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2 Years of Service
Nice renders and the premise looks very interesting. Usually I wait until the game is a bit further along but I'll try this one since it seems to primarily be a passion project (no funding options yet) and the author seems like a cool dude. Well done so far and don't be discouraged by the occasional grumpy comment 
3 Years of Service
I dont really understand the general positivity.
The potential of this game is huge, I would agree. I dont really think that the story is that much telling, so I would not really rate it good or bad. I think in the actual game it would be more deep, e.g. it would be clarified why the older daughter is already doing stuff with her parents. At least this is something I would expect.
But I think from a technical side, this game is subpar. The renders do look decent, but nothing outstanding. But the "animations" are just bad, looping two pictures and calling that an "animation" is way too low for 2024. This would have been fine in the early day of AVNs, but not nowadays. Which is why I dont really think the Alpha is that great.
The potential of this game is huge, I would agree. I dont really think that the story is that much telling, so I would not really rate it good or bad. I think in the actual game it would be more deep, e.g. it would be clarified why the older daughter is already doing stuff with her parents. At least this is something I would expect.
But I think from a technical side, this game is subpar. The renders do look decent, but nothing outstanding. But the "animations" are just bad, looping two pictures and calling that an "animation" is way too low for 2024. This would have been fine in the early day of AVNs, but not nowadays. Which is why I dont really think the Alpha is that great.
3 Years of Service
You son of a bitch, You made it. Congrats.
Well good luck with your journey.
Well good luck with your journey.
3 Years of Service
I think this VN can truly ascend to... new heights if for time being it actually turned down the sex. I know, I know. We come here to see the sex.
However, in this case it's good to actually have a reason why the family is this way. What led to sex with the older daughter.
Why is the family so open about having sex together even though it's clearly wrong from side of the regular people.
Development or "corruption" of the wife to be as accepting as she is.
Current story and scene is really something that you usually get midway or around end of the VN.
It would just be good to either start over and gradually develop to this entire situation or have flashbacks that tell the story. Gradual corruption, more so when the wife is involved is just too good to pass up.
However, in this case it's good to actually have a reason why the family is this way. What led to sex with the older daughter.
Why is the family so open about having sex together even though it's clearly wrong from side of the regular people.
Development or "corruption" of the wife to be as accepting as she is.
Current story and scene is really something that you usually get midway or around end of the VN.
It would just be good to either start over and gradually develop to this entire situation or have flashbacks that tell the story. Gradual corruption, more so when the wife is involved is just too good to pass up.
3 Years of Service
I haven't played the game yet, but downloaded it and want to play. I actually think this is a very good comment. It's reasonable, not over-the-top, and apparently fair. Lastly, it's helpful to both the developer and us, the pleb lurkers, who want to know whether to download and play a game.
3 Years of Service
One thing I will say is that thr opacity of the text box detracts a bit from the game as it blocks off the bottom 1/3 of the screen. Otherwise good work.
3 Years of Service
Are you a judge on other people's critiques?
Rate mine.
I have the feeling the dev doesn't really have a future in mind for this game cause he kinda blew it all on the intro. Nothing in the future will be new or different, possibly just regurgitated content.
The content WAS good but you should've slowed it down, buddy.
And animations are a must. It's half finished product without them, for any game.
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Like in real life ?
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2 Years of Service
I like this -- interesting twist -- and fun
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I was asking about the abandon part ....Free love baby
I am still close to my family !
2 Years of Service
Since your comment was immediately after mine I'm going to assume it was at least in part related to it.
I've since played the game and I'd agree with your comments in general, it definitely has a few ways it could be improved. What I meant with "nice renders", "don't be discouraged" etc. was:
- It's their first project so I'd expect some rough spots. Constructive criticism is welcome and helpful but shouting "I don't like XY", "NTR WTF" and similar is not (this is what my closing statement was about).
- While this may be wishful thinking about the game's objective quality, this game's genre is a niche within a niche, so most people whose itch this scratches would like the project to continue - hence the encouragement.
- The author doesn't (yet) have any monetization so at the minimum is isn't some scam. Even if they had it, that's fine if communication toward backers is honest. While this has no bearing on the game quality, it's at least some "points" for the dev.
And again, though I agree with your comments about the game, I rather err on the side of kindness than hostility, especially towards someone that I don't know at all, and as far as I know has no history of maliciousness.
Hope the dev is taking notes, can separate objective comments from the shallow "emotional" ones, and won't see them as discouraging but as input to improve the game going forward.
3 Years of Service
Yes, My mother
But abandon part was in hopes that the dev finishes this, and we see the final version.
2 Years of Service
Alex looks very hot and horny, I'm looking forward to the continuation of this story! 
3 Years of Service
I think he was saying your phrasing sounded like you were abandoned
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