discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py EGBE [Prologue v0.3.3b] [Ketzal]

[Phenus2]

That's what I've read here and there. I'm not sure if it's accurate, but I'm not looking for truth. It's an imaginary country... For the sake of the story, that's how it works in the country of the story

That's perfect!!! I'm really, really hoping for the success of this project. Can't wait for updates! Thank you again!!

 

[AltasEli]

See you in like 1 Year after a lot of added Content.
Good Luck anyways

 

[Phenus2]

I hope this project goes far, please move pass the demo phase, a lot of games have died in demo

Me too!!! I'm really hoping this project to thrive! I abolutely loved the writing style! The relationtish with the mother was super well written! One of the few games that got me hooked more on the history instead of just the lewds!
This part where he says: "All those years of hating her were just so i would feel something for her. As if hate had desperately replaced love in an attempt not to just forget her." seems to come straight from the heart! Almost got chills!
I really liked SSP, but this? I got i feeling that this can become something even better! Thank you so much Ketzal!! Wish you all the success in the world

 

[daddy-s]

Not sure if I prefer Alice with black hair or red, close call. Seems SSP Alice wins in the breast department, I prefer buds than flat chest girls but maybe they are hiding didn't have chance to fap er.. play yet. Often girls in early development have one breast bigger than the other not sure I have ever seen it translated into a vn.

 

[Dummy256]

Amazing. Ketzal never disappoints, so looking forward to this one!

 

[JadedSkywalker]

Enjoyable Demo. Not quite Such a Sharp Pain great. But its worthy of keeping an eye on.

 

[hawaii]

Only TOP GAMES get 5

 

[kbakon]

Enjoyable Demo. Not quite Such a Sharp Pain great. But its worthy of keeping an eye on.

More hebes = more greatness!

 

[BadJM]

Didn't see the wow-effect. MC is like a whiny bitch, constantly "thinking" and complaining about everything. The models are unrealistic and repulsive (the girl on the poster doesn't look like a child, but like a 25-year-old fat slut). The facial features of many models resemble unsuccessful plastic surgery (poor quality of rejuvenation), unnatural and repulsive (an adult face with an unnaturally small body), even ugly from some angles. A huge step back compared to SSP, but since this is just a demo, everything can still change for the better.

Perhaps the reason is that the child models were made by reworking adult models, and not created from scratch. That is why the repulsive effect of "Williams Syndrome" or "dwarfism" appeared.

Wtf are you even talking about? I would get my eyes checked If I were you.

 

[Ladiesonly]

I love the premise and am excited to see where this goes and its ketzal so i doubt i have to ask, but hoping for plenty of f/f content!

 

[chester1530]

Didn't see the wow-effect. MC is like a whiny bitch, constantly "thinking" and complaining about everything. The models are unrealistic and repulsive (the girl on the poster doesn't look like a child, but like a 25-year-old fat slut). The facial features of many models resemble unsuccessful plastic surgery (poor quality of rejuvenation), unnatural and repulsive (an adult face with an unnaturally small body), even ugly from some angles. A huge step back compared to SSP, but since this is just a demo, everything can still change for the better.

Perhaps the reason is that the child models were made by reworking adult models, and not created from scratch. That is why the repulsive effect of "Williams Syndrome" or "dwarfism" appeared.

Well, in a free country, any opinion is valid, as long as it's expressed politely and without insults or offenses... but since this isn't a country, it's a website, we'll cut off your virtual b.... and rub salt in the wound, then fry your tes... and make you eat them, of course, with a good French wine, whichever you prefer.

Warm regards.

 

[Aszorath]

for only being 1/3 of the prolong I'm very impress how well this story is made. its not to overly complicated but still has a very well story that draws you in. its blend story rich with out becoming a slow burn, and get to the good stuff sooner rather then later. but the story if very well written and actually fallow a good tempo, wish all story could be this good.

10 out of 10

 

[fthegovernment]

Well, in a free country, any opinion is valid, as long as it's expressed politely and without insults or offenses... but since this isn't a country, it's a website, we'll cut off your virtual b.... and rub salt in the wound, then fry your tes... and make you eat them, of course, with a good French wine, whichever you prefer.

Warm regards.

this isnt exactly correct.

as soon as "you the user" connects to the URL the website is now in your country, no matter where in the world or in space the site is hosted.

anything you connect to and bring into your country is your responsibility.

the internet may have freedoms but your government probably does not.

 

[HeyMisterMister]

Considering your last game, you have no idea how idea how eager I've been for this!

 

[CocoLoco02]

From the premise, it looks interesting, but I'll wait for the next update when it's not a demo.
Thanks, Ketzal.

 

[Isoya]

From what I've seen this game is going to just as good if not better than ssp

 

[angband]

Wow, this game is amazing!!! The story is interesting the theme, i can see it'll be a great game! Thank you!
Just one thing got me wondering... in america, if my father dies with medical debt, i'm the one resposible for it??? Must be terrible not having a public health service

It depends on circumstances. If the father was incompetent to make his own decisions, the son may have been signing paperwork in his place, or if the hospital knew that his treatment was going to be expensive (and really, what isn't expensive when comes to hospitals?) and that there was a fairly good possibility that the father wouldn't be able to pay his own bills, they may have insisted on a cosigner to pay the bills. Now, the story says that your dad got hospitalized when you were 16, so they couldn't have gotten you to cosign until you were 18, and even then it seems unlikely that they would accept someone with so few resources as their sole backup plan, but who knows, maybe that was their only option rather than just terminating care.

I guess the best explanation is that your dad went in for treatment, things started going worse than expected (maybe he required surgery and developed an infection or something like that), then after a couple of years when you were 18 (maybe having been in and out of the hospital for complications), he unexpectedly deteriorated and you had to take responsibility for him.

So, depending on how important it is for the plot to make sense, it is possible to make this mostly plausible. Then again, we accept much more outlandish things in order to justify the plot of an AVN.

If you choose to answer the door first instead of looking at the message (as urgency goes, someone right there takes precedence over a message, for me at least) you never get to see the message and have no idea about any/most of the backstory with MC's mother before getting to the office. (There may be a thought or two about it while waking up now that I think back, but most of the details are only if you read the message.)

Currently, this isn't even mentioned with the walkthrough turned on. It should probably be added to the walkthrough since like you say, most people's natural reaction is to answer the door before checking the message.

 

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FINALLY! Some male point of view in female model photography! How come IRL nobody thought of it?

 

[Dummy256]

Call me crazy, but I think Patricia secretly aims to seduce Nate. Could be my imagination

 

[Just_Passing]

always nice to see new projects in this ... let's call it genre with good visuals
(and even nicer when its a proven DEV, so less chance of getting lost in the churn)
hope this doesn't derail SSP timetables too much, and eager to see where both go