.

 

[sarbasst]

V0.2B ???

 

[DoverDad]

Like what there was so far . @ketzal, do you still have a sub-star account? I tried looking for you on there the other day, but could not find you on there

 

[User_150284]

Like what there was so far . @ketzal, do you still have a sub-star account? I tried looking for you on there the other day, but could not find you on there

Yes.

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I've asked mods to not mention it in the post for reasons

 

[cippssss]

just make sure, this is not ntr type of game right ?

 

[fthegovernment]

Like what there was so far . @ketzal, do you still have a sub-star account? I tried looking for you on there the other day, but could not find you on there

what lvl is your pic posted ??

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[DoverDad]

what lvl is your pic posted ??

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Do you mean my PF pic or one with Dover Dar on it? If so, not sure, you might want to ask one of the mods

 

[DoverDad]

Yes.

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[User_150284]

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Sorry.

just make sure, this is not ntr type of game right ?

I don't do NTR games.

 

[L0rdJ4ck]

Awwww they're soooo cute ! (Nice work to transform/hide the Leana model )
Nice teasing
May the story be as complicated as SSP (or not ? well, you do you. I may think to give some financing since i ... had great pleasure (many times) with your art).

 

[Chola22]

Great start to the game! The premise is also excellent and brings LOTS of opportunities, let’s put it that way... And the thing with the mother... well, my initial theory is that the MC's father wasn’t exactly who he thought he was... maybe he cheated on the mother or something worse. And as for who she wants the MC to meet, I bet it’s his sister... haha I can’t wait!

Oh, and speaking of the writing, it’s really good, I could feel all his anger and frustration in the conversation with his mother as if they were my own. And still... I can sense that she’s not a bad person; she has a reason behind everything that happened.

 

[Dario]

So good that I bought a year of "Art Lover" and loved playing the latest update to the demo! Please consider donating to Ketzal!

 

[Vulky]

Sorry I don't understand one thing, is this the "general audience project" that was made to gain support on the various platforms? I see lolis in the pics and tag, so it does not fit that premise. Is this a third project or plans have changed? It should be better to play safe on those platforms and avoid any too young looking character.