discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ SUCH A SHARP PAIN [V0.11.7R] [KETZAL]

[HardDaddyTimes]

What are the two animations? (please use spoilers) Not sure if something didn't work as planned.
The last scene with (first the dance show and then) the two daughters in bed was the best ever, art and story just right, just perfect, but at least one short animation at the very end (blond daughter riding) would have been spot on.

 

[User_150284]

What are the two animations? (please use spoilers) Not sure if something didn't work as planned.
The last scene with (first the dance show and then) the two daughters in bed was the best ever, art and story just right, just perfect, but at least one short animation at the very end (blond daughter riding) would have been spot on.

It was planned, but the schedule was too tight.. I've got the animations ready, and we're working on a version 1.0 with lots of corrections and I plan to add a few animations.

The two animations are Tiffany's BJ.

 

[ramvivat]

Hi!
I don't know, guys, call me blind, maybe you'll be right. But I suddenly saw that young Cassie is very, very similar to Haley. i mean scene MC+Cassie+angry Cas's dad, Cassie jumps from 2rd floor.
I have a suspicion that Cassie herself is inbred, and apparently not in the first generation of inbreeding. Because she has a problem with getting pregnant - that's the least. And she practically passed herself on almost unchanged to her daughter. Children are a photocopy of their parents - this is a sign of inbreeding. Well, or the prepotency of the parents.
and also - why does Cassie's mother, Leana, have an incurable disease? This makes the version of Cassie's prepotency (with fact of impregnating problem included) insignificant.
also why Cassie's twin-sis dies?

let's look a little differently, for example - Riley from "proud father" also experienced some difficulties with genitals, and she is reliably inbred (brother + sister) - which surprises me a lot, inbreeding in the early generations practically does not manifest itself, and here the brother and sister gave birth to a daughter with problems - maybe the brother and sister themselves are inbreds? well, most likely, yes, because the brother's wife, Kat, was "normal" and therefore the other daughters, namely Hayley and twins Rebecca+Ashley, were born completely healthy, and Zoe (from Michelle) is also healthy. only Riley has problems.

 

[WorkinStiff]

Did anyone manage to get to the sex scene with Eve at the party? Which way is it?

You kind of have to manage your saves, I have more saves in SSP than any other game. Each big decision I have a couple of saves and I name the path I take.
You'd probably be better of with a game like Sweet Memories, Libertine or It's Not A World For Alyssa as the path's in those game are pretty straight forward.

 

[marcomemmey]

Dang I stopped coming to the forum for about a month because my HDD was fucked, and now I have no saves and no idea where I left off, lol.

Anyway, good to see that Ketzal is back on the forum.

 

[chester1530]

Hi!
I don't know, guys, call me blind, maybe you'll be right. But I suddenly saw that young Cassie is very, very similar to Haley. i mean scene MC+Cassie+angry Cas's dad, Cassie jumps from 2rd floor.
I have a suspicion that Cassie herself is inbred, and apparently not in the first generation of inbreeding. Because she has a problem with getting pregnant - that's the least. And she practically passed herself on almost unchanged to her daughter. Children are a photocopy of their parents - this is a sign of inbreeding. Well, or the prepotency of the parents.
and also - why does Cassie's mother, Leana, have an incurable disease? This makes the version of Cassie's prepotency (with fact of impregnating problem included) insignificant.
also why Cassie's twin-sis dies?

let's look a little differently, for example - Riley from "proud father" also experienced some difficulties with genitals, and she is reliably inbred (brother + sister) - which surprises me a lot, inbreeding in the early generations practically does not manifest itself, and here the brother and sister gave birth to a daughter with problems - maybe the brother and sister themselves are inbreds? well, most likely, yes, because the brother's wife, Kat, was "normal" and therefore the other daughters, namely Hayley and twins Rebecca+Ashley, were born completely healthy, and Zoe (from Michelle) is also healthy. only Riley has problems.

Remember Caesar, you're just a man...

 

[Hermit76]

Hi!
I don't know, guys, call me blind, maybe you'll be right. But I suddenly saw that young Cassie is very, very similar to Haley. i mean scene MC+Cassie+angry Cas's dad, Cassie jumps from 2rd floor.
I have a suspicion that Cassie herself is inbred, and apparently not in the first generation of inbreeding. Because she has a problem with getting pregnant - that's the least. And she practically passed herself on almost unchanged to her daughter. Children are a photocopy of their parents - this is a sign of inbreeding. Well, or the prepotency of the parents.
and also - why does Cassie's mother, Leana, have an incurable disease? This makes the version of Cassie's prepotency (with fact of impregnating problem included) insignificant.
also why Cassie's twin-sis dies?

let's look a little differently, for example - Riley from "proud father" also experienced some difficulties with genitals, and she is reliably inbred (brother + sister) - which surprises me a lot, inbreeding in the early generations practically does not manifest itself, and here the brother and sister gave birth to a daughter with problems - maybe the brother and sister themselves are inbreds? well, most likely, yes, because the brother's wife, Kat, was "normal" and therefore the other daughters, namely Hayley and twins Rebecca+Ashley, were born completely healthy, and Zoe (from Michelle) is also healthy. only Riley has problems.

That's very, very speculative. Also a child of "normal" parents can look a lot (!) like one of its parents. And also "normal" parents can have a child with an illness. I know both of it for very, very sure...

 

[fthegovernment]

Clearly SSP isn't for you. No big deal. The game is quite complex, and I want it to be that way. That's the way I designed SSP, nothing is simple.
Anyway, thanks for your interest in my game.

i cracked all the files to get to the goods.

hope you don't mind

 

[DaddyDegen]

So are we supposed to know Alyssa's story? I don't know how MC found her initally or why Macy hid her. I don't know what happened after the motel stay or why she hates MC.

 

[Double07]

So are we supposed to know Alyssa's story? I don't know how MC found her initally or why Macy hid her. I don't know what happened after the motel stay or why she hates MC.

I don't think so. I don't believe she's ever been part of the story outside of that brief scene so we as players are in the dark.

 

[Beduin123]

Am I missing something obvious or this game doesn't show up on Games+ latest updates?

The same for me. Each time I find out about the new update by chance and have to dig the whole site to find this thread. All the other Game+ threads show in the Latest Updates without any problem. Even when I went searching for this thread the first search with the game name brought no results. Weird...

 

[KaySwitchPrime]

The same for me. Each time I find out about the new update by chance and have to dig the whole site to find this thread. All the other Game+ threads show in the Latest Updates without any problem. Even when I went searching for this thread the first search with the game name brought no results. Weird...

Not sure if this happened to you, but I had this thread and a few other games "Watched", but wasn't getting notified, so I had to unwatch and then Watch again, and now it seems to be working for alerts.

 

[WorkinStiff]

Anybody else feel the story has just completely slipped away from reality? The MC uses no charm or subtlety to make the girls want him. There are far too many BJ's and hand jobs that are not reciprocated by going down on or at least fingering the girls, which is vastly different from all of the sexual experiences I've had where there is mostly a mutual exchange of pleasure except in rare circumstances that my partner teased me or I teased her because someone was in a hurry but wanted to set up anticipation for later.

The sex scenes are not as satisfying as they were at the start of the game because the taboo is gone. Also artistically speaking, when the MC is getting Lena from behind and her feet are just dangling in the air it looks super unreal because that isn't how bodies or gravity or reality works, which is a theme that continues as in the last update where the youngest 'foxy' little loli, unrealistically gives the MC yet another unreciprocated BJ, right in front of her mother who just an hour before was disgusted by the MC's whole incestual harem.

In the next act he has sex with the two loli sisters but it seems kind of passionless as there is ZERO foreplay, no fingering, no licking (MC has NEVER played with any of their nipples), and it's unclear if the girls are getting pleasure or having orgasms while the MC of course surely does.

I like that this game has many different paths which makes it a true choose your own adventure and most of the models are cute or attractive but I feel the writing, especially the dialog and mostly the whole reality breaking "every female is cool with an open relationship which includes sharing their kids with other people an their kids" thing, sure makes it hard to get into the space that these things could reasonably happen. Sure it makes for a lot of opportunities to see more loli + mommy + shota action which is awesome(!!), but it would be better IMHO to make smaller games with individual stories of corruption and perversion instead of more and more characters getting introduced into a world that just no longer seems at all possible or reasonable to exist.

All this is to say i think the dev has an over-bloated reality breaking game that does not focus on the desires, pleasures and corruption of the girls as much as as it does for the feckless MC who does not at all fear law enforcement or the judgment of other adults - which is totally unrealistic in this world.

Another Dev, Black Heart, has several games that he has crossed characters which is great if you like those characters but bad if you like stories because again it gets too convoluted to follow the plot which detracts from the anticipation of the sex as the motive for desire fades especially if EVERYTHING is permissible with EVERYONE and nothing is taboo.
I think these devs forgot that having an experience that is rare, socially unacceptable and should be kept secrete is part of what makes being a lolicon and playing lolicon game so hot.

 

[Malakai]

Anybody else feel the story has just completely slipped away from reality? The MC uses no charm or subtlety to make the girls want him. There are far too many BJ's and hand jobs that are not reciprocated by going down on or at least fingering the girls, which is vastly different from all of the sexual experiences I've had where there is mostly a mutual exchange of pleasure except in rare circumstances that my partner teased me or I teased her because someone was in a hurry but wanted to set up anticipation for later.

The sex scenes are not as satisfying as they were at the start of the game because the taboo is gone. Also artistically speaking, when the MC is getting Lena from behind and her feet are just dangling in the air it looks super unreal because that isn't how bodies or gravity or reality works, which is a theme that continues as in the last update where the youngest 'foxy' little loli, unrealistically gives the MC yet another unreciprocated BJ, right in front of her mother who just an hour before was disgusted by the MC's whole incestual harem.

In the next act he has sex with the two loli sisters but it seems kind of passionless as there is ZERO foreplay, no fingering, no licking (MC has NEVER played with any of their nipples), and it's unclear if the girls are getting pleasure or having orgasms while the MC of course surely does.

I like that this game has many different paths which makes it a true choose your own adventure and most of the models are cute or attractive but I feel the writing, especially the dialog and mostly the whole reality breaking "every female is cool with an open relationship which includes sharing their kids with other people an their kids" thing, sure makes it hard to get into the space that these things could reasonably happen. Sure it makes for a lot of opportunities to see more loli + mommy + shota action which is awesome(!!), but it would be better IMHO to make smaller games with individual stories of corruption and perversion instead of more and more characters getting introduced into a world that just no longer seems at all possible or reasonable to exist.

All this is to say i think the dev has an over-bloated reality breaking game that does not focus on the desires, pleasures and corruption of the girls as much as as it does for the feckless MC who does not at all fear law enforcement or the judgment of other adults - which is totally unrealistic in this world.

Another Dev, Black Heart, has several games that he has crossed characters which is great if you like those characters but bad if you like stories because again it gets too convoluted to follow the plot which detracts from the anticipation of the sex as the motive for desire fades especially if EVERYTHING is permissible with EVERYONE and nothing is taboo.
I think these devs forgot that having an experience that is rare, socially unacceptable and should be kept secrete is part of what makes being a lolicon and playing lolicon game so hot.

Its a game, a porn game at that with smols. I for my part dont want it to be "realistic".
Who would want to play a game were you have to read 10 hours of story were you groom a girl/boy first, then have another 30 minutes of "touching their private parts"
and another 3 hours of story, explaining the cops that "she/he wanted it!" , then get lynched by their parents/neighbors/relatives/inmates ?
Game is one of the best of its kind. Great render, characters and a good story, albeit sometimes confusing when you took a break from it.
And, most important, alot of action.
Why would anyone want their PORN games to be realistic ?

 

[chester1530]

The same for me. Each time I find out about the new update by chance and have to dig the whole site to find this thread. All the other Game+ threads show in the Latest Updates without any problem. Even when I went searching for this thread the first search with the game name brought no results. Weird...

Yes, updates appear, just look for them, greetings

 

[nulldev]

Its a game, a porn game at that with smols. I for my part dont want it to be "realistic".
Who would want to play a game were you have to read 10 hours of story were you groom a girl/boy first, then have another 30 minutes of "touching their private parts"
and another 3 hours of story, explaining the cops that "she/he wanted it!" , then get lynched by their parents/neighbors/relatives/inmates ?
Game is one of the best of its kind. Great render, characters and a good story, albeit sometimes confusing when you took a break from it.
And, most important, alot of action.
Why would anyone want their PORN games to be realistic ?

It's not that binary, just as sci fi stories can be hard sci fi like Martian where you try to explain everything with science and soft like Star Wars which is fantasy in space.
And in the middle there is for example Mass Effect, which tries to create a physical explanation for the biotics space wizards

 

[nightstalks]

is there a 100% save?

 

[Gerdi B]

is there a 100% save?

What do you mean with 100%?
Since the game has multiple paths and sub paths there is no "100% save".
If you mean all scenes unlocked, there is an gallery unlocker for that.

 

[nightstalks]

that works perfectly thank you

actually it causes an error. do i have to wait for another updated one?

 

[Gerdi B]

that works perfectly thank you

actually it causes an error. do i have to wait for another updated one?

Can you please post the error here so I can check what the problem is?