discussion VN Ren'Py DAZ My New Father [v0.1.4.8 Preliminary] [Diego]

[tsunku]

Dead on arrival. Dev needs to re-write from zero. I really don't get why people think they can just kick their text through Google translate or whatever and that's enough. Dev doesn't give a shit, neither do I.

NEXT.

one thing i will never understand tho is, spain joined nato in 1982 which means they had to start teaching english in their schools, so how is it they still fail at english?? i have ran across this with french people too, but for someone in france to not have had mandated english training in school they'd have had to left school back in 1949!

 

[Nastastic]

one thing i will never understand tho is, spain joined nato in 1982 which means they had to start teaching english in their schools, so how is it they still fail at english?? i have ran across this with french people too, but for someone in france to not have had mandated english training in school they'd have had to left school back in 1949!

NATO does NOT force the teaching of English to every student in NATO countries the way the Warsaw pact forced every student behind the Iron Curtain to learn Russian. I don't even know if NATO has any effect on the teaching of English whatsoever. At most, English is an AVAILABLE language in all schools and is definitely encouraged, but NOT a hard and fast requirement. Some students will avoid taking English because they dislike the U.S./U.K., or simply because they want to be different from the majority of their peers. Penetration of English fluency is probably not more than 80-90% average in any NATO country. And most Europeans learn TWO foreign languages which are started a few years apart, and English is almost as likely to be an individual's third language as their second. And the less schooling they have, the worse their fluency in those languages are likely to be.

 

[MD27]

one thing i will never understand tho is, spain joined nato in 1982 which means they had to start teaching english in their schools, so how is it they still fail at english?? i have ran across this with french people too, but for someone in france to not have had mandated english training in school they'd have had to left school back in 1949!

The heck? That's like expecting people that take Spanish or whatever on HS to be able to write stories at an adult caliber, we know most just know the "hola" and "donde está el baño". Also do we know where the dev's from?, Spanish is even more spread out than English with the whole latam.

Since it was unreadable otherwise I played in Spanish and it's not like it becomes high level poetry so don't worry hahaha some dialogues are still weird or too simplistic . Either way good luck to the dev

 

[shajamjam]

Garbage

 

[tsunku]

NATO does NOT force the teaching of English to every student in NATO countries the way the Warsaw pact forced every student behind the Iron Curtain to learn Russian. I don't even know if NATO has any effect on the teaching of English whatsoever. At most, English is an AVAILABLE language in all schools and is definitely encouraged, but NOT a hard and fast requirement. Some students will avoid taking English because they dislike the U.S./U.K., or simply because they want to be different from the majority of their peers. Penetration of English fluency is probably not more than 80-90% average in any NATO country. And most Europeans learn TWO foreign languages which are started a few years apart, and English is almost as likely to be an individual's third language as their second. And the less schooling they have, the worse their fluency in those languages are likely to be.

weird, it did used to be a requirement for membership when the usa designed it all but i guess since then it was removed. not everything is etched in stone. hah even those that are etched in stone with the right force, the stone breaks...

 

[eeriedaddy]

Literally not even enough content to call this a beta. This is more like an early alpha that probably shouldn't have been released to the public if I'm being honest. I genuinely wonder what the creator was trying to accomplish by releasing this... teaser? If it could even be called that. I can't imagine anyone is going to be subscribing after playing this with its 30 seconds worth of content. It's basically a kinetic novel given that all of the choices either lead to a game over or are required to continue (there is not even enough content to have choices matter at this point). The dialogue is terrible (although another user provided a patch that improved it considerably). The only thing this game has going for it is that the girl is kind of cute.

 

[Moo]

Okay, I'm still not sure what this image is supposed to be but I'm fairly certain that this is the rear of the interior model for the warehouse scene. It has no external model and it's missing textures, and possibly a floor, as it's not meant to be seen but the dev rendered it out as a whole image? Why?

 

[cenros]

@Diego

Perhaps this launch is premature; the game gives the impression that something is lacking in its plot.

To address the issue of "Game Over," the game should incorporate alternate endings when a wrong option is chosen, providing justification for the conclusion.

If English is not your first language, don't worry. Feel free to use Chat GPT for a decent translation.

Many people here seem to be seeking adult content, so it is quite risky to exclude it from the "pilot episode."

The characters should engage more with the audience and demonstrate further development to deepen the players' immersion and nurture their desire for more of the story.

This approach will help attract and engage players, garnering support for your project.

Hope to see the 2.0 soon including the 1.0 update.

Good luck!

 

[SharK_IN_A_Chair]

Sadly a ive noticed that a lot of loli games are not very good and then they take a very very long time between updates

 

[lolsis]

why does this game have sex tags when there is literally one image of a kiss this game is garbage and missleading

 

[yogsothoth82]

I would be interested to know how easy it's to avoid netorare in game.

 

[WhiteVanDaycare]

Just to be clear, most of these tags are future tags. People get upset if a dev adds a tag and it wasn't there from the beginning, so we allow them to state their planned tags. Currently this only has loli, male protag, and 3dcg. Keep in mind this is the first release of a new dev, be supportive.

 

[WhiteVanDaycare]

one thing i will never understand tho is, spain joined nato in 1982 which means they had to start teaching english in their schools, so how is it they still fail at english?? i have ran across this with french people too, but for someone in france to not have had mandated english training in school they'd have had to left school back in 1949!

How in the fuck do you know they joined NATO in 1982, but not know that NATO doesn't have any language requirements (

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Sadly a ive noticed that a lot of loli games are not very good and then they take a very very long time between updates

Generally people are overly critical and discourage the dev, it is not just loli games that suffer from this.

 

[WhiteVanDaycare]

Rofl.
The "english".

It looks interesting though.

You mean their "eengrish"?

 

[incarnis]

This is one of the better early releases I've seen, just hope the dev sees this one through, there is potential here.

 

[Deleted member 28264]

Google Translation game, one handjob "animation" of a few images repeated in a succession, white guy with a black dick... I suggest the creator gives it up - either do it right with proper animations and proper English, or don't start all. This game is a waste of time.
Well, no game can beat the record for "the worst game of all times" which is "Summer Camp" but this one definitely falls into the top 3 of worst games.

 

[Freshenstein]

Well, no game can beat the record for "the worst game of all times" which is "Summer Camp" but this one definitely falls into the top 3 of worst games.

What's wrong with Summer Camp? I like that game. Assuming I'm thinking of the same game as you of course.

 

[Deleted member 28264]

What's wrong with Summer Camp? I like that game. Assuming I'm thinking of the same game as you of course.

Haven't you seen the animations? And the fact that the MC's dick looks like a squashed ice cream candy?

 

[Freshenstein]

Haven't you seen the animations? And the fact that the MC's dick looks like a squashed ice cream candy?

I'll be honest, I'm not looking at the dick in this game. There's far better things to look at.

 

[Deleted member 28264]

There's far better things to look at.

I'm bisexual, so I look at everything.