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3 Years of Service
I loved it! I'll be watching this one with great interest. It's because I think it could be so great that I want to be a little bit nit-picky here. I definitely get the impression that this scene was a demo and will probably not be re-used in the full game, but I still want to point out a couple things. It's very likely the dev noticed them and will polish things up in due course, but it can't hurt.
First, the clipping. You don't need to avoid it completely, but I would strongly suggest ironing it out when the subject is the focus of the render. For instance, this is the first good look we have at Ava.
And again when Dad takes off his robe. It's front and center.
Second, when Dad and Emily turn to look at each other. It's like their necks are breaking. In my opinion, it's unnatural to show such limited motion. Either move them in more places, or better yet reframe the shot. Perhaps flip it around and have us view them from behind, with Lily center frame between the two of them.
This is a lot more noticeable in-game where you would see the two overlayed.
Third - and this is really subtle but I feel it's important - it's this line from Lily:
Emily had just suggested they would play a game and this is Lily's response. A child doesn't speak to their parent like this (especially step-parent). You tell a peer that their idea is good or bad, it's something that implies similar social standing. Kid's tend to have simpler, more self-centered responses. Try "I like that idea Mom" or maybe if it was Alex responding, "What kind of game?".
Again, I couldn't be more excited for this one!
First, the clipping. You don't need to avoid it completely, but I would strongly suggest ironing it out when the subject is the focus of the render. For instance, this is the first good look we have at Ava.
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And again when Dad takes off his robe. It's front and center.
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Second, when Dad and Emily turn to look at each other. It's like their necks are breaking. In my opinion, it's unnatural to show such limited motion. Either move them in more places, or better yet reframe the shot. Perhaps flip it around and have us view them from behind, with Lily center frame between the two of them.
This is a lot more noticeable in-game where you would see the two overlayed.
Third - and this is really subtle but I feel it's important - it's this line from Lily:
Emily had just suggested they would play a game and this is Lily's response. A child doesn't speak to their parent like this (especially step-parent). You tell a peer that their idea is good or bad, it's something that implies similar social standing. Kid's tend to have simpler, more self-centered responses. Try "I like that idea Mom" or maybe if it was Alex responding, "What kind of game?".
Again, I couldn't be more excited for this one!
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Love it so far. So glad someone let the MC Have a son that can enjoy the family as well. Shota/loli is such an underserved kink. My one request is to not force gay content, I can enjoy watching my kids without having to do it with ALL of them. Also, a full futa option instead of trans would be outstanding (I love a real hermaphrodite, but not a boy pretending to be a girl).
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already delivers a lot of content in this alpha
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Unavoidable Sharing or Swinging isn't really my thing, so I'll be taking a pass.
But, I remember following you first showing early screenshots of the art and really appreciated the quality. So wanted to drop by and wish you and your future work well!
Maybe in the future there will be another game that avoids those, but even if not, I wish you the absolute best going forward! Good luck!
But, I remember following you first showing early screenshots of the art and really appreciated the quality. So wanted to drop by and wish you and your future work well!
Maybe in the future there will be another game that avoids those, but even if not, I wish you the absolute best going forward! Good luck!
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I dunno man. starting the game with the whole family fucking right away like deranged pornstars kinda makes the whole story complete already, for me. the audience has already been given the thing they're supposed to be coming back for.
I don't see where this story could continue, because it already has passed a reward/climax point in terms of storytelling. feels a bit pointless.
the only direction I can see, is just mindless fucking with the plot serving only as a filler between sex scenes.
I see games like this all the time, where the story immediately goes to the the thing most people expect the story to slowly progress to.
such games rarely live past a few updates. often they're abandoned after the first version.
I don't think this game will live very long. but who knows.
other than that, it was nice.
I don't see where this story could continue, because it already has passed a reward/climax point in terms of storytelling. feels a bit pointless.
the only direction I can see, is just mindless fucking with the plot serving only as a filler between sex scenes.
I see games like this all the time, where the story immediately goes to the the thing most people expect the story to slowly progress to.
such games rarely live past a few updates. often they're abandoned after the first version.
I don't think this game will live very long. but who knows.
other than that, it was nice.
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Please tell me that loli and shota can have sex with each other in the game.
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So... heartfelt thanks... I didn't even know I would like Shota (NTR I think right? I could be wrong.) However, I like this, ALOT. I really hope this storyline stays pure and you are not whacked at by the purists... Please keep it up, I love your mind.
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The son has sex with the oldest daughter, who is not quite loli anymore.
I'm sure that sex between the son and the youngest daughter will be added in the near future. I mean, why not, at this point?
This I somehow doubt, because I don't think that the sharing will remain within the core family:
https://lewdcorner.com/threads/blended-family-v0-01-alpha-glyph.11782/post-511170
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we need you to continue
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Why do people complain about getting what we want right off the bat? So many promising games are abandoned before anything happens with who we actually care about. I don't play these games for fun, I play them because this is a genre you can't watch porn about. Anti incest in porn has ruined all the porn channels, turning them insipid with fakecest, but ren'py games can be edited to say anything you want them to say. I just wish sandboxes could be phased out of use, as nothing kills enjoyment faster... besides a condom.
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I don’t necessarily agree. Ideally we’d get buildup first and then the developer would actually deliver the sex scenes we’d been wanting. But I do get your perspective, and you’re not wrong that I’d rather have the sex scenes early than not at all.
Maybe the solution is to start in the middle, then work backwards and forwards in alternating cycles of development. You’d have to start a new game every time backward working content came out, but that might be worth it.
Also I disagree a bit about sandbox. It’s not nearly as bad as condoms.
Still o had to “like” your comment because it was so heartfelt - disagreement or not.
2 Years of Service
I found the game interesting...
How about a flashback to how they started with Ava in an upcoming update?
How about a flashback to how they started with Ava in an upcoming update?
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An exciting game, I hope it will be full of passion.
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Thanks all for the feedback and the support, it seems like many have misunderstood this release, so will try and explain again.
This release was only meant to test everything out, it's not the start of the game it's suppose somewhere in the middle of the game. But needed to test everything out, i wanted to do it on one of the more demanding scenes in order to make sure i could.
I taking some much needed vacation but i am begun building up the proper game, and will come with a proper start of the game and begin building from there.
This release was only meant to test everything out, it's not the start of the game it's suppose somewhere in the middle of the game. But needed to test everything out, i wanted to do it on one of the more demanding scenes in order to make sure i could.
I taking some much needed vacation but i am begun building up the proper game, and will come with a proper start of the game and begin building from there.
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Of course condoms are worse than sandboxes, that's why I included them as an exception. ;-) The problem with sandboxes, is that they make games almost unplayable if they're not done right. I'd much rather progress through a story, whether I make choices or not, than open door after door waiting for something to happen and trying to figure out what in the world I'm supposed to do.I don’t necessarily agree. Ideally we’d get buildup first and then the developer would actually deliver the sex scenes we’d been wanting. But I do get your perspective, and you’re not wrong that I’d rather have the sex scenes early than not at all.
Maybe the solution is to start in the middle, then work backwards and forwards in alternating cycles of development. You’d have to start a new game every time backward working content came out, but that might be worth it.
Also I disagree a bit about sandbox. It’s not nearly as bad as condoms.
Still o had to “like” your comment because it was so heartfelt - disagreement or not.
I also agree about having time to get to know the characters first so it means more when it happens. But so often the build up leads nowhere or the game goes off into an entirely new direction leaving behind those you were actually here to see.
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Is there any place where we can follow the development progress?
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Could someone do some compression?
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