discussion (WIP) My First VN Project

[frozenthrone]

(WIP) My First VN Project

Hello, I'm a newbie, I start to play Adult VN game since 2017.
I love to play those adult VN game, I plays hundred of adult VN games for the past years.
Some of my favorites are Melody, The OG version of Personal Assistant, Babysitter and more.
It inspired me to make my own adult VN game, my plan is to add a small Character Sprite and map just like treasure of Nadia. It's like a sandbox were you need to grind and corrupt and blackmail the girls to unlock scenes.
I also would like to add a clock like same as project zomboid if it's possible using Renpy. Then it will change the lightings every early morning, morning, noon, afternoon, evening, night and late night. Also the corruption points and affection style would be similar to the adult VN game name The Tyrant, which the player need to grind everyday to unlock new scene. Also would love to add sex simulation for the protagonist if it's possible, and only normal sex scene for other male Characters. I'll be honest I'm still a newbie I learned using Daz like a month ago and Renpy, I mostly rely on AI for helps. I took screenshot on few of the scene while practicing to view the scenes on Nvidia.
Heres the few of the Nvdia scenes I took screenshot.
By the way I wanna name this Adult VN game as Innocent Lost, cuz it inspired me by the OG adult VN game name Innocent Lost but that game is Abandoned game now.
I know I'm very ambitious for this game but I'll keep trying.
Please I need your feedback so I can improve my lightings thank you very have a wonderful day.

 

[Paradigminant]

Visually I like what I see! Good luck and I look forward to checking it out!

 

[frozenthrone]

Visually I like what I see! Good luck and I look forward to checking it out!

Thanks man, thank you so much

 

[AllegedUnicorn]

Looks promising, and sounds like you know what you want. Some totally unsolicited advice - you've got big dreams, but start small. Pick a snippet of your story, and one feature, and implement that. See what it's like to take a project for start to finish, before you start trying to make The Next Big Thing (tm). Better to add a sequel, than throw another game on the 'abandoned' pile. Completed tags look nice.

But either way, good luck!

 

[frozenthrone]

Looks promising, and sounds like you know what you want. Some totally unsolicited advice - you've got big dreams, but start small. Pick a snippet of your story, and one feature, and implement that. See what it's like to take a project for start to finish, before you start trying to make The Next Big Thing (tm). Better to add a sequel, than throw another game on the 'abandoned' pile. Completed tags look nice.

But either way, good luck!

Thank you

 

[Hypersalt12]

It looks really nice, for feedback only thing I notice is in the first image the shadowing under the eyes is a bit jarring. Keep at it though it looks really promising!

 

[frozenthrone]

It looks really nice, for feedback only thing I notice is in the first image the shadowing under the eyes is a bit jarring. Keep at it though it looks really promising!

Thanks man, I'll try to practice more using the lightings available to improve my skills

 

[Deleted member 239443]

The pics look good! And I loved most of the games you mentioned. PA especially. Wish you the best with your project

 

[frozenthrone]

The pics look good! And I loved most of the games you mentioned. PA especially. Wish you the best with your project

Thank you

 

[tias]

Sounds hot, good luck!

 

[frozenthrone]

damn this daz characters, clothings, hairs, props, environments packed are heavy one's you add it to the daz library folder, my 118 gb was full now, and i think thats the reason why everytime i add 2-3 characters in the scene, the daz crashed. I'll get 256 gb and get back to work soon.