discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Burned [V.03] [Deaufosse]

[Deaufosse]

Why the Dark path choice at the last shower scene then ? i was promised rape/Dark MC along with Necro & others stuff...

The game itself is good, well writed (even if hard to follow time to time), good graphic.
But Choice don't matter & are way too scarce... too much forced kink/scenes
The MC is too much inconsistant, i understand we can get some blue balls at the start of a game but having a MC who back-off like a bipolar is just a game's killer, even more when you are allowed to make a CRITICAL choice who can completly change the gameplay & the MC mentality...

I havily dislike Dev who add useless choices or just add empty choices just to add a button where the player can clic from time to time
I also dislike Dev who add the choice to not play/look Gay/Futa scene but force you to see the scene anyway right after the choice

If you're referring to V.2 shower scene... It was a joke. There was a whole bit about "lewdness points" and the fucked up option being a Fanbox exclusive. On top of that, you're not actually in control of the MC, or the story for that matter. All of the choices are varying misdirects or troll moves.

Let it go, it's a lost battle.

1st: there is no "Multi-protagonists" Tag (neither as Female protagonist)

2nd: Hard anti-NTR will retorts that the MC is defined at the start of the game not in V.0.3 or in V.0.9, or have you rewrited the game's intro bewteen the V.0.1 & the V.0.3 ? Sasha was never pointed as MC or 2ndary protagonist, in the head of most Sasha is just a LI.

Author's intent, bro. Now, Kristy is the Main Character and it's still not NTR.

A side note, the 1st Gun holded by the Future Robotic MC isn't a shotgun, it's a Winchester rifle.

In Terminator 2 Arnold uses a Winchester Model 1887 lever-action shotgun. That was as close as I could get in terms of 3d gun models.

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[Deaufosse]

Not a single character here shows any interest in exclusive sexual relationships. Alex' demand that Sasha doesn't fuck Christy is because he correctly believes Sasha to prey on young girls, and incorrectly believes that Christy wouldn't be the one to come onto Sasha. There is no meaningful way in which Sasha and Christy having sex constitutes a betrayal of Alex.

Thank you. I'm building a polyamorous incest harem. Kristy x Mia . MC X Kristy. MC X Sasha. Sasha x Mia. All good. Sasha x Kristy and people are shitting a brick. I think my mistake was trying to pull a South Park and do meta satire, joking that it was NTR: New Timeline Revision.

 

[Toma666]

If you're referring to V.2 shower scene... It was a joke. There was a whole bit about "lewdness points" and the fucked up option being a Fanbox exclusive. On top of that, you're not actually in control of the MC, or the story for that matter. All of the choices are varying misdirects or troll moves.

So delete the choice & call it a Kinetic Novel...
Nothing taste badly than this short of move imo...

Author's intent, bro. Now, Kristy is the Main Character and it's still not NTR.

I Dont Care, not me you need to convince, i'm all for girl on girl.

In Terminator 2 Arnold uses a Winchester Model 1887 lever-action shotgun. That was as close as I could get in terms of 3d gun models.

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& ? if it don't look like a duck, don't quack like a duck don't call it a duck... you don't have the img or the asset ? it's ok, but don't come writing wrong name on object, it's disrespectfull & missleading.

Wish you good luck for the future, but it will be without me.

 

[Deaufosse]

Wish you good luck for the future, but it will be without me.

Bawhahahahahahah. You’re weird and I love it.

 

[Simma90]

@Deaufosse
So...played the new update and I'm sadly a bit concerned. I played both Malignant and Burned and loved both (although I preferred Malignant), but with this update I think you went a bit too much over the top (atleast for me). All this time travelling and random celebrities appearing in the game made everything confusing in my eyes and therefore reduced the whole fun playing the game.

I still think you are one of the best developers out here and your games are definitely special, but I really hope you don't add more crazy stuff like you did here to Malignant and just keep it "simple" with great story and great paths, because it would be a shame if you went overly crazy there too.

 

[MicoJive]

Thank you. I'm building a polyamorous incest harem. Kristy x Mia . MC X Kristy. MC X Sasha. Sasha x Mia. All good. Sasha x Kristy and people are shitting a brick. I think my mistake was trying to pull a South Park and do meta satire, joking that it was NTR: New Timeline Revision.

The mistake imo was having a mostly serious first episode, an extremely serious and wholesome description without setting the expectations of where the story way actually going. Looking like it is tackling actually serious topics on bullying and sexual identity and instead just being a fuck em all "comedy" story.

It absolutely setup the story with a whole bunch of characters who were confused with who they were turning into as adults and shouldnt be that surprising that people find the latest episode particularly abrasive when it fully leaned into comedy and tossed the serious stuff aside. like you can write whatever story you want, obviously its your game but shouldnt be surprised when people go into it expecting something extremely different than what they were getting with the tags it had.

 

[Augustus]

The mistake imo was having a mostly serious first episode, an extremely serious and wholesome description without setting the expectations of where the story way actually going. Looking like it is tackling actually serious topics on bullying and sexual identity and instead just being a fuck em all "comedy" story.

It was clear about two minutes into the first episode that serious is definitely not be expected. Maybe genuine would be a better phrase? But then you haven't paid attention in the third episode at all if you've overlooked that it's still mainly about the characters exploring their identities. Most of the comedy actual supports that exploration, and so does the sex.

 

[Deaufosse]

The mistake imo was having a mostly serious first episode, an extremely serious and wholesome description without setting the expectations of where the story way actually going. Looking like it is tackling actually serious topics on bullying and sexual identity and instead just being a fuck em all "comedy" story.

It absolutely setup the story with a whole bunch of characters who were confused with who they were turning into as adults and shouldnt be that surprising that people find the latest episode particularly abrasive when it fully leaned into comedy and tossed the serious stuff aside. like you can write whatever story you want, obviously its your game but shouldnt be surprised when people go into it expecting something extremely different than what they were getting with the tags it had.

Stories change. Look at Parks and Req season one and compare it to season two, then season 6. Burned was my first visual novel. I barely knew what I was doing when I made V.1. Yeah it went off the rails, but I decided it was better off the rails. It’s fun. It’s weird and defies expectation. I can have Epstien make cupcakes. Dr Kaborkian dissect the ethics of beastiality. At the same time, I can still have a tender moment between brother and sister, and Sasha coming to terms with who she is.

More importantly, where else are you going hear Willem Dafoe lecture you about Futa porn?

 

[KnaveofClubs]

can someone please compress this 5.3 GB is a lot thanks in advance

Just curious, are compressed versions of games lower visual quality?

 

[KnaveofClubs]

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[KnaveofClubs]

More importantly, where else are you going hear Willem Dafoe lecture you about Futa porn?

I mean... that's a pretty solid point.

 

[johnman300]

Stories change. Look at Parks and Req season one and compare it to season two, then season 6. Burned was my first visual novel. I barely knew what I was doing when I made V.1. Yeah it went off the rails, but I decided it was better off the rails. It’s fun. It’s weird and defies expectation. I can have Epstien make cupcakes. Dr Kaborkian dissect the ethics of beastiality. At the same time, I can still have a tender moment between brother and sister, and Sasha coming to terms with who she is.

More importantly, where else are you going hear Willem Dafoe lecture you about Futa porn?

I love the changes. Totally bonkers, buddy. Like hilarious out of left field bonkers. I've played LOTS of games, tbf almost exclusively not smolls games so if there are any like this I missed them, and I've never seen anything quite like this. Anything that is truly original is basically unheard of. I was playing and trying to decide if it was a Fonz jumps the shark kinda deal. And I came down squarely on the side of this being borderline genius. Love it bud. Love it.

 

[helent]

I figured out how to play chapter 3 and I am very lost lol like who even is that hyper-realistic looking...dad? a summary and cultural reference guide is much appreciated!

 

[Deaufosse]

the game keeps crashing when trying to load a save?

Start a new game and choose a chapter.

 

[every10min]

I did not cum, but I did breathe hard out of my nose, and I appreciate that.

This is the review I aspire to write <3

 

[every10min]

Okay, that does it... Deaufosse, I'm changing my request for the future game... make it some brutal blindsiding NTR, just like some real lovely-dovey high school romance guy-gets-his-girl stuff and then a massive gut-punch. I'm talking like playing the faithful path of "My Wife's a Star" level gut punch.

And then for the second half of the game just rub their face in how deep the rabbit hole goes. =D

 

[User_749]

I figured out how to play chapter 3 and I am very lost lol like who even is that hyper-realistic looking...dad? a summary and cultural reference guide is much appreciated!

Well, they do call the dad by his first and last name repeatedly, so you can do a quick google search. Trust me. It won't require much digging, simply read the headlines and you'll know most of it. The best is when you finally realize who the mom is though. I almost spewed beer all over my computer when that reveal occurred. As for creating a list of pop-culture references, Deaufosse does a pretty good job of putting pretty much all the name drops in bold. I had to look up a few myself, and tbh, each was worth it. lol

 

[User_749]

I love the changes. Totally bonkers, buddy. Like hilarious out of left field bonkers. I've played LOTS of games, tbf almost exclusively not smolls games so if there are any like this I missed them, and I've never seen anything quite like this. Anything that is truly original is basically unheard of. I was playing and trying to decide if it was a Fonz jumps the shark kinda deal. And I came down squarely on the side of this being borderline genius. Love it bud. Love it.

I have played LOTS of AVN from various genres, and the closest thing I've found to the humor in Burned would be 23 Sisters. But that doesn't hold a candle (pun intended) to Burned. This game, particularly V3 is pure gold.

 

[Slashimunster]

It very much is Pure Gold! I want the next chapter so so so bad!

 

[DeadDelta]

This one felt a bit too weird. In the previous ones the weirdness presented either as meta stuff that wasn't really happening and served only the player (like the choice boxes) or as things that were questionable as to whether they happened or not. Now there is so...much weird. And tbh, it isn't that good of a weird. It detracts from the characters' relationships and it frankly detracts from the porn. I feel like at least one of the bizarre plot lines could have been dropped.