discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ SUCH A SHARP PAIN [V0.11.7R] [KETZAL]

[Myuhinny]

Let me know if I missed any.

A lot of your images are broken.

 

[sincinbearcity]

Updating this to help people:
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10 (sometimes its not clickable, I dont know exactly but depends on what happens with Macy, apparently)
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Let me know if I missed any.
Edit: uhh are the images loading for you guys? they appear broken for me even though I did it correctly.

I can't see all of them. Only some load for me. However, in my playthrough 11 and 12

Spoiler: spoiler

assuming that those refer to the Eve flashbacks

seem to be exclusive to

Spoiler: Macy choice

Macy dead path (aka no motorcycle helmet). In other words, if I got hint 10, 11 and 12 aren't available.

Is that the case for you too?

 

[Nastastic]

Let me know if I missed any.
Edit: uhh are the images loading for you guys? they appear broken for me even though I did it correctly.

When I post multiple images they never all display the first time. Ever. I always have to go back and re-attach them. Every. Single. Time. It generally only takes once though. So post, see the pics didn't all successfully attach, edit, delete, re-attach. It's kind of a pain but it works.

 

[marcomemmey]

A lot of your images are broken.

I was able to add only the thumbnails, dunno why. If I click the full sized versions, it says "the content cannot be loaded". Some bug on the site I guess.

I can't see all of them. Only some load for me. However, in my playthrough 11 and 12

Spoiler: spoiler

assuming that those refer to the Eve flashbacks

seem to be exclusive to

Spoiler: Macy choice

Macy dead path (aka no motorcycle helmet). In other words, if I got hint 10, 11 and 12 aren't available.

Is that the case for you too?

No, I was able to screenshot all of those on the same playthrough. It's probably some other choice way before, then.

 

[sincinbearcity]

I was able to add only the thumbnails, dunno why. If I click the full sized versions, it says "the content cannot be loaded". Some bug on the site I guess.


No, I was able to screenshot all of those on the same playthrough. It's probably some other choice way before, then.

All right thanks. I went back from the start all over and figured out what the difference was.

Spoiler: spoiler

It seems if you choose Nicole and Eve scene (aka not kiss Nicole at first chance), you get my scenario where you have to choose between hint 10 or hint 11 and 12. However, if you choose to kiss Nicole at first chance, you're able to get hint 10, 11, and 12 in the same playthrough. Very interesting.

 

[Nastastic]

it's just a VN, I mean do you see how he pound hard the 10yo virgin pussy and she even had a strong orgasm ? Fantasy men.

nerve endings in the vagina do not germinate from a certain age. they've been there since birth.
I dare to think that you will build a logical connection between the nerve endings in the vagina and orgasm due to prolonged irritation of the nerve endings without much difficulty.

it is a pity, apparently the modern comprehensive school has finally degraded. I'm scared how we will continue to live ... moreover, I operate with information from the school curriculum. I have no medical education. all this was obtained in the lessons of human anatomy and physiology as part of the biology course ... if memory serves, it seems 8th grade of high school. ok, I speak according to Russian (and before that, according to Soviet) realities where children at the age of 15 go to 8th grade.

Well sex is more mental than physical. It doesn't take much stimulation to cum when what you think is your soulmate that is also the most attractive person in the world to you is also fucking or riding you (ie daddy in Leanna's case, which doubles the previous excitement if she happens to have an incest kink as welll, though that's unlikely at 10yo). And just a fyi even the opposite is true; when getting raped by someone they despise they can still have an orgasm whether they want one or not, which is also not age dependent. The only difference that will make is prepubescent boys will not produce sperm yet and girls won't get as wet (it's why it's called a dry orgasm). The internet is loaded with knowledge for those curious enough.

Footnote: from personal experience my sis didn't cum at first due to it being too painful (she didn't even finger herself up to that point when she rubbed one out and at 14 her hymen was still rather thick). In fact it didn't even last 5 minutes before she needed a timemout due to the pain (when not having the giant magic cock of an AVN MC is a good thing, but still only got half of 7" in). LOTR trilogy later tried again (when she was more horny than sore at that point, because I was edging her that whole 9h when were were cuddling) = success. 17 years later she still says that was the best orgasm she ever had.

Ramvivat and Nicest_Incest are right in that young girls are physiologically capable of orgasm (and that if handled correctly, Leana could have had a good time). Ramvivat has run upon an instance where official Soviet state atheism apparently allowed the communication of facts not readily available in U.S. schools, where the amount of sex education students receive is inversely proportionate to the strength of the Religious Right in that particular state and/or community...and can run the gamut from abstinence-only with an emphasis on sexual "purity" (the onus of which falls almost entirely on girls to avoid "tempting" boys, who, through little fault of their own, may become uncontrollably rapey with lust at the sight of a well-turned ankle) all the way up to frank discussions of sexuality and gender diversity (though to my knowledge, nowhere in America do they teach about pleasure, which I believe is on the curriculum in at least some European countries).

Spoiler: The problem

The issue with the scene as presented is that with no foreplay and using only whatever wetness a 10-year-old girl might have secreted during the act of sucking daddy's cock for maybe five minutes, the MC turns her over and with no problem at all minus a bit of initial pain on her part, shoves his "giant magic cock of an AVN MC" into her pussy balls-deep and starts hard-fucking her, ramming her as she were a veteran whore. The only game I've seen where this is even more extreme (especially given the rarity of sex in games with girls this young) is the game ExperimentAI (available on this site) in which the MC is fucking FIVE-YEAR-OLD girls in a similar manner (justified in that game by being characters in a simulation). He doesn't go down on her first, he doesn't insert a finger or two to check how tight she is and prepare the way (and before the bloodhounds get started, there was no blood in the scene anyway) and he certainly doesn't spend any time (up to even several sessions) slowly training her to take bigger and bigger insertions with a set of dildos, not to mention possibly putting her on Kegel exercises. And his entire 12 inches (30 cm) or so are never going to fit into a 10 year old girl (he would be lucky to get halfway in before hitting her cervix). In reality, this experience as depicted would be at best extremely unpleasant for Leana, possibly to the point of feeling raped, going to the authorities and...game over.

Granted, ketzal is not trying to be realistic here. He is portraying a fantasy for a mostly male viewership (most guys prefer fapping to a hard, fast fuck than to slow, gentle lovemaking). So, don't take it too seriously, I guess.

 

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[User_12]

Ramvivat and Nicest_Incest are right in that young girls are physiologically capable of orgasm (and that if handled correctly, Leana could have had a good time). Ramvivat has run upon an instance where official Soviet state atheism apparently allowed the communication of facts not readily available in U.S. schools, where the amount of sex education students receive is inversely proportionate to the strength of the Religious Right in that particular state and/or community...and can run the gamut from abstinence-only with an emphasis on sexual "purity" (the onus of which falls almost entirely on girls to avoid "tempting" boys, who, through little fault of their own, may become uncontrollably rapey with lust at the sight of a well-turned ankle) all the way up to frank discussions of sexuality and gender diversity (though to my knowledge, nowhere in America do they teach about pleasure, which I believe is on the curriculum in at least some European countries).

Spoiler: The problem

The issue with the scene as presented is that with no foreplay and using only whatever wetness a 10-year-old girl might have secreted during the act of sucking daddy's cock for maybe five minutes, the MC turns her over and with no problem at all minus a bit of initial pain on her part, shoves his "giant magic cock of an AVN MC" into her pussy balls-deep and starts hard-fucking her, ramming her as she were a veteran whore. The only game I've seen where this is even more extreme (especially given the rarity of sex in games with girls this young) is the game ExperimentAI (available on this site) in which the MC is fucking FIVE-YEAR-OLD girls in a similar manner (justified in that game by being characters in a simulation). He doesn't go down on her first, he doesn't insert a finger or two to check how tight she is and prepare the way (and before the bloodhounds get started, there was no blood in the scene anyway) and he certainly doesn't spend any time (up to even several sessions) slowly training her to take bigger and bigger insertions with a set of dildos, not to mention possibly putting her on Kegel exercises. And his entire 12 inches (30 cm) or so are never going to fit into a 10 year old girl (he would be lucky to get halfway in before hitting her cervix). In reality, this experience as depicted would be at best extremely unpleasant for Leana, possibly to the point of feeling raped, going to the authorities and...game over.

Granted, ketzal is not trying to be realistic here. He is portraying a fantasy for a mostly male viewership (most guys prefer fapping to a hard, fast fuck than to slow, gentle lovemaking). So, don't take it too seriously, I guess.

I understand your vision on this scene. But I think there is something you are not taking into account. This scene is not the culmination of Leana's desire for her father, but the culmination of MC's perversion for his 10-year-old daughter. He says this a few minutes before. He just wants to use her body, to use her. For a more romantic, more tender and maybe even longer approach it will have to wait. It is up to the player to decide how he wants to treat Leana. The game puts into perspective the personality of a man corrupted and perverted by the surrounding women. It is up to the player to decide whether he will continue this "tradition" or change things. So the whole too strong, too fast thing is just the player's decision. But I understand perfectly your impression. Don't forget that the game is not over and that the player will soon have the choice (he has already chosen without knowing it), to go more tenderly with "his" girls.

 

[Nastastic]

I understand your vision on this scene. But I think there is something you are not taking into account. This scene is not the culmination of Leana's desire for her father, but the culmination of MC's perversion for his 10-year-old daughter. He says this a few minutes before. He just wants to use her body, to use her. For a more romantic, more tender and maybe even longer approach it will have to wait. It is up to the player to decide how he wants to treat Leana. The game puts into perspective the personality of a man corrupted and perverted by the surrounding women. It is up to the player to decide whether he will continue this "tradition" or change things. So the whole too strong, too fast thing is just the player's decision. But I understand perfectly your impression. Don't forget that the game is not over and that the player will soon have the choice (he has already chosen without knowing it), to go more tenderly with "his" girls.

I'll be restarting the game at some point here...and I will try following a more "love" based path as well as the more "corrupt" path. Hopefully both paths will have equal payoffs in the end, even if we have to wait a bit longer (I would like to see a sweeter and more gentle Leana defloration scene on the love path, for example...though I have no intention of NOT deflowering her at all like some readers who inexplicably want to skip the lolis and smols in a loli/smol-based game ).

 

[boblik]

in this vast world, only a few people release such beautiful games. So thank you very much, friend!

 

[Turit]

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So does that mean that the flashbacks that were supposed to be in this version will come in the next one?In SSP I mean

 

[User_12]

So does that mean that the flashbacks that were supposed to be in this version will come in the next one?In SSP I mean

Yes.

 

[Deleted member 9689]

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Edit: uhh are the images loading for you guys? they appear broken for me even though I did it correctly.
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When and where can you see Scene 12?

 

[Nicest_Incest]

I'll be restarting the game at some point here...and I will try following a more "love" based path as well as the more "corrupt" path. Hopefully both paths will have equal payoffs in the end, even if we have to wait a bit longer (I would like to see a sweeter and more gentle Leana defloration scene on the love path, for example...though I have no intention of NOT deflowering her at all like some readers who inexplicably want to skip the lolis and smols in a loli/smol-based game ).

Yeah I never could wrap my head around the people that don't want to watch sex scenes (not just lolis, gay or some other particular kink) in a porn game and then complain that updates are too small when what's left is 10 minutes of reading.

 

[Dave272]

Hey @ketzal why is Alice pure perfection?! Great job

 

[User_35004]

Hey @ketzal why is Alice pure perfection?! Great job

So true. I hope the MC doesn't get too addicted to punishing her backdoor, I'd like to see her pregnant asap ?

 

[RG80100]

Well, set apart the orgasm there is no way you can

So true. I hope the MC doesn't get too addicted to punishing her backdoor, I'd like to see her pregnant asap ?

With the number of time ou you can creampie her, it will be rapid

 

[marcomemmey]

When and where can you see Scene 12?

Right after 11.

 

[lolsis]

Ramvivat and Nicest_Incest are right in that young girls are physiologically capable of orgasm,

how do you know this and from what age is this possible? This is something I've been curious about.

 

[lolsis]

Can someone please add a gallery unlocker, for some reason whenever I relaunch this game on linux all of my scene unlocks are gone and I can't tell which scenes Ive missed.