discussion Complete VN Ren'Py DAZ At Home Again [Final} [iOtero]

[D4WN5_KN1GH7]

Dev is Spanish and not very good at English, but despite that very opinionated at what the English translations should be, his proofreader doesn't seem to be great at it either, and he pissed me off badly enough I'm not gonna do any translating/proofreading for him either!

Just that suggestion to change bleach to soap would be enough to make him go ballistic about it being his story and to not try to change his story!

i was guessing more middle eastern lol. the way he just adds so many extra unneeded words, sounded very much like all my friends and their families from there. Its the same issue, both are more literal translations so it gets awkwardly wordy, but its far more wordy then most Latin people i know. is they guy like from actual Spain, because why else is it all robotic proper and drawn out. the dialect is more formal and "proper" so maybe why he cant understand that while all English words, not in an order or combination anyone would actually use?
no excuse for anyone to be biting your head off over though,

 

[D4WN5_KN1GH7]

Finally I'm getting around to playing this latest update. Are we really again going with the "I like you a lot, and I'm not hitting on you" stuff? Half of the dialogue in the game is "but we won't take it too far" followed by . . . [wait for it] . . . taking it too far (according to the characters). I really wish he'd be more open to constructive criticism. Generally I enjoy interesting stories and characters more than the lewd stuff even, and this game has a few interesting things about it — Tyra's potential, big events like the terrorist attack on Truval and the later kidnaping of the MC, for instance. But even with those sometimes it feels like a chore to chew through the dialogue. ? Also having a billion LIs makes it harder to connect with any of them very well. I haven't even tried THAMAR. I'm guessing it's more of the same flavor.

they all get jumbled in my mind and its been a couple months, and i do believe its not one of my all time favs, but i do know i enjoy Thamar, and want to say the English could still use work so prepare yourself to push it out of your mind if you do play it.

 

[SeveredRealms]

Hey everyone. Regarding the supposed NTR claim. I have not played this for the last few updates but unless something changed the old mans secretary was/is not a LI. She straight up says nothing will happen between her and the MC as she is in love with the old man. Now they do have a little teasing game they play and maybe some voyeurism but there to the best of my knowledge and what a few others that have played it have said there is no romantic involvement between them.
I will say this dev is a bit odd in his thinking on how to portray other people in the game and hell even killing off what I assumed would have been LI's. That alone is one reason I stopped playing this thing....
As far as this "NTR" goes I wont add the tag unless she does actually become a LI but she is not supposed to so its not NTR by definition. Yes I know I know you all have a different view on the subject and look at my signature.. I hate NTR myself so do not jump on me over this and as far as the game goes no more talk about it after this post.
SeveredRealms

 

[D4WN5_KN1GH7]

well I mean it changes the tone of the scene a lot. soup sucks, especially liquid, but thats cleaning your mouth out for saying something. bleach on the other hand changes it to threatening murder lol

 

[D4WN5_KN1GH7]

to be fair is she even supposed to be a love interest? most the ntr is girl on girl, which im not much of any ntr, but its more of an annoyance then a true problem, and strangely it seems canon that your ntr cucking the MC of his other game.

 

[D4WN5_KN1GH7]

Hey everyone. Regarding the supposed NTR claim. I have not played this for the last few updates but unless something changed the old mans secretary was/is not a LI. She straight up says nothing will happen between her and the MC as she is in love with the old man. Now they do have a little teasing game they play and maybe some voyeurism but there to the best of my knowledge and what a few others that have played it have said there is no romantic involvement between them.
I will say this dev is a bit odd in his thinking on how to portray other people in the game and hell even killing off what I assumed would have been LI's. That alone is one reason I stopped playing this thing....
As far as this "NTR" goes I wont add the tag unless she does actually become a LI but she is not supposed to so its not NTR by definition. Yes I know I know you all have a different view on the subject and look at my signature.. I hate NTR myself so do not jump on me over this and as far as the game goes no more talk about it after this post.
SeveredRealms

plenty of unsatisfying lez ntr, and whats the deal with cucking the mc of his other game? i mean thats some ntrception. an ntr inside of ntr. I dont think ill finish this if it goes into a deeper NTR. then again typing this and talking out loud as i am, im axtually kind of finding it funny. cant wait for the next update when mickey mouse is giving it to your mom, mc is going down on barney and Astro (jetsons) is giving it to your daughter whoyou addopted from My New Family

 

[TheElwoodBlues]

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[ghostch15]

i rather like the game so far but is seriously needs a better proof reader. Take the conversation between Anika and Elsa when the mc first goes to Truval Anika constantly refers to the mc as SHE, its clearly off putting and should have been corrected/ caught by the proof reader. I mean it his/her job right?

 

[Tiur]

i rather like the game so far but is seriously needs a better proof reader. Take the conversation between Anika and Elsa when the mc first goes to Truval Anika constantly refers to the mc as SHE, its clearly off putting and should have been corrected/ caught by the proof reader. I mean it his/her job right?

I would be stunned if iOtero used a proofreader at all. Given how he reacts to any criticism whatsoever, I can't imagine him being okay with someone who literally has the job of telling him where he did something wrong. (Reminder: iOtero does not consider users of this or any pirate forum to be his customers, and he does not ever interact on them.)

 

[ghostch15]

I would be stunned if iOtero used a proofreader at all. Given how he reacts to any criticism whatsoever, I can't imagine him being okay with someone who literally has the job of telling him where he did something wrong. (Reminder: iOtero does not consider users of this or any pirate forum to be his customers, and he does not ever interact on them.)

got ya, ty for the info. I try not to complain to much as i got the game for free, but it gets to be a bit much in this one lol

 

[Tiur]

got ya, ty for the info. I try not to complain to much as i got the game for free, but it gets to be a bit much in this one lol

I mean, a LOT of people complain about his games. I tend to give devs the benefit of the doubt, too, but iOtero in particular has a huge blind spot about his own flaws, and just writes off absolutely all feedback that is even slightly critical of him or his decisions. Personally, I don't think his games are even remotely worth it.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

I mean, a LOT of people complain about his games. I tend to give devs the benefit of the doubt, too, but iOtero in particular has a huge blind spot about his own flaws, and just writes off absolutely all feedback that is even slightly critical of him or his decisions. Personally, I don't think his games are even remotely worth it.

One of the most hilarious habits he has (that is incredibly immersion-breaking) is constantly pitching his other games. Hope will say something randomly like, "Oh, she's playing one of iOtero's games, THAMAR. I hear it's quite good and everyone's talking about it." Literally no one is talking about it, and nobody would even know another game existed unless you were already a patron. But thanks, I guess, for telling us what you think of yourself.

 

[Thcar]

Maybe it's just me but there is a lot of clicking the mouse with no rewards, just more and more clicking. The models are fine, I wish there were more varieties than just big booty with large tits, there are other fetishes out there than just that one. And then it's back to clicking. There is almost no sex to be had in this versus how many times you click the mouse, there's just so much fucking text. I am marking it as not worth playing on my end. Just a terrible time-waster this...

 

[Nekomusume Daisuki]

I stopped playing after the release I proofread for him and he went bitch-mode on me... Just not worth the headache after I offered to spend my free time to help him improve the games.

The concept was nice enough, but just not enticing enough to keep on keeping on going on...

 

[SeveredRealms]

I stopped playing after the release I proofread for him and he went bitch-mode on me... Just not worth the headache after I offered to spend my free time to help him improve the games.

The concept was nice enough, but just not enticing enough to keep on keeping on going on...

not to mention killing off potential Li's in that bombing shit..... i mean they where cute so wtf dumb ass grrrrr.

 

[-CookieMonster666-]

not to mention killing off potential Li's in that bombing shit..... i mean they where cute so wtf dumb ass grrrrr.

It's pretty difficult even to get a feel for how far along the game is, either. The plot is practically nonexistent outside of the LIs... which makes killing some of them off even more idiotic. The plot being primarily focused on the LIs would be OK — though I'd still prefer some kind of actual story overall, unrelated to LIs — but even with the girls you can't tell how far along things are. Sometimes you've got:

"No, we really can't. We haven't known each other very long."

(2 minutes later)​

"I want you to cum inside me."

But then also:

"I'm going to rub my penis on your vagina so you feel really good."

(2 minutes later)​

"I can't put it inside. That would be really inappropriate."

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[Nekomusume Daisuki]

not to mention killing off potential Li's in that bombing shit..... i mean they where cute so wtf dumb ass grrrrr.

See, I never got that far, and it seems I should be happy I quit before that. I'm not sure I even wanna know which ones he killed off... ***UGH***

 

[Qwert1201]

started playing this VN and 20 min later, I saw this.
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and I couldn't help myself, the render felt unfinished, like there's something missing. so I fixed it.

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so... what do you guys think?

By the way... the game looks like Shit.

 

[Oldmaster]

v 0-11 release

 

[SeveredRealms]

v 0-11 release

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