discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Shrink! [v0.2] [Deviant Games]

[pregame]

I'm planning an AVN based on a true story (I'm married to my sis, so incest fans will prob like it, maybe). Since it's based on a true story most will probably find it boring after awhile if they come with typical AVN expectations so spliiting into 2 main branches: true story path (mostly kinetic once the choice is made) and loli/harem path (a few endings). With the latter the MC gets a job at the local k-8 school, but he's also fucking his sis, 4 daughters at home (and 2 sons if gay content is enabled), all their friends, as well as half the school and optionally getting some of the 6-8 graders and daughters pregnant.

Looking forward to this. Think about younger that 6 graders

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Looking forward to this. Think about younger that 6 graders

Oh yeah, Even One Summer In Loliwood didn't go below 7. Reason I mentioned 6-8 grades (12-14yo) is because it's MUCH harder to get them pregnant before puberty, though my sis started early and started to get noticable tits when she was 10. By the time she was 14 she was apparently fertile as hell, traded v cards and got the bonus of knocking her up while we were at it (oops).

 

[pregame]

I understand your reasoning. However the 7, 8, 9, and 10 yr old needs to get their pussy prepared for whats ahead. But it is your game and I think you will do a great job. Thanks for whatever

 

[Nicest_Incest]

I understand your reasoning. However the 7, 8, 9, and 10 yr old needs to get their pussy prepared for whats ahead. But it is your game and I think you will do a great job. Thanks for whatever

Yeah The MC can seduce/corrupt and let the 5yo's ride him if he wants (reader choice, but honestly what loli fan ever refuses any offered pussy and the resulting content in an AVN?), but the optional pregnancies will be 12yo+.

 

[dave480]

Yeah The MC can seduce/corrupt and let the 5yo's ride him if he wants (reader choice, but honestly what loli fan ever refuses any offered pussy and the resulting content in an AVN?), but the optional pregnancies will be 12yo+.

Sounds intererting. Have you other games we might sample??

 

[Nicest_Incest]

Sounds intererting. Have you other games we might sample??

Not yet. The one I'm planning will be my first.

 

[albundi]

hello

any idea for a next release date ?

 

[dave480]

hello

any idea for a next release date ?

Pretty soon!

I have a couple of changes to make. The biggest being spellcheck and grammer.

It will be released early on SubStar for those who support the game.

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[hawaii]

When comes the new Update ! Game is good

 

[dave480]

When comes the new Update ! Game is good

Pretty soon!

I have a couple of changes to make. The biggest being spellcheck and grammer.

It will be released early on SubStar for those who support the game.

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[Ren567]

I know devs hate this question but...
when comes the new update ?

 

[dave480]

I know devs hate this question but...
when comes the new update ?

Doesnt bother me. Its gonna be maybe Monday for those who support me on SubStar

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[Nicest_Incest]

Is it complete?, or is going to be continued?

This isn't based on some short comic with a thin or non-existent story and just sex scenes to jack off to that's over in 30 mins. It's one of those AVN's that can run for multiple years (usually new episode every 2-3 months) if the dev feels like it.

 

[Nicest_Incest]

So... How is Kat pregnant when the only load's she has gotten are on her face?

Though rare you don't need to creampie them to get them pregnant (at least not in the real world). Precum can get the job done sometimes, especially if he can go deep and tickle her donut. Plus if he pulls out late (the first few drops of the load is inside her) that makes it even more likely.

 

[dave480]

The latest update is avaliable at

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[Tico7533on]

The latest update is avaliable at

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Well, apparently, there was a typo by the poster or the dev, the would-be V. 0.2, is actually V. 0.6.

 

[seronis]

The Good:

Good premise. Good character diversity. Good amount of content for a v0.2. Good release rate if the dates listed in the OP are accurate

The Bad:

The script is brain damagingly painful to read with all the spelling and grammar errors. PLEASE get an editor and learn the difference between your and you're, and difference between there and they're, so that it doesnt look like the game was written by an 8 year old

Kat model might have **proportions** that some teens have, but she's scaled to full adult. Its not even remotely possible for that to be a 17yo, much less the options given. But if you dont want to downscale the model just set her age as 17. Thats still technically taboo but at least it halfway matches the model and doesnt ruin a readers suspension of disbelief.

and EVERYTHING is wrong with her being pregnant.

1. he never came in her, he wasnt even inside her long enough for precum to be a thing
2. a home preg test cant detect pregnancy that fast
3. a HOSPITAL blood test cant detect pregnancy that fast
4. your body cant even consider itself pregnant that fast because there hasnt been enough time for the egg to fully attach to the uterus. this alone takes 6-12 days and is the minimum time before even a hospital test detects pregnancy

 

[Nicest_Incest]

The Good:

Good premise. Good character diversity. Good amount of content for a v0.2. Good release rate if the dates listed in the OP are accurate

The Bad:

The script is brain damagingly painful to read with all the spelling and grammar errors. PLEASE get an editor and learn the difference between your and you're, and difference between there and they're, so that it doesnt look like the game was written by an 8 year old

Kat model might have **proportions** that some teens have, but she's scaled to full adult. Its not even remotely possible for that to be a 17yo, much less the options given. But if you dont want to downscale the model just set her age as 17. Thats still technically taboo but at least it halfway matches the model and doesnt ruin a readers suspension of disbelief.

and EVERYTHING is wrong with her being pregnant.

1. he never came in her, he wasnt even inside her long enough for precum to be a thing
2. a home preg test cant detect pregnancy that fast
3. a HOSPITAL blood test cant detect pregnancy that fast
4. your body cant even consider itself pregnant that fast because there hasnt been enough time for the egg to fully attach to the uterus. this alone takes 6-12 days and is the minimum time before even a hospital test detects pregnancy

Well, at least it's still better than 23 Sisters, that totally went off the rails with 2-day pregnancies (creampie to baby in 2 days). At least this list of detail faults is easy enough to ignore (at least for me). I've played enough foreign (English not first language) AVNs that now I don't even notice spelling errors, esp when reading 3 lines a second. As long as it's not so bad that I'm slowing down to try to figure out what was meant with a bad translation (ie Russian or Chinese original) to the point I give up and just skip dialog to find the good animations to fap to good enough for me. Your/you're = meh, I can still get the intended meaning, if I even stop to notice it. It's the wrong pronouns that stick out more (ie referring to a girl as a him and a guy as a she when they are not even futa/trans).

 

[B00G3YM4N]

whens the next update for this game for public

 

[Nicest_Incest]

whens the next update for this game for public

That's what what I like to know. Last heard from with v .2.5 on Oct 25 and a new char render Nov. 22. There was the usual thanksgiving/xmas/new years chaos so maybe that slowed him down a month, so not gonna cancel my $5 sub just yet, but prob will in Feb. if no news by then.