discussion Abandoned VN Ren'Py DAZ Burned [V.03] [Deaufosse]

[Moss]

I loved the story! It had me literally laughing out loud quite a few times. I had a problem with the scene where the MC sucks the trans girl's cock because I'm not gay and the idea of doing that kind of nauseates me. Same with anal sex. Not as bad, but just doesn't appeal, and I zoom through those scenes in other AVNs. But the story and the characters are simply wonderful. The disclaimer in the beginning about the shitty writing is laughable because the writing so SO GOOD, and so much better than most other AVNs.

I agree. The writing is by far the best I’ve ever seen in porn game. And it perfectly matches the character’s ages and the times we (unfortunately) live in. Bravo Deauffousee!!!

Say no to Eden

Got it.

I think the teacher is hot! Any chance she will become someone's LI?

 

[Deaufosse]

Got it.

I think the teacher is hot! Any chance she will become someone's LI?

Oh. I never thought of that.

FYI I now have a Ko-Fi thingy.

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[2_e]

BAWAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHAHAH!!!!!!! OMG IM FUCKING DYING




My first guess was that reference was from Friends, but just judging by the caliber of that post, I decided I was clearly too dumb to get the metaphor. I started thinking it was along the lines of Theseus's ship or something Freud or BF Skinner once said. I googled it and nope! It's a Friend's reference. Noice.




Hah! I'm just a pervert that wanted a trans character in my story but didn't want her being trans to be the story. I played Apartment 69 a while back, and the trans character drove me insane because the MC's romance is based entirely on him literally being the one person who isn't treating her like human trash. And his inner monologue is all like, "I like her, she's cute, but is this gay? Omg she has a penis. Omg. Omg. Omg." Meanwhile, he's totally okay with diddling his younger sister and sleep-raping his older sister, because a man's gotta have standards.

And Eden's parents being supportive of their daughter is just funnier and more interesting than them doing the standard "NOT IN MAH HOUSE!" drama bullshit you see on television.


Do you know how they say that if you manage to sneeze with your eyes open, your eyeballs will pop out of your head? The same thing happens with your balls if you cum and laugh at the same time.

maybe because having gay sex with a boy is weird, and raping your sister is fairly normal?

 

[Moss]

maybe because having gay sex with a boy is weird, and raping your sister is fairly normal?

What was the reference again?

 

[2_e]

What was the reference again?

you know the thing

 

[gehrero]

This desperately needs some tags or better yet a longer description. This is about the least sexy game I've ever seen where I couldn't tell at all from the screenshots and the short description. Reading the thread would have spared me this experience, dev's tone in some responses here... ahem, tells me everything I need to know, but who reads a thread before trying the game?

I assume the opposite is true as well, people who like this type of content might not be interested from the vague description alone, so unless it is your main goal to antagonize people who don't like it, I would advise to make it clearer what sort of exceptional content your game contains, so that more of the actual target audience notices this game.

 

[Moss]

This desperately needs some tags or better yet a longer description. This is about the least sexy game I've ever seen where I couldn't tell at all from the screenshots and the short description. Reading the thread would have spared me this experience, dev's tone in some responses here... ahem, tells me everything I need to know, but who reads a thread before trying the game?

I assume the opposite is true as well, people who like this type of content might not be interested from the vague description alone, so unless it is your main goal to antagonize people who don't like it, I would advise to make it clearer what sort of exceptional content your game contains, so that more of the actual target audience notices this game.

This game is the best one I've seen so far. The writing is exceptional and the comedy cracks me up. Some of the scenes and renders are really outstanding, too. (The detail on some of the renders is really good. For example adding fine hair on the girls' arms makes them look much more realistic, and sexy, and not just look like 2D comic drawings.)

Burned is very different from any other game I've played. Definitely not cookie cutter at all.

Not sure how you could best convey all its features in tags. I would add "parody", "humor" for sure. Maybe something like "realistic teenage dialog and angst"? Lol. I don't know...

Keep up the great work Deaufosse!!!

 

[2_e]

This desperately needs some tags or better yet a longer description. This is about the least sexy game I've ever seen where I couldn't tell at all from the screenshots and the short description. Reading the thread would have spared me this experience, dev's tone in some responses here... ahem, tells me everything I need to know, but who reads a thread before trying the game?

I assume the opposite is true as well, people who like this type of content might not be interested from the vague description alone, so unless it is your main goal to antagonize people who don't like it, I would advise to make it clearer what sort of exceptional content your game contains, so that more of the actual target audience notices this game.

what exactly are you referring to? the shitlib cancer (which is, sadly, a decent representation of overly sexualized, demoralized, brainwashed youth in the west today - which may or may not be a parody from the dev, doubt it though), or the more psychological aspects from the car accident and his nightmares, etc.? i can look passed stuff if it makes my dick hard, tbh. the game is well done, well written (for what it is), has some surprisingly good dramatic transitions. my biggest complaint is the very cookie cutter facial expressions lol, it looks so offputting when they use this full toothy ass grin like they're posing for a bad family photo. i get they're probably stock or free facial expression packs for daz, but damn, get some grins, smirks, etc.

 

[Moss]

what exactly are you referring to? the shitlib cancer (which is, sadly, a decent representation of overly sexualized, demoralized, brainwashed youth in the west today - which may or may not be a parody from the dev, doubt it though), or the more psychological aspects from the car accident and his nightmares, etc.? i can look passed stuff if it makes my dick hard, tbh. the game is well done, well written (for what it is), has some surprisingly good dramatic transitions. my biggest complaint is the very cookie cutter facial expressions lol, it looks so offputting when they use this full toothy ass grin like they're posing for a bad family photo. i get they're probably stock or free facial expression packs for daz, but damn, get some grins, smirks, etc.

Both.
Agree.

 

[gehrero]

what exactly are you referring to? the shitlib cancer (which is, sadly, a decent representation of overly sexualized, demoralized, brainwashed youth in the west today - which may or may not be a parody from the dev, doubt it though), or the more psychological aspects from the car accident and his nightmares, etc.? i can look passed stuff if it makes my dick hard, tbh. the game is well done, well written (for what it is), has some surprisingly good dramatic transitions. my biggest complaint is the very cookie cutter facial expressions lol, it looks so offputting when they use this full toothy ass grin like they're posing for a bad family photo. i get they're probably stock or free facial expression packs for daz, but damn, get some grins, smirks, etc.

Well I don't know the game well enough to tell what should be in a description, but that seems like a good starting point. From my limited exposure, these are things that seem to be in the game and are more or less atypical of porn games: "the shitlib cancer", rape/coercion by NPCs, literally in-your-face-trans whether you want to or not, teenage angst, nightmares, "gore"/disfigurement, humor. I just wish there was an easy way to categorize humor, this isn't the first time where a lot of people enjoy the humor while my face seems to be locked in perpetual cringe.

I, too, can look passed stuff when the rest makes my dick hard, and from the screenshots I assumed this would be a game where I would have a decent dislike of some parts but could enjoy most of it. The tags I described would have probably deterred me and hopefully aid in pulling in the right target crowd.

 

[lewdwig]

... this full toothy ass grin ...

Dude, those were my most favorite bits of the game. How? ... how could you ... ?

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[2_e]

Dude, those were my most favorite bits of the game. How? ... how could you ... ?

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i guess it's just because i've seen the exact same expressions before, and they seemed creepy in that game. so they'll always seem creepy now. that kinda looks like his sister btw

 

[Deaufosse]

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[just4trash]

Is this game finished? I dont see a Completed Tag

 

[Moss]

Is this game finished? I dont see a Completed Tag

Nope

 

[Dafuking]

Thanks for the game, Amazing renders! Are you using some AI filter/processing in the smiling faces, Stable Diffusion maybe? The photorealism ramps up when the models are smiling, like in Summer Camp.

 

[2_e]

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lies! although after playing a bit more, it's so excessive and and mixed with effective humor that it's hard to take it as anything but parody, regardless of intention. i probably would have assumed it was literally a parody until the teacher went on her rant, bit too on the nose there. that aside, surprisingly good game. while batshit insane throughout it's pretty clear you have some serious talent, to an extent that i hope you're doing more with it than just making porn games (not that we mind ?)

 

[ontach]

i guess it's just because i've seen the exact same expressions before, and they seemed creepy in that game. so they'll always seem creepy now. that kinda looks like his sister btw

? Hmm... not seeing the downside here - I like creepy sisters.

 

[Jack Of Blades]

testing something

 

[Moss]

? Hmm... not seeing the downside here - I like creepy sisters.

Hope we start seeing sex scenes with the mean girls soon! Imagine what Sasha and the girl the MC couldn’t name coulbfo to them!