discussion VN KN Ren'Py DAZ Ravenous [Arc 2 Ep.18] [Lament Entertainment]

[Crazyksgirl]

I really enjoyed the intro. I am so happy to see some girl/girl scenes. Definitely will follow this

 

[makaab]

PROGRESS REPORT
Getting pretty close I think.
And still moving forward.

Scenes rendered- 8/11
Scene dialogue written-8/11
Scenes coded-8/11​

 

[makaab]

FYI, Added a Ko-Fi link for supporters that dont like fanbox

 

[makaab]

Progress Report
Scenes rendered 9/11
Scenes coded 9/11
Dialogue written 9.5/11
Beta release is expected in approx 2-3 weeks. hopefully closer to 2.

Ravenous 0.082 Alpha
Available now for all of my T2 and T3 supporters on Fanbox
When the next Beta becomes available, thisthis upcoming Beta will become public
Approx 1 month, give or take.

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[makaab]

Subscribestar approved.
Only took more than 3 months.
Updated links in the OP

 

[Zenithtb]

Much better grammar. Some weird capitalisation after commas, for some reason (example: "You know I like you, But that doesn't matter"), but overall, greatly improved. Good work, proofreader lol!




Also some strange possessive usage;


(Should be "Isabella's").

And it's also distracting when
sentences are
cut off when they
could fit on one page.

However yeah, much better overall. Well done!

 

[User_9]

Look like she needs a sausage between her eyes ?

 

[Zenithtb]

View attachment 5013
Look like she needs a sausage between her eyes ?

I offer my services.

 

[RpyGamers]

Here's my unofficial android port of Ravenous v0.05 Beta

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Spoiler: Features

Swipe Down - Hide Ui

Swipe Left - Rollback

Swipe Right - Start Skipping Text

Swipe Up - Save Your Game

Swipe Up and Down - Enable Auto Forward Mode

Opacity Slider and Text Size Scaling on Preferences

Spoiler: Saves location

All saves are located on Documents > Cebs

..::GRANT PERMISSION ON FIRST RUN::..

Can you update it to latest version ?
Im will be waiting .. thanks

 

[Padou]

It looks good after reading this thread. Is there any native MacOS version planned?

 

[makaab]

It looks good after reading this thread. Is there any native MacOS version planned?

hi.
unless requested by my fanbox or SS, the only mac or android versions will be for the main beta releases. meaning, not alphas or previews.

 

[2000GTSBlack]

Holy shit! Dude. That opening kicked me right in the feels. Amazingly done. Didn't even make it past it yet. Had to stop and immediately say something about it.

 

[makaab]

Holy shit! Dude. That opening kicked me right in the feels. Amazingly done. Didn't even make it past it yet. Had to stop and immediately say something about it.

Hi, thank you.
I'm trying to make a really cool story here.
I appreciate the feedback. I really hope you enjoy the rest of it.
Thanks again

 

[2000GTSBlack]

Ok, double holy shit. I really can't wait for more. This is one of the very few adult VNs I actually bothered reading. The story is well written so far and the cut scenes are super impressively done. Bravo.

Other than the belly button thing, which gave me a nice laugh. Lol

 

[Deleted member 7193]

I realize I'm probably being a wet blanket here but I am not loving the story thus far and feel like the balance between plot and lewd scenes is off. Artwork and renders are absolutely top tier and writing is good, don't get me wrong. But I got bored with the story after a while and ended up fast forwarding and eventually just exiting. Maybe I just need to wait until there's more content to give it a fairer assessment or maybe I just am over Twin Peaks style dark mystery games. I read the dev's note on why he made the MC act like a bone-head in the Mom-Sis scene and I can (kindof) appreciate the realism they're trying to create, but tbh that scene was what made me exit. I am just not a fan of lewd scenes ending prematurely b/c the character I'm supposedly playing can't handle it. Serious buzzkill, sorry.

To me, it's not a dichotomy of porn-game-with-story vs. story-game-with-porn. In the best games, the story and the porn are interwoven. The story itself is arousing and the porn scenes impact the story and there is a balance of both. Hopefully, going forward this game finds that balance better.

 

[hansdampf788]

The MC is trying to come to terms with the things that his mother and sister are already used to.

I'm not into lesbians so reading that the mom and sis are already fucking each other ruins them as LIs for me so I don't think I will even try the game.

 

[siblue]

hmm, i filled all of that out before. idk what happened. now I cant see where to add tags. fml

 

[randomguest3234]

so how "old" are the girls? 18 right?

 

[makaab]

so how "old" are the girls? 18 right?

They are 18 at default.
You input the ages yourself when prompted.
If you just hit enter, they stay 18.

 

[markl17]

They are 18 at default.
You input the ages yourself when prompted.
If you just hit enter, they stay 18.

If you enter any number below 18, someone will be banging on your front door ?
??